IAIN KELLY

ALL AT SEA

Archie lay on his bunk. His stomach lurched with each swell of the Atlantic Ocean beneath. He peered out from under the duvet.

Agnes stood at the table, resplendent in her best dress and velvet gloves, preparing another gin.

‘Do you think you’ll make the ball later on?’ she asked.

Archie groaned. ‘No dear. You go ahead and have fun.’

The ship lurched again. The olive in Agnes’ drink flipped out of the glass into the air. The glass slid down the slanting table. The olive plopped back into it.

Agnes picked up the glass and took a long sip. ‘Honestly, Archie. I do wish you would toughen up. There’s still two weeks before we reach the Bahamas.’

Archie turned to face the wall and pulled the duvet over his head.

Agnes tutted, turned off the cabin light and left him in darkness. She stepped out of the cabin onto the deck.

Mr. Mulligan, that charming young American who was journeying alone, walked passed and tipped his hat to her. Agnes nodded and smiled in return.

Their anniversary cruise was shaping up to be better than Agnes could possibly have hoped for.


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37 responses to “ALL AT SEA”

  1. Singledust Avatar

    a little flirting and romance at sea! i liked this little piece. read like it could have happened sometime, somewhere to some people.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, nice to write a simpler, nicer piece every so often 🙂

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  2. sailajaP14 Avatar

    Love how your sense of humour shines through. 😁

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked it 🙂

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      1. sailajaP14 Avatar

        You are welcome.

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  3. neelwritesblog Avatar

    La affaire on the high seas. I immensely liked this including ‘that American…’
    Wonderful writing Liain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neel 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Something a little lighter for a Sunday x

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  4. angietrafford Avatar

    Nothing wrong with a bit of at sea romance

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Angie, a bit of light flirting 🙂

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    2. ceayr Avatar

      Really, Angie, I am quite surprised at you!

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      1. angietrafford Avatar

        What happens on a boat stays on the boat!

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  5. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Infidelity on the high seas!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It all started with one gin…

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  6. Jennie Avatar

    A big chuckle!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie, glad I gave you a smile 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You are welcome! 😀

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  7. Vaidehi Soni Avatar

    I see what you did there haha. Loved it 😀 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  8. James Avatar

    Saucy wench, that Agnes.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A harmless flirt, I think (I hope!)

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  9. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Well, he does sound a bit of a bore! Nice one Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Maybe the sea will calm, literally and metaphorically, before the end of their cruise. Thanks Keith.

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  10. ceayr Avatar

    A touch of the Somerset Maugham about this, Iain.
    Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Nice compliment, thanks.

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  11. Jade M. Wong Avatar

    Aww, this was so sweet and lovely! I love love stories ^_^

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jade 🙂

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  12. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Not impressed with Agnes, not a nice woman at all. Her husband is so sick and she’s chasing other men. Lucky for her husband they have those patches that you can stick behind your ear now and they prevent sea sickness. I bet if Archie went to the doctor onboard he could get some and have some fun on his own 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m not sure Agnes is serious about chasing other men, just determined to make the most of their cruise. Hopefully Archie can get back on his sea legs and join in before the end of the cruise too! Thanks Mandi 🙂

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  13. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    Sounds like my 13th (and last) wedding anniversary lol.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh dear, not a happy ending!

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      1. Sunday Fiction Avatar

        Divorced 8 years this year. I got the house, the kids and the cats. Happy enough for me (eventually lol)

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  14. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Hmm. I do see a theme to your stories this week. Intended? Or are you just “cruising along?” (sorry. It’s pun day.) Another great take! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not intended, just coincidence! Thank you!

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  15. Mohid Moosani Avatar

    Wow! Love your sense of humor

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