IAIN KELLY

LOCKSLEY

The priest held the heavy wooden chest tightly as the carriage bumped along the path. The coachman whipped the horses, travelling at breakneck speed.

They emerged from the forest and the pace relaxed. Out from the cover of the trees, no-one would dare ambush them now. The wheels rattled as they ran over the cobbled stones onto the bridge that led into the fort.

Just as the priest began to relax there was a jolt, an anguished cry from the horses, and the coach slammed into the side of the bridge before coming to a halt. Still clinging to the chest, the priest looked up.

‘Good evening to you, Father.’ The man wearing a hood said. ‘I don’t think the congregation will be happy that their hard earned offerings are going straight into the Sheriff’s coffers, do you?’

The priest gulped. The man took the chest from him.

‘You can tell the Sheriff that it was his old friend, Locksley of the Hood.’

With that he was gone and there was only silence on the bridge.


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© Joy Pixley

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story, in around 150 words based on the weekly photo prompt. For more information visit HERE.

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37 responses to “LOCKSLEY”

  1. shehannemoore Avatar

    Nice turn round Iain. Always liked Locksley of the hood .

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Shehanne, same here, worthy of a longer story but this will do for now!

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  2. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Amazing story! I love Robin Hood!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, didn’t think he would still be so popular, but glad others like it too 🙂

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  3. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    A brilliant take. Most of us like Robin Hood.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks, it seems so 🙂

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  4. Joyfrida Avatar

    Loved the medieval take on the prompt. Really nice.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy, nice to try something a bit different 🙂

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  5. writercookie Avatar

    I really enjoyed your story. Great writing 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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  6. sailajaP14 Avatar

    A very interesting piece that makes you want more! A great take on the prompt.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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  7. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Great story, Iain! Loved the story and the tension build-up!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks PJ 🙂

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  8. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Great take on the photo, Iain — I always love a good Robin Hood tale! Take that, crooked priest!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, thanks Joy, glad you enjoyed 🙂

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  9. Shivangi Avatar

    Descriptions are so vivid… As if we are watching a film! Great take on the prompt Iain! And we all love Robin Hood!

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  10. swritings Avatar

    Yes! I love Robin Hood! Great tale! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I had no idea he would be so popular! Many thanks 🙂

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Skillfully done! Really enjoyed reading it

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith 🙂

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  12. Dahlia Avatar

    Always love a champion of the underdogs! Thanks for the read 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dahlia 🙂

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  13. creatingahome Avatar

    Oh I loved this very much.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you very much 🙂

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  14. Cattie's World Avatar

    Wow Cowboy style!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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  15. Singledust Avatar

    suspenseful ride across the bridge. like the justice served at the end!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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  16. luckyjc007 Avatar

    Thievery is not good, but in this case, exception to the rule is great! Love your take on the Robin Hood tale. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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  17. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Love the Robinhood take! So fun!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Mandi 🙂

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  18. Ellespeth Avatar

    Well done! A perfect tale to read aloud.
    Ellespeth

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Ellespeth 🙂

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  19. jacquelineobyikocha Avatar

    That was a perfect tale. I could imagine the priest gulp 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks 🙂

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