CULLODEN

Through hard-falling rain a bird, black from beak to tail-tip, swoops and glides, buffeted by wind that swirls around the surrounding mountains.

From the elevated height, black beady eyes see across the flat, windswept moor of the valley. In amongst the heather and wild grass the eyes see something unfamiliar.

Wings angled to ride on the air current, the bird drops through the misty clouds to join the other black-feathered dots already gathered.

Similar black, beady eyes, belonging to the Duke of Cumberland survey the battlefield. Over in less than an hour. A fine mornings work. The rain batters against his cape, large drops drip from his sodden hat.

Over the noise of pattering rain the cries of the wounded hauntingly fleet across the moor. Gratifyingly, they are the cries of the Jacobite rebels, only a handful of his army have fallen.

He shouts an order to those that can hear him: ‘This is not the time to gloat and crow in victory. This is only the beginning. You have your orders.’

Cumberland turns his mount and leaves the field, banners raised high in glory. The Kingdom and the House of Hanover saved, the Stuarts and the Catholics crushed. Faintly, he thinks he can hear the cry amongst the charge: ‘No quarter to be given.’

Cumberland allows himself a smile of satisfaction. This is the beginning of the end for the rebellion.

As he trots away, a black bird settles on the body of a fallen Highlander. After a curious look with a beady black eye, the pure black beak strikes savagely at the exposed innards, sprawling from a bayonet slash across the abdomen.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the Thursday Photo Prompt – Crow curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

The Battle of Culloden in 1745 was the last pitched battle to be fought on British soil. The defeat of Bonnie Prince Charlie and the Jacobite Army by government forces was followed by the Highland Clearances and a brutal clamping down on Scots culture and way of life, an attempt to ensure no uprising could happen again. If interested, you can read more here: Wikipedia

50 responses to “CULLODEN”

  1. A graphic depiction, Iain. I stood by Cumberland’s stone at Culloden a few months ago. It is still a desolate place.

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    1. It has been preserved exceptionally well. Not long ago a planning permission application to build houses near to the moor was blocked – and long may it stay that way as a memorial.

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      1. I agree. There is enough land that way without encroaching on ancient, sacred or important sites.

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  2. Terrific historical fiction using the prompt, Iain.

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    1. Thanks so much James, glad you liked it.

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  3. Your narrative reminded me, “To my shame, I was there.” beautifully written.

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    1. Thank you so much Bobby

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  4. I like how you included history into your response Iain, so well done.

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    1. Thank you Michael, appreciated.

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  5. You must know it well. Feels like a piece close to your heart.
    Lovely.

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    1. Thank you Michael, glad that came across. Have visited the place a few times and something that all Scots are taught about as part of our rich history.

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      1. certainly comes across mate

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  6. A no-holds-barred look at war, and what follows. Powerful stuff.

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  7. Wow. Well done, Iain. I loved the crow’s perspective on this scene, but there’s so much more layering in here than that – the similarity of the black beady eyes, the contrast of the crow’s impersonality to Cumberland’s satisfied smile, and similarities between crow and human as they stabbed at the flesh. Powerful.

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    1. Thank you so much for reading so closely and seeing all those details. Much appreciated.

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  8. Great writing in this piece Iain. The opening paragraph combines beauty with bleakness in a way that shows there’s nothing unusual about setting the two alongside each other. I’ve visited Culloden and your story reminded me of the feelings of horror and disbelief that the site conjures up. This story also complements another recent one of yours which showed tribalism and a readiness to express fear of ‘foreigners’ through violence are with us today. This was a powerful and creative take on the prompt.

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    1. Thank you so much JS, much appreciated.

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  9. Yes, what D. above said. The crow incorporated throughout the hi-story…

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  10. So atmospheric, almost romantic, which is a weird word to use considering the slaughter that’s occurred, but the opening scene painting is beautiful. Clever repeat of black beady eyes.

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    1. Thanks Sarah Ann, we probably do look back at history with romanticized eyes – at the time I’m sure this was a horrific experience for those soldiers involved.

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  11. […] I couldn’t help but link this prompt to a story I wrote only a few days ago for another prompt: CULLODEN. […]

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    1. Thank you so much for sharing this, much appreciated 🙂

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  12. Exceptional writing! I love how you used an historical event to write this beautiful, dark story. It deserves another read, right here, right now.

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    1. Thank you, high praise 🙂

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      1. A well deserved one!

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  13. Found this via Diana Peach’s reblog. Glad I did. The Scotch mist, the bleak moor, the crows all a testament to its continued echoes. Crow to begin and end. Great writing.

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    1. Thank you so much for reading and such a nice comment 🙂

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  14. There are black crows flying past my window as I read your powerful words, words both visceral and enchanting…I felt like I was there among the crows and the fallen.

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    1. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, much appreciated 🙂

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  15. Intense and extremely well written. In some horrible way, I felt I was there… Perhaps as a crow. My wish is that we can learn through history. And that humans could learn to not be so cruel.

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    1. If only that was the case, but nearly 300 years after this and we still have wars all round the world. Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🙂

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      1. But we can still hope…and still try. Many thanks for the story.

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  16. Such a meaty read Iain. Thank you for bringing that dark day to life.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind comment 🙂

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  17. Ah those crazy blackbirds, keeping our landscape clean.

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    1. Someone has to do it 🙂

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  18. You painted a vivid and brutal picture of the battle’s aftermath, Ianin. Great writing. —- Suzanne

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  19. You painted a vivid and brutal picture of the battle’s aftermath, Iain. Great writing. —- Suzanne

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  20. Please excuse the first comment, Iain. I’m sorry I misspelled your name. 😦 — Suzanne

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    1. No problem 🙂 Thank you for the kind comment.

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  21. Beautifully written with history and a look at the dark side.

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  22. Beautiful imagery and wonderful witing!! I’ll have to check out more.

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