GLASGOW

I sit and watch the murky waters of the River Clyde slide by, polluted and dark. The wind whistles down the river under the Kingston Bridge, the traffic overhead relentlessly gridlocked. A runner passes by along the new walkway, struggling against the strong breeze.

Across the water another monstrosity of 1960’s architecture is being torn down. The scars of modernity that ruined the classic Georgian and Victorian city gradually disappearing, to be replaced by faceless glass and metal boxes.

I look along at the Broomielaw, once the heart of the world-renowned ship building industrial city, now rebranded as the International Financial District. The glass offices filled with the well off and middle class from the suburbs. With the end of the heavy industry came the end of Glasgow’s character. The hard-working, steel-faced, tough streets, now sanitised to fit in with the modern world, hiding the areas of abject poverty, sectarian hatred and failing health that remain.

I hunch my shoulders and walk into the headwind. All the familiar landmarks remain among the shifting cityscape. There is little to love in a dying city fallen from grace and power, but my whole life is here. No mean city. My city.


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© A Mixed Bag

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21 responses to “GLASGOW”

  1. That is really powerful, especially the last bit

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    1. Thanks Shehanne, trying to get across the love/hate relationship I have with the city. Not easy in a few words but I think it worked just about.

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      1. Well I’m a Dundonian and I could well get where you were coming from. That is why I enjoyed this so much.

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  2. I definitely felt the love-hate relationship coming through. It reminded me of how I feel about my small hometown, which I remember so fondly from my childhood but which has gone downhill terribly over time.

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    1. Thanks Joy. I think it’s partly that places have gone downhill, but also I feel the problems have always been there and as you get older you see and realise that more – certainly what I find with Glasgow anyway. Thanks for reading.

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      1. Good point. That’s true with my hometown too; what you see as a child is obviously so different than what you understand as an adult.

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  3. A very good view on the ever changing face of towns and cities. I think you captured it well.

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  4. Nice writing as always, enjoyed this one too.

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    1. Many thanks. More of a personal one, glad some people are still enjoying it.

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  5. The give and takes of modernity! Nice take on the prompt.. 🙂

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  6. Glasgow is my adopted city – I grew up in England – and I totally love it. But I agree some things could be done better – too many old buildings left to rot or mysteriously burn down and some very unimaginative new stuff. But I don’t think I could ever live anywhere else now!

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    1. That’s exactly the feeling I have having been born and bred here. There’s an equal amount to love and despair with, but I find it hard to imagine leaving it behind! Thanks for reading.

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  7. Very nicely captured the conflict and duality in our lives. And interesting how similar things are despite the differences.

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  8. Great take Ian. Good or bad, rich or poor parts, your city. Your home. I like it.

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  9. Lovely, Iain. I would guess a lot of us feel that way about out home towns and cities. Coating the ugliness is the glow of our memories and presence of any remaining family and friends. 🙂 — Suzanne

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    1. Exactly that Suzanne. Thanks for the comment. 🙂

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  10. I missed this originally, Iain, and love it.
    Great piece of writing, although I don’t entirely agree with your conclusions.
    Although I have abandoned it, I find it a vibrant, exciting place to visit.
    But you capture much of it superbly and succinctly.
    Gaunyersel!

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    1. I wonder perhaps if I left for a bit it would make it grow fonder in my mind. Very much a love/hate relationship, but I think that’s a common feeling for a lot of people in the places they live. Thanks CE.

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