IAIN KELLY

SAND

The taxi pulled up at the end of dirt track. Gabi Henriksen got out and asked the driver to wait.

She walked over to the figure standing at the edge of the cliff. The wind blustered, blowing her blonde hair across her face. The waves crashed onto the rocks at the foot of the sheer drop.

‘I thought I might find you here,’ she said.

Detective Anders Sand turned and gave his young partner a sad smile. ‘You are getting to know me then.’

‘Do you want to know?’

‘Guilty?’ Sand said. He turned and looked back at the jagged rocks below.

Gabi nodded. ‘Sexual assault and rape. Sentencing in two weeks.’

‘He’ll get ten and be out in five.’

‘The judge said he would take into account the suicide.’

‘It should be a murder conviction. Hanne may have jumped off this cliff, but it was him that drove her to it.’

They stared at the jagged rocks and the swirling sea.

‘I have a taxi waiting,’ Gabi said.

‘You take it. I’ll make my own way back.’

Gabi left him standing staring out over the cliff into the clear blue abyss.


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Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Al Forbes. For more details visit HERE.

To read more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

This month I am taking part in the A to Z Challenge 2017 – a post each day based on the letters of the alphabet and a theme. My story is a case featuring Detectives Anders Sand and Gabi Henriksen. You can visit my A TO Z CHALLENGE 2017 page here to read the story.

As this challenge will take up a lot of my blogging time I may not get round to commenting on everyone’s posts, but I hope to find time to read all your stories as usual, and still be able to participate in Sunday Photo Fiction each week.

38 responses to “SAND”

  1. ceayr Avatar

    Love this, Iain, excellent piece of writing, a huge story told so succinctly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, very kind.

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  2. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Good luck with the challenge. I am deep into a novel, so I rarely get a chance to even pop my head up.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, I’m using this as a break having got to the end of a very tough first draft before I go back and start rewriting and editing. Good to take a rest and think about something else to regain perspective.

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  3. Jennie Avatar

    Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You are welcome!

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  4. James Avatar

    Nice use of the character and his circumstances. So we haven’t seen the last of him.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh no, he’s hanging around for a while yet.

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  5. NJ Avatar
    NJ

    I enjoy reading detective stories so this is right up there 😊

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks NJ 🙂

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  6. Veronica Avatar

    Really nice, Iain. Thanks for posting info on the Sunday Photo Fiction!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Veronica, it’s always good fun to join in with 🙂

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  7. Kecia Sparlin Avatar

    Well, that was depressing. 😦

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Some things just are.

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  8. joyroses13 Avatar

    Emotional story!

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  9. Annie Avatar

    At least I know he would not be jumping off the cliff… because he still has 25 more letters to go through!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, true Annie, this is a bit of separate prequel to the main event. Thanks for reading 😉

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  10. […] Thanks to Iian and his own Sunday Photo Fiction post “Sand” […]

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  11. tabeernama Avatar

    It’s wonderful to notice how differently every mind interprets a picture. Absolutely loved reading this piece.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, very kind. That is one of the best parts about doing these photo prompts, reading what everyone else has done.

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  12. John Davis Frain Avatar

    You amaze me what you can see beyond a photo. It’s great.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks John, very kind.

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  13. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Ah, he pops up again. Are these two pieces the first time you’ve used this character?
    Nice job with this!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Used him once before in a completely different way, enjoying developing him.

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      1. Sascha Darlington Avatar

        I have had fun with the serials I’ve done here. Enjoy!

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  14. jazzfeathers Avatar

    Really really liked it. This is connected with your AtoZChallenge story, right? Sand has already hooked me. Such an interstign character.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s right, just a little piece with the same characters to introduce them a bit more. Thank you.

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  15. Joe Owens Avatar

    Curse you Iain you have drawn me in. Now I have to slice the already thin sliver of time to read a tad larger so I can keep up!.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Apologies Joe! Alternatively you can save them all to the end of the month and read it as a whole 🙂

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      1. Joe Owens Avatar

        Oh I am just being funny Iain. 5-7 AMEDT is my prime reading time, before work.

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  16. neelwritesblog Avatar

    What a wonderful story, thrilling to the end.

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  17. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    A lot told in such a short space. Excellently done Iain

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  18. goroyboy Avatar

    Talk about a cliffhanger lol nicely done Iian

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