FRUIT OF THE LOOM

His big hands would never be able to string up the intricate spindles, though she welcomed the attention of those capable hands on other occasions.

His strong legs could push the treadles faster but he adored the shapely toned thighs and calves constantly pedalling the loom gave her.

They each had their field of expertise: hers was driving the loom; his was driving the horse and plough.

His rough power, her skilful intricacy – when they came together they enhanced and complemented each other.

And now she felt that combined life in her belly: the fruit of their loom.


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Copyright Sandra Crook

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

92 responses to “FRUIT OF THE LOOM”

  1. Great take on the prompt Iain!

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  2. Dear Iain,

    The fruit of the loom and the fruit of her womb. Love the descriptions. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Loved the imagery here, Iain. A fruitful relationship indeed.

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    1. Thank you Varad 🙂

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  4. Adorable. I loved the story you fabricated.

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  5. Nice imagery. Complimentary threads coming together…

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  6. Somewhat erotic at that.

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    1. Yes, how much so is up to the reader. It’s there if you want it!

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      1. There in plenty if you look for it!

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  7. I like the way you characterise the two strands of husband and wife, and have them woven into the tapestry together with their child. And you do this while simultaneously using the loom literally as part of your story. Skilful writing!

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    1. Thank you so much Penny, such a nice comment! 🙂

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  8. I really enjoyed reading this Iain. You skillfully weaved a beautiful love story between a husband and wife and how they worked well together and complimented each other and now they are about to welcome a new addition to the family. Well done!

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    1. Thank you so much, very kind 🙂

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  9. What a sweet story, nicely done 🙂

    -Rachel

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    1. Thank you so much Rachel 🙂

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  10. An idyllic relationship. If only…!

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    1. Yes, if only it could be that straightforward! 🙂

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  11. Ever so clever, Iain!

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    1. Thank you Violet 🙂

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  12. Iain, you really nailed it with this one. Beautifully done.

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    1. Thank you Linda, much appreciated.

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  13. Lovely piece, Iain. I have to admit, the last line made me go “aww” and chuckle at the same time. Not sure it’s a global brand, but Fruit of the Loom make underwear here.

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    1. Yep a global brand, although I think they make all kinds of clothing, or at least used to, but the little joke is intentional 😉

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  14. it’s poetry in motion. your words conjure cleverly in my mind what was happening.

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  15. This feels like the beginning of a great family tale.

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  16. Wonderful piece of artistry. You are such a skillful artist with words.

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    1. Thank you so much, such a generous comment!

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  17. So, next book will have some erotica in it, eh, Iain?
    This was delicious.

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    1. I wasn’t planning to, but apparently there is a market for it…! 😉

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      1. Oh honey… lemme tell you… 😉

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  18. A very balanced and entertaining story, Iain.

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  19. This soppy stuff is becoming a habit, Iain!
    But expertly done

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    1. I must be getting softer in my old age!

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  20. Nice play on words Iain.

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  21. That’s a sweet story ending with a fun play on words. Nicely done.

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  22. It has the great intimacy of a young marriage.

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    1. Those were the days…lol

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  23. A couple made for each other. Nicely done.

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    1. Who doesn’t like a bit of romance?! 🙂

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  24. Lovely story, a couple made for each other.
    And your “fruit of the loom” was less violent than my guy’s 🙂

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    1. Thank you, yep, I went for a bit of romance this week!

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  25. Beautifully done, Ian. And I loved the title.

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  26. A beautifully told story, I really like the harmony of it. Perfect ending.

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  27. I was waiting to see who would use that title 🙂
    Lovely story.

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    1. Never look a gift horse in the mouth, that’s my motto 🙂

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  28. Such a nice scene you painted here, the reader could absorb herself into it. Lovely!

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    1. Thank you so much Gisselle 🙂

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  29. Oh this was lovely. A clever story well crafted. And a nice ending

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  30. Nice title and interpretion of what it means. Their attraction to one anotherweaves through this piece.

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  31. This is so good and I loved that little play on words at the end.

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    1. Thank you Sascha, glad you liked it 🙂

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  32. A sexy, perhaps erotic love story. Nice job.

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    1. Perhaps, just a hint 😉

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  33. You old romantic you. 🙂
    Perhaps you should read the story entitled, “How to Write How To Books” in my first book. The narrator discusses a tale called “The Wrath of Grapes.” It’s about a Fruit of the Loom (underwear) character gone bad.

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    1. I like the sound of that! 🙂

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  34. I like that take on the picture. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome, Iain. All the best. 🙂

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    A lovely pair. Just like a needle and thread.

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  36. Erotic in an earthy way. The writing itself was captivating.

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  37. This is so romantic and the way the plot all ties together is very well done.

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  38. Very good. Fantastic last line. Clever, clever.

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  39. Lovely, sensual language and imagery, Iain. Who knew ploughing and weaving could be sexy? Great writing

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  40. Clever, romantic and sensual. What a wonderful piece of writing, Iain.

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  41. A well-structured, descriptive piece. Great build-up to thr ending!

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