IAIN KELLY

YEAR OF THE FIRE ROOSTER


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ยฉ Singledust

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story, in around 150 words based on the weekly photo prompt. For more information visit HERE.

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55 responses to “YEAR OF THE FIRE ROOSTER”

  1. Singledust Avatar

    This was very clever and I must say you added such local flavour to it, like you were here in 1957 on Jonker Street and watched the kongsi’s fight for power. It was called Hereen Street back when my grandma lived here, all houses had a well in the middle. Fire Rooster! You did your research well Iain – I am impressed. No its not a good year for the roosters especially earth and wood roosters but its a good year for those born in the year of the rat and ox! I will let you figure that one out. Love the take on this. Befitting that PJ uses this photo as the Lunar New Year is this weekend.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for the comment and the prompt photo. Glad my research was good enough to make the story believable and you got the atmosphere I was looking for. Only sorry it wasn’t a happier tale to celebrate the new year with, maybe I’ll try and do a happier one before the weekend! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Singledust Avatar

        you did it nicely! the new year is loud and boisterous not necessarily happy as family ties get tested around this time but yes a happy tale would be appreciated as well!

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  2. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Great story. I got a very vivid sense of the scene.

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  3. Jade M. Wong Avatar

    Oh god, what was upstairs Iain, dare I ask?

    That cliffhanger aside, I enjoyed your take on the photo. I liked that you made it into a crime scene, and the details were spot on! Fire Rooster reference was a nice touch .

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jade. I leave it to you as to what might be upstairs, although there’s a clue earlier with reference to his family…

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      1. Jade M. Wong Avatar

        No…don’t tell me…the three daughters…oh my goodness Iain. I’m stunned.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        I’m afraid it’s looking that way… Next story I will try to make a lighter one ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Oh my! After reading that I’m afraid to go upstairs! Great story Iain, very chilling!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks PJ. Apologies for not having a happy new year story ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        No apologies needed. That story was great! I like good horror stories.

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  5. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    Looks like revenge for bad mouthing . Nicely crafted.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, could be a motive definitely ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. neelwritesblog Avatar

    Now that’s not a very good start to the new year. But then what is? Good work Lian.

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  7. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    I am not a reader of crime stories, but I was impressed by the detail and back story – and fearful for his family. Great writing Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael, I love a good crime read, although I don’t write too many crime stories, but I decided to head in that direction with this one. Thanks for reading.

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  8. Lynn Love Avatar
    Lynn Love

    Well, that’s a cracking opening to a crime novel – suitably gruesome and mysterious. Vivid descriptions and well paced – you held us right in the palm of your hand there, Iain. Very well done

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A very satisfying comment, thanks Lynn ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        Total pleasure ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. James Avatar

    I think you like to write short crime dramas.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks James, it is quite satisfying ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Such great atmosphere here, and suspenseful too! Great job doing your homework on the cultural significance of the various clues. And I’m with the others — I’m scared to see what’s upstairs. What’s downstairs is bad enough!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy, glad you liked it. I won’t reveal what is upstairs! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Joy Pixley Avatar

        Please, don’t! Although maybe you should. It almost couldn’t be as bad as what I might imagine. Or maybe it would be. (shiver) I’m going back to “please don’t.”

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  11. LaRonda Moore Avatar

    I love your take on this prompt. Awesome!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks LaRonda ๐Ÿ™‚

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  12. luckyjc007 Avatar

    Gruesome! Great descriptions fill our minds with the scene. Hopefully, this terrible crime will be solved. Great suspense story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks. I have faith that Samson is a good fiction detective who will get his man.

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  13. Ameena k.g Avatar

    I have a feeling I would NOT want to see whatever is upstairs ๐Ÿ˜„. Love the suspense and the cliff hanger ending.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, I don’t think I want to write what they find up there either! Thanks, much appreciated.

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  14. Loretta Avatar

    Good story; even better cliffhanger!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Loretta, much appreciated.

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  15. afairymind Avatar

    A wonderfully suspenseful story, Iain, packed full of detail. I shudder to think what might be upstairs. Really well done. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, glad you liked it ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. Ellespeth Avatar

    OMG! I thought I’d read this on my way to prepare supper Bad idea….beef tonight.
    Expertly done piece of flash, Iaian.
    Best,
    Ellespeth

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    1. Ellespeth Avatar

      flubbed up your name again ๐Ÿ˜› My apoloigies.
      Ellespeth

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    2. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, hope supper wasn’t ruined! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  17. samanthamacmaster Avatar

    well, I am curious to know what is upstairs….. Intriguing!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Samantha, I’m not sure we want to find out…!

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  18. akaushiva Avatar

    This was brutal. Great write!

    Aditi

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, a bit grim I admit.

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  19. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Frightening take and as many say above, not a good start the the Chinese New Year. I liked learning you researched this, about some kind of turf war, being the motive for this guy’s death, nitro mention he’s a rooster and that’s unlucky. The detail of the roosters head in his mouth was particularly gross and finding about the daughters and upstairs . . . Well done, I’m feeling a “Girl With The Dragon Tattoo” vibe here, gruesome scenes and fascinating.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Mandi, I’ll settle for something half as good as The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  20. magarisa Avatar

    I can’t get the colour red out of my mind after reading your story (that’s a good thing, I think ;-)). Excellent crime story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      So long as your not born in the year of the Fire Rooster I think red is a good colour! Thanks very much ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. magarisa Avatar

        Fortunately, I wasn’t. โ˜บ You’re welcome, Iain.

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  21. milliethom Avatar

    This is a great story. The smart, snappy style fits the crime scene and investigating officers so well. Great use of colour – not to mention the use you made of your research into the Year of the Fire Rooster. The cliffhanger leaves me with thoughts of an even more gruesome scene upstairs.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for a lovely comment Millie, brightened my morning ๐Ÿ™‚

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  22. jacquelineobyikocha Avatar

    That’s a tight story. Well written and filled with suspense. Now I want to know more.

    Would you be interested in my highlighting your book on my Authorzone series? Just let me know what you think.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jacqueline. It would be a pleasure to have my book highlighted. Let me know if you need me to do anything.

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      1. jacquelineobyikocha Avatar

        Great. If possible send me a brief write-up or a readers review on it with the link that would lead others to Amazon where they can purchase it. My email is Jacquelineobyikocha@gmail.com

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        No problem, I will get that to you at some point this week ๐Ÿ™‚

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