TAKE ME OUT TO THE BALL GAME

First game back.

I stick to the same routine. A drink in Craft & Draft beforehand. All the old guys are there, arguing about the roster for the season ahead. They don’t fancy our chances.

Walk the same route and in Gate 42, our superstition even though it never guaranteed a win. Take our usual seats, surrounded by the familiar faces. Sympathetic glances cast my way.

A KC-style hot dog, with all the extras, a couple of beers at the top of the fifth.

What d’ya know? – we won it in with a homer in the ninth, 4-3.

I sit after everyone else had left. It ain’t the same without you, Dad.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

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This April, I’m off to the 9th Self-Publishing Conference, where I’ve been invited as a guest speaker to talk about my various writing experiences, and how to sell your books. Looking forward to meeting other writers and publishers there.

63 responses to “TAKE ME OUT TO THE BALL GAME”

  1. Events and places become so strongly associated with the people in our lives, don’t they?

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    1. They certainly do. Thanks Neil

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  2. That’s a real tough one, the first time you resume a standard routine without that special someone.

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    1. Yes, it’s those familiar things that become the hardest

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  3. Dear Iain,

    I could smell the hot dogs. In 1985 our Royals won the World Series. My dad, who was a huge fan, passed away exactly 1 year before the win. It was a bittersweet moment…and not the same without him. Love your story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks Rochelle, over here it’s football (soccer) that fills that role of father-offspring bonding, but the feelings are the same – early memories of going to the game or kicking a ball around the park. Glad you liked the story and it brought back those memories for you.

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  4. No words, you said them all. 😢

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  5. This story leaves me with a strong sense of both grief and pleasure. Grief for the loss, pleasure in the memories. Well done. And congrats on your well-deserved recognition 🙂

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    1. Thank you Linda, on all counts 🙂

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  6. Nice. I am so waiting for the season to start. My mom and I used to have conversations about the games (she was 97 so didn’t go) but we’d talk on the phone a lot about the Giants. I’m going to miss that too.

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    1. It’s one of the few things we can all share as a collective experience, and all the more important because of it. Enjoy the season when it comes!

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  7. What a great story. I love the commaroderie at the ballpark. I’m glad you mentioned the superstitions too. I always keep my “Rally cap” handy in case my team falls behind.

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    1. Thanks Russell, pleased that all came across to a baseball fan 🙂

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  8. I took your title, but then I didn’t realize it until after I posted my wee tale. Yours is sad but in a way, so is mine.

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    1. Thanks James, the title was an easy one this week!

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  9. Dad would have loved it. A delightful tale, Iain.

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  10. Perfect balance, Iain, keeping the traditions matters, even when they are forced by circumstances to change. Bertie would agree.

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  11. I definitely detected a lack of exuberance that these places usually generate in people. If this is non-fiction, let me offer my condolences, Iain.

    Also congratulations on what looks like you being a speaker at a conference.

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    1. Purely fiction in this instance, but thank you!

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      1. You’re very welcome and I’m glad.

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  12. Oh, this struck a cord. Well done.

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  13. Oh my…this got me in the feels.

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  14. Congrats, Iain. Excellent take.

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  15. Beautifully written, Iain. You really got into the prompt and took us with you. I’ve been to a couple of Aussie Rules games watching the Sydney Swans play and the atmosphere was electric but I didn’t really understand the game or have any connection with it, while my husband grew up with it and all the banter about who supports which team and why and his dad had played for King Island, which is off the Tasmanian coast. All that history and cultural/community connection really transforms the game.
    Congratulations on your speaking gig. I keep thinking about buying one of your books and but its easier to resist online. I have way too many books and keep picking them up from those little libraries which have sprung up around the place.
    I am curious about your script writing experience. Have you read Graeme Simsion’s “The Rosie Project”? He started writing it as a script and adapted it to a novel. He’s recently published a book called “The Novel Project”. I have been aspiring to write a book for years but it hasn’t gained traction but I’ve come up with a character recently and I thought he’d at least make a good short story. So I’m now reading the Novel Project. He is very structured and argues that it’s virtually impossible to write a novel as a panser, which might explain my difficulties. So I’m interested to see where this ends up.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Yes, I would agree, even if the plan only exists in your mind, you have to know where the story is going before you start writing it. I’ll need to look out for it.

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      1. Thanks for the encouragement on the planning front and I think this could explain my struggles.
        Keep an eye out for Graeme Simsion. He’s a very good writing. His first book, The Rosie Project was written entirely in the first person as a person with Asperger’s and he truly nails it. That made me question whether he was on the spectrum and indeed whether he was Don. I went to an author dinner where he was speaking and I watched him like a hawk trying to suss him out and wrote the following post:
        about becoming an author: https://beyondtheflow.wordpress.com/2014/10/25/how-to-make-it-as-an-author/
        He’s an interesting guy. Keep an eye out.
        Best wishes,
        Rowena

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    2. Hope you get a chance to have a look at one of my books in the future, would be great to hear what you think of them!

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  16. Lost My Dad a year ago, and I totally get this, although he was more of a cricket man! Looking to see if I can get the weekend off to come to the self publishing conference,

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    1. Thanks, yes, it was football for me with the father-in-law. If you do get to the conference do let me know, would be great to meet in person!

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      1. I will do definitely, sometimes work gets in the way and you need someone to point you in the right direction, which I think I need!

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  17. A sweet story. Memories are treasures.

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  18. Touching story with an apt title.
    Usually, parents take kids out.
    Who will take when parent is no more?…
    All the regular watchers know this boy & give him sympathetic looks.

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  19. That last line gave me a chill. Baseball was my biggest bonding experience with my dad. We were Giants fans. They won their first World Series for the first time in 56 years in 2010. He died at 55 in 2009.

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    1. Oh man, that’s heartbreaking. Impossible not to think it was somehow fate was playing a hand there.

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  20. Oh this is both happy and sad. Great twist to our emotions with this lovely memory, Iain.

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  21. It is often the little things that remind us

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    1. Yes, the small details.

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  22. A wonderful story, Iain. But you broke my heart at the end.

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    1. The best stories should have a little heartbreak in them. Thanks Bill.

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      1. You’re welcome, Iain.

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  23. Sad but sweet. How tough to continue on when others are no longer here.

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    1. Yes, it’s a part of being human that is difficult to deal with.

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  24. A very touching story. I hope the pain of loss subsides, and he is able to remember with fondness. Lovely, Iain!

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    1. Thanks Brenda, I’m sure he will keep going and learn to enjoy it again.

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  25. a win and a feeling of loss at the same time. what a bummer.

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    1. I think in the end he will embrace the bittersweet win.

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  26. Love this! It will never be the same but all those memories live on. Nice one.

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