IAIN KELLY

REBUILDING

The new Buckingham Palace looked exactly like the old one had from the air. The last remnants of the construction site had almost gone, only a large fence remained, to be removed before the official opening next week.

The pilot brought the Boeing 787 Dreamliner round in another long circle over the city as he waited for clearance to land. The Mall was still closed off, Green Park and St. James’s Park remained eerily empty. This was his first flight here since the day the old palace had been destroyed.

He thought back to the large crowds that had spread out as far as he could see below him that day. They cheered and celebrated as King William had been crowned.

He remembered the flash and fireball emanating from the palace, spreading like a wave, engulfing the thousands of individual specks, before the roar of the explosion reached him through the sky. He remembered having to correct the plane as it was hit by the turbulence, minor at that distance. His was the last plane to land before the airspace was shut down. He was in the sky long enough to glimpse through the smoke and flames and see the black hole were the palace had once stood.

Next week the monarch would be able to take up residence in the centre of London again. He banked once more and began his descent into the airport.


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© A Mixed Bag

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24 responses to “REBUILDING”

  1. my frilly freudian slip Avatar

    Wow — powerful writing — I’m on that Dreamliner.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, not sure where it came from but glad you liked it.

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      1. my frilly freudian slip Avatar

        The best stories can happen that way!

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  2. Steve Lakey Avatar

    Dramatic stuff!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Steve

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  3. Joy Pixley Avatar

    A chilling vision — let’s hope it’s not prophetic. (shiver!)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I certainly hope not. Thanks Joy.

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  4. TanGental Avatar

    there’s a twist to your mind that is quite addictive…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, I think… 🙂

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  5. shehannemoore Avatar

    Very nice as always Iain, Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Shehanne, as always 😉

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  6. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    That’s pretty explosive. I love it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks very much 🙂

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  7. huldermn Avatar

    Nicely done! Can’t wait to read what happens next (because it can’t just stop there– 😉 )!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      To be continued… Thanks for reading 🙂

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  8. angietrafford Avatar

    Very clever story… It is the bonfire plot all over again!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Hadn’t linked it to that, but that definitely works. Thanks Angie 🙂

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  9. ceayr Avatar

    Oh heck, I thought for a while there was going to be a happy ending.
    Ah well…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I thought you might say that – there’s nothing to say the new one will last either… 🙂

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  10. Courtney Wright Avatar

    Someone had a devious plan… wonder if it will work out?? Great story! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Courtney 🙂

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  11. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Wow that would be terrible. What an awful act of terrorism? The king survived that’s good.

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  12. sailajaP14 Avatar

    I love the twist! Great piece. 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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