THE LAST SHOP

Herbert let the final customer out, a lady all the way from Missouri who bought a purple coat.

He closed the store for the last time.

He had expected more ceremony. Only one journalist had come to bear witness.

Since Ancient Greece there had been shops – physical places with goods to sell. 5th Avenue, Oxford Street, the Champs-Élysées: these were the shopping meccas.

Bloomingdale’s on Michigan Avenue was the last in the world to go.

Shopping was now done solely in front of a screens.

Herbert would be back on Monday morning to open Bloomingdale’s new flagship Order Fulfillment Centre.


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Copyright Marie Gail Stratford

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

120 responses to “THE LAST SHOP”

  1. This feels like impending fact rather than fiction! Well done.

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    1. Maybe not in our lifetime but I agree.

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  2. One temple closes, another opens

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    1. The modern day religion is moving with the times too.

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  3. U shut down Bloomingdales. Iain, how could you!!!!

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    1. I’m so sorry Sheena! 🙂

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  4. I think they are already feeling the pinch. I think writing with a pen will become a thing of the past but I hope shops survive.

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    1. Already there are type to text software around. Maybe in the future we might have thought to text software. Writing will be a thing of the past.

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      1. Certainly I think physical writing will become so. Thought to text – that could be a bit dangerous if you couldn’t keep your thoughts where they should be.

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    2. Not the pen! Never! Thanks Irene 🙂

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  5. Well, it’s just evolution. The hypermarkets came in and closed the mom and pop stores and all the other quaint little stores one could find in a market place. This is just the next step. Well written, Iain.

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    1. I do hope not, but we’ll see. Thanks.

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  6. I much prefer to shop in a real shop, I will be sad when the inevitable happens

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    1. Hopefully not inevitable!

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  7. I’d hate to miss out on all the fun of real shopping.
    What a wonderfully imaginative take on the prompt!

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    1. Thanks Moon, I think there are enough like you that this won’t become a reality.

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  8. Please don’t tell me Poundland’s closing!

    Click to read my FriFic!

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    1. Dear Keith, this comment made me burst out laughing 🙂

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  9. Dear Iain,

    A sad, all too realistic fiction. We shop in front of a screen and avoid human interaction. And the lady from Missouri (who incidentally, does own a purple coat 😉 ) is as guilty as the next person. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. I thought you might make the effort if there was a purple garment available! Thanks Rochelle.

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  10. Since we moved out into the sticks, most of my shopping is done on-line. Your story has a more than prophetic aspect to it, Iain, but I like his resourcefulness.

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    1. That rare person who is happy to just roll with the times. Thanks Sandra.

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  11. Seems inevitable that all brick-and-mortar shops will close one day. I like Herbert’s pragmatic approach. Life/business goes on. Nice take on the prompt!

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    1. Some things have to be accepted. Thank you.

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  12. It’s all ten-buck-an-hour box movers and drones. We’ll miss the old days until VR catches up.

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    1. The thought of employment in these sort of places is grim.

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  13. Since I’ve always disliked shopping, I don’t mind doing it online. However, it is very sad to see wonderful buildings and businesses collapse. We live near Philadelphia, famous for Wanamaker’s, among several others. It no longer exists. I think Macy’s bought it, but somehow it’s just not the same.

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    1. Always sad to see some of the places that have been institutions disappear.

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  14. Will it ever come to pass? I can’t believe that one day there won’t be a chicken shop somewhere in the world. Great idea, and nicely executed.

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    1. I have a feeling it will never go to this extreme, although the number of shops will reduce in the future. Thanks Claire.

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  15. And yet Amazon has recently opened some brick and mortar stores….

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  16. Hey, to all of you prophets of doom who are forecasting the death of the shop, there’s also been the resurgence in the local market, at least here in Australia. We have local general markets and Farmers’ Markets. We also have loads of small businesses. You might not be aware but Starbucks was a dismal failure here because people preferred their intimate local cafe. Where I live, we also still have what has become a rare breed…an independent bookshop. I always like to touch and feel what I buy and prefer a relationship with the seller as well. Some personal interaction.
    Lastly, you will have to kill me before I give up my pen. It works very well alongside my laptop and is much more portable and can fire up immediately to capture my racing thoughts while the laptop is still trying to wake up.
    xx Rowena

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    1. I’m with you. Pen and paper will survive. As for shops, it would be nice if more of the smaller local ones could flourish. We shall see.

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      1. We’ve seen a bit of a small scale revival of the small shops here. I also live in a beach community 1.10 hours train ride from the heart of Sydney and is considered part of Greater Sydney. I struggle with crowds and huge shopping complexes so prefer our local shops especially at Christmas time. Most of my family gets books or something I’ve salvaged from the op shop. It’s my husband’s birthday and I managed to find him a knight and you open his sleaves up and there are shot glasses and his stomach concealed a whisky flask. That was a great find just down the street and he’s very difficult to buy for. Actually, the knight would make a great FF photoprompt. It’s a torso and is made of some kind of silver bronze and has a proper helmet and everything. My husband loves King Arthur.

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  17. Oh, the lure of armchair shopping and next day delivery! Great story, Iain!

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    1. It does make things easier and convenient… Thank you Edith.

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  18. Wow. So who was that lucky purple coated person to be the last shopper in a real Brick and Mortar store? 😉

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  19. You paint a dismal picture for those of us who want to touch the things we’ll wear before we buy them. Or prefer a few moments face-to-face with a cashier to the indifferent automated voice instructing us through self-checkout. On the other hand, just think, all those social misfits hiding in their cellars, living life vicariously through RPGs and social media, will have fewer reasons to venture out into the real world to mess it up for the rest of us.

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    1. Every cloud has a silver lining! Thanks Sue 🙂

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  20. It’s an interesting thought, but I wonder if brick and mortar stores will ever completely go away. True, we buy many things online, but I still imagine if you want to purchase a car or motorcycle, you’ll want to actually kick the tires, so to speak.

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    1. I think there will always be some sort of physical shop, just depends how many and what they will offer.

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  21. This is our future. Good one Iain

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    I am less pessimistic, I believe that new uses for many shops will appear. At the moment it is coffee and charity shops. Hopefully in time New artisans will redevelop our High St shops. So that we authors can tell their tales.

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    1. I agree, something will always be there even if not the shops as we know them just now.

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  23. A sadly realistic prediction. Excellent story!

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  24. I looked to see if you’d classified this as ‘Dystopian fiction’…!
    You’ve chosen some good details to draw us into the story – the purple coat, shops in Ancient Greece, only a single journalist; all these brought with them collateral images that made the story so much richer. Well written.

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    1. Thank you so much Penny, so kind.

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  25. I wonder how it will look.. but I see Bloomingdale showroom and pickup center more than it disappearing,

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    1. I’m sure it won’t come to this, as you say, there will be something there even if it’s not the traditional shops of the past.

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  26. This is a bit to close for comfort, Iain. I would miss the joy of “real” shopping.

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    1. Me too, especially at Christmas – hopefully it stays as fiction.

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  27. Well, at least poor Herbert isn’t out of a job! For those of us working in retail, this is definitely a Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come moment. Nicely done, Iain

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    1. Thanks Lynn – hopefully it’s a long way off yet.

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      1. Or I need to find myself a new career 🙂

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      2. There’s always your writing career 😉

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      3. Haha! Yes, wouldn’t that be nice? One day, perhaps, though I suspect making enough money out of it to live might be an issue 🙂

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  28. Happy to say I’ve done a mix of face-to-face and online shopping today, but I fear the prophecy in your story might come true. It’s timely too, with news coming out today that the Mary Portas project to revive town centre retail doesn’t seem to have succeeded.

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  29. Now that I’m a “woman of a certain age” I do most of my shopping online. Eddie Bauer, Land’s End…. No dressing up for me – until I make a trip to the symphony, then I wear a skirt. Nicely done, Iain

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    You developed a real sense of loss and acceptance in this.

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  31. What comes around . . . goes around. I remember Walmart coming to town and putting all the little shops out of business. Now . . . here coming Amazon putting big stores out of business. . . . Wonder what is going to put Amazon out of business ??

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    1. There’s always a bigger fish… Thanks Mike.

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  32. Well, you still need to try on that outfit before you plop down a hundred bucks – so I don’t think this will happen – hopefully!

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    1. I’m with you, but I think the younger generation think differently. We shall see!

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  33. Neat take, Iain. I don’t know if this is good news or bad.
    Personally I would miss ambling round the corner for my fresh baguette each morning.

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    1. If anything I hope it is the small local grocers and bakers that survive while the bigger corporate shops are replaced by online shopping. I could see that happening.

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  34. And the world moves on. There are still things I like to see “in the flesh” before buying. Good story!

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  35. Ahhhh the shape of the future. Not a great one but change is inevitable

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    1. Change is inevitable, but no one likes it that much 🙂

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  36. Ah, the evolution of retail. I order some things online, but when it comes to shoes, I really must try them on.

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    1. I think there will always be that demand for ‘actual’ shopping. To what scale remains to be seen.

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  37. Ach, but I fear that day is coming all too soon. too soon. Great writing this week!

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    1. Thank you! I do hope not.

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  38. A timely piece, lain. It seems brick and mortar stores will be a thing of the past one day. Convenience seems to be the reason. Changes they are a coming. Who knows when it will be completely on-line shopping but it seems to be peeking right behind our shoulders. Nicely done ….
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Thank you Isadora 🙂

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  39. Oh, clever story! And it could happen one day.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Quite possibly. Thank you Susan.

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  40. Things are changing and we are loosing our “shopping meccas”. Sigh!
    Interesting take on the prompt Iain. 🙂

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  41. I do my bit of internet shopping, but usually after I’ve trawled the shops first.

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    1. There’s a balance to be struck. Thanks Liz.

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  42. It so feels like a possibility. I like to think we’ll always have a mix of the two – on-line for those items that are not accessible and still have the stores for us to amble in and interact with people. Though there are those who will forever abandon that, sadly.

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    1. People, who needs people to interact with? Can’t I just snapchat them?! Thanks Dale 😉

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      1. Riiiight….

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  43. I don’t know. When it comes to some merchandise, there can be no substitute for the squeeze test. Bloomingdale’s still has hope.

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  44. A soon to be scene! This was really very well done Iain

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  45. This isn’t far enough, I don’t think.

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    1. Possibly not, thank you

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      1. “not far away enough” I meant to say, as in the high street in disappearing too quickly. Sorry if my original comment didnt make sense!

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  46. Well done and far too realistic. I hope it never comes to this!

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    1. Perhaps not in our lifetime at least. Thank you.

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  47. Urggh I can totally see this happening.

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    1. Hopefully not, most of the comments don’t seem in favour of it, but then we are no longer the youthful generation!

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  48. Sadness in the end, but no end, no sadness. Not really. That Fulfillment Centre sounds as though it might be an empty place, Iain!

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  49. So sad, the ending of an era. I imagine Herbert will not be as satisfied in his new job 😦

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    1. I think he will miss connecting with the customers for sure. Thanks Sarah Ann.

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