IAIN KELLY

CRYONICS

The Director of the Institute walked Peter along an endless sterile corridor.

‘So, Mr. Franks, when you choose your time to arrive here, you’ll get a secure shuttered unit assigned to you.’ The Director informed him.

‘So behind each of these shutters…?’ Peter tailed off.

The Director smiled. ‘Yes, behind each of these doors there is a person hung in suspension until their specified re-animation date.’

‘Do they feel anything?’

‘Not a thing. It’s a very deep sleep, that’s all.’

‘And when they are re-animated to continue their life?’

The Director paused. ‘Well, that’s a bit of an unknown at the moment,’ he mumbled. ‘Moving on.’ He smiled and strode away.

Peter stood staring after him.


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© Amy Reese

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above, thanks to Sandra for the photo this week).

For more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

41 responses to “CRYONICS”

  1. Esme upon the Cloud Avatar

    Hahahaha. Sounds about right.

    – esme upon the Cloud

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  2. creatingahome Avatar

    That’s a dangerous gamble with people’s lives.

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  3. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    The scientific experiment untested. Good job. Very intriguing and a bit frightening!

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Sounds like selling a scam actually.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think he could well be 🙂

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  5. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oooooooo the future is zombies… This is good. Though I’m suspicious of the manager….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m not sure I would trust him with my life… 🙂 thanks for reading.

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  6. Yinglan Avatar

    And he chooses that over peaceful death, that’s a dangerous choice. I would get out of there. Nicely told.

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  7. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Not knowing when these suspended people will wake up. Seems a bit ifey to me. That’s key information lol. Nice write.

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  8. Dahlia Avatar

    That would be my concern too!

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  9. draliman Avatar

    Yeah, “a bit of an unknown” indeed 🙂

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  10. Michael Wynn Avatar

    The ever open promise of cryogenics. Mr Franks sounds a bit gullible.

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  11. lingeringvisions by Dawn Avatar

    This gives “hanging out” a whole new meaning.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha 🙂 indeed!

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  12. shehannemoore Avatar

    RIght…. I am so NOT going in that unit!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Maybe after they’ve tested it out on a few volunteers first 🙂

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      1. shehannemoore Avatar

        YES……………

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  13. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    It is a bit like selling snake oil. Nice take.

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  14. hafong Avatar

    I would not sign up!

    Lily

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  15. HonieBriggs Avatar

    Excellent! I’m opting out of that program.

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  16. The Writer's Village Avatar

    Seems like most salesmen commenting that we should be moving on when hitting a small snag in their presentation.
    Randy

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, exactly 🙂

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  17. Amy Reese Avatar

    Floating sounds nice, but they got to get the waking up part fixed! They can’t screw that up. Nicely told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Amy, and thanks for the great prompt 🙂

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  18. Sonny Price Avatar

    Hehe, “bit of an unknown”, the good Director doesn’t exactly inspire confidence. 🙂 Great story Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sonny 🙂

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  19. neilmacdon Avatar

    The scary thing is that there really are companies offering essentially this service

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  20. Life Lessons of a Dog Lover Avatar
    Life Lessons of a Dog Lover

    Your phrase “hung in suspension” gave me the creeps. Nice scary story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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  21. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    I think I’d be backing out of the building and then running to my car. Imaginative story, though. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think so, second thoughts definitely! Thanks Rochelle.

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  22. Carol Cameleon Avatar

    I don’t normally ‘do’ what I would describe as sci-fi but the atmosphere and uncertaintly in this makes me want to read more!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Carol, glad you liked it.

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  23. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    This is great, gave me a good chuckle. Don’t ask me questions and I tell you no lies.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, glad you got a chuckle from it 🙂

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  24. patriciaruthsusan Avatar

    That guy sounds like he should be selling snake oil off the back of a wagon. Who knows how you’d come back. I think I’d stop and stare also. Then I’d run not walk to the parking lot. Good writing, Iain. 🙂 — Suzanne

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Suzanne. I get the feeling he won’t go through with it after all, but I’m sure there are some people who would! 🙂

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  25. ahtdoucette Avatar

    Creepy. I’m feeling a zombie apocalypse scenario here! Fun story, well written. I would love to see more.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anne – who knows what they will be like when they are woken up! 🙂

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  26. aliciajamtaas Avatar

    Sound a bit “iffy” to me, and I like it that way. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks 🙂

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