THE HOUSEPLANT

I can’t say I don’t deserve it, after everything I put her through, but death seems harsh.

I don’t even like the thing. I only stuck it on the bookcase because she was coming round. She insisted I keep it. She had bought it for me after all, on our first anniversary.

And I thought she was smiling because the divorce papers were finally signed.

That sympathetic peck on the cheek as she was leaving, the hand lingering on my shoulder… They take on a new meaning now.

The tentacles of the plant wrap themselves tighter. The world goes dark.


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Copyright Penny Gadd

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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84 responses to “THE HOUSEPLANT”

  1. Never trust someone who gift’s plants you never know the motive.

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    1. If only he had known your wise advice!

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  2. She gets her revenge! Well done.

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  3. I had a plant like that twisting around the room. Lol. It recently died. So I carried the whole pot outside. And it’s trying to live again!! Lolol.
    Lisa!

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    1. Keep an eye on it trying to get back inside the house!

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      1. 👀😂

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  4. I would have nightmares about that plant. It would have to be removed and dumped as far away from the house as possible . It reminds of a poisonous spider…toxic. 😦

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    1. It does have a sinister air to it! 🙂

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      1. I agree it certainly does 😀

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  5. Dear Iain,

    She wasn’t vindictive or anything was she? Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Hell hath no fury like… you know the rest 😉

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  6. I totally get where this story comes from. The way the plant is knocking the picture askew gives it a malevolent vibe.

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    1. I don’t seem to be the only one who saw the picture that way too judging from the other responses!

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  7. Yes, the photo definitely made me think along the line of Triffids. Nice one, Iain.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Or Little Shop of Horrors 🙂 Thanks Susan

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  8. I like the succinct final sentence.

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  9. Excellent suspense! Off to water my houseplants before they get any ideas! 😀

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  10. Well, my word! You must have been quite dreadful to her for her plant to commit homicide 🙂

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    1. Clearly the plant saw something that it didn’t like! Thanks Linda

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  11. The Judas Kiss.
    I like it.

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    1. You have to do these things with a bit of style.

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  12. Get rid of the plant. It’s a reminder of too much pain, unless you like that sort of thing 😉 Some do.

    On another note, what a beautifully written poem.

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  13. Of course! I would expect nothing less from you, Iain. My husband gave me a plant when we first started dating. He said, “As this grows, so will our love grow.” The plant lasted through 5 moves and 10 years…we’re still together but the plant passed away after our last move 🙂

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    1. Lucky for you Janet, you outlived the plant – who knows what it may have had in store…! 😉

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  14. Beware the gift from the scorned…
    Well done, Iain.

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    1. He should’ve guessed really! Thanks Dale

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  15. In the end she didn’t need to get divorced, sounds like she could have been a widow instead.

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    1. Maybe she is just a sadist 😉

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  16. ouuu, ouch! That one just squeezes painfully. Great story.

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  17. Iain… well told, I missed the picture being moved. I am impressed

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  18. I dunno. If she bought that for him on their *first* anniversary, she must have always had plans of getting rid of him. It may have been a good thing he put her through what he did while he had time.

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    1. Maybe she just wanted a bit of insurance in case things went wrong.

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      1. 🙂 Not very trusting…unless she intuited that he would be a man behaving badly.

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      2. Maybe best to assume that from the start and be pleasantly surprised if he turned out not to be 😉

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  19. Now, she’ll likely get the money (if he had any left) and the house. She can even save the plant for her next husband.

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    1. Called a win-win I think 🙂

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  20. What a deliciously evil story.

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  21. You can’t trust houseplant gifts, especially if they don’t have flowering habits. There is always a motive. Always.

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    1. You are very suspicious of people!

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  22. I can almost see the little Trojans hiding inside

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  23. Hell hath no fury like the plant of a woman scorned.

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  24. It’s best to get all the paperwork out of the way before knocking off your ex-other half 🙂

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    1. Keeps things nice and tidy 🙂

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  25. As soon as I saw that plant I knew something sinister was going on – so I ignored it! Nice one Iain.

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    1. Good advice – look the other way!

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  26. Sounds like a case for the Ex Files. Was her name Ivy by any chance?

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    1. It would make a classic episode now you mention it!

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  27. She doesn’t take any prisoners, does she? I wonder what he ever did.

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    1. I wonder if she has over-reacted a little! 😉

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  28. A clever take on the creepy plant! I don’t think you want to mess with her, but death does seem a bit harsh, or is it? Maybe, the plant knows best. =)

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    1. Should plants be allowed to make that choice? An ethical dilemma! 😉

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  29. The platification of the woman, he will never be rid of her.

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    1. Not the reminder he was hoping for I’m sure.

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  30. My goodness, you should not have divorced the woman in green.

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    1. She doesn’t like to be betrayed it seems! Thanks James.

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  31. a ill-intentioned gift… She did indeed have plans for him beyond divorce papers…

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    1. I wonder if she has had plans like these before, perhaps with other ex-husbands!

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  32. Sneaky, vindictive woman. I bet she squeezed everything out of him in the divorce as well.

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  33. he should have gotten rid of it before it was too late.

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    1. It seems he didn’t suspect anything like this happening!

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  34. A shiver down the spine story, never trust a creeping plant. Well done.

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  35. They should have been more careful! She had a mission!

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    1. Thanks Lisa – I guess in hindsight he will be thinking that! 🙂

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  36. She is not there, but her memory is stil survives through the plant. May be you should have let her take the plant with her.

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    1. Perhaps she will still end up with the plant too!

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  37. Ouch. Talk about an vindictive ex.

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  38. Little Bookcase of Horrors! Creepy divorcee payback!

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  39. Your plant is much scarier than mine, Iain. This sounds like one of the old “Twilight Zone” shows . This one is deadly. I wonder if it will go on to kill again. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne

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    1. I think it will depend on her, and if she wants it to kill again!

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