ALL AT SEA

Archie lay on his bunk. His stomach lurched with each swell of the Atlantic Ocean beneath. He peered out from under the duvet.

Agnes stood at the table, resplendent in her best dress and velvet gloves, preparing another gin.

‘Do you think you’ll make the ball later on?’ she asked.

Archie groaned. ‘No dear. You go ahead and have fun.’

The ship lurched again. The olive in Agnes’ drink flipped out of the glass into the air. The glass slid down the slanting table. The olive plopped back into it.

Agnes picked up the glass and took a long sip. ‘Honestly, Archie. I do wish you would toughen up. There’s still two weeks before we reach the Bahamas.’

Archie turned to face the wall and pulled the duvet over his head.

Agnes tutted, turned off the cabin light and left him in darkness. She stepped out of the cabin onto the deck.

Mr. Mulligan, that charming young American who was journeying alone, walked passed and tipped his hat to her. Agnes nodded and smiled in return.

Their anniversary cruise was shaping up to be better than Agnes could possibly have hoped for.


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© A Mixed Bag

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37 responses to “ALL AT SEA”

  1. a little flirting and romance at sea! i liked this little piece. read like it could have happened sometime, somewhere to some people.

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    1. Thanks, nice to write a simpler, nicer piece every so often 🙂

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  2. Love how your sense of humour shines through. 😁

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    1. Thank you, glad you liked it 🙂

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  3. La affaire on the high seas. I immensely liked this including ‘that American…’
    Wonderful writing Liain.

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    1. Something a little lighter for a Sunday x

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  4. Nothing wrong with a bit of at sea romance

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    1. Thanks Angie, a bit of light flirting 🙂

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    2. Really, Angie, I am quite surprised at you!

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      1. What happens on a boat stays on the boat!

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  5. Infidelity on the high seas!

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    1. It all started with one gin…

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    1. Thanks Jennie, glad I gave you a smile 🙂

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      1. You are welcome! 😀

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  6. I see what you did there haha. Loved it 😀 😉

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  7. Saucy wench, that Agnes.

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    1. A harmless flirt, I think (I hope!)

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  8. Well, he does sound a bit of a bore! Nice one Iain

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    1. Maybe the sea will calm, literally and metaphorically, before the end of their cruise. Thanks Keith.

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  9. A touch of the Somerset Maugham about this, Iain.
    Nicely done.

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    1. Nice compliment, thanks.

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  10. Aww, this was so sweet and lovely! I love love stories ^_^

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  11. Not impressed with Agnes, not a nice woman at all. Her husband is so sick and she’s chasing other men. Lucky for her husband they have those patches that you can stick behind your ear now and they prevent sea sickness. I bet if Archie went to the doctor onboard he could get some and have some fun on his own 🙂

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    1. I’m not sure Agnes is serious about chasing other men, just determined to make the most of their cruise. Hopefully Archie can get back on his sea legs and join in before the end of the cruise too! Thanks Mandi 🙂

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  12. Sounds like my 13th (and last) wedding anniversary lol.

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    1. Oh dear, not a happy ending!

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      1. Divorced 8 years this year. I got the house, the kids and the cats. Happy enough for me (eventually lol)

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  13. Hmm. I do see a theme to your stories this week. Intended? Or are you just “cruising along?” (sorry. It’s pun day.) Another great take! 🙂

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    1. Not intended, just coincidence! Thank you!

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  14. Wow! Love your sense of humor

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