IAIN KELLY

E IS FOR EGG

The following day Sand checked the police computer files to quell his curiosity. Jules Eckberg was denied parole in the autumn of 2008. In the spring of the following year he had been killed in a prison riot. The mugshot of Eckberg, slightly older and thinner, a dead look in his eyes but still the killer Sand remembered, brought back sickening images of his young lover, Bjarne. The computer file included photographs. Sand skipped past them and closed the programme, satisfied that any link between the murder and the mutilation of Mrs. Moen’s cat did not exist.

The file from Håkon sat on his desk. It required his signature to officially hand the case over to the Animal Protection Alliance. He flicked through to find the last page. Sand froze staring at it. Had he just seen that? He leafed back through the slim file until he found what had caught his eye. The dead cat’s name was Bjarne.

The ping from his computer announcing an incoming email broke the moment of stillness. Sand looked at it. An unknown sender and no subject title, probably junk. The message was open in his preview browser. He glanced at the first lines, preparing to delete it.

‘Dear Anders,’ it read. ‘I do hope this finds you well. What luck that it was you that was sent to see poor Bjarne yesterday. I had thought it would take a little longer before you would uncover my work. As it is, this means the real fun can begin much sooner.’

There was no signature or name attached, just a graphic of a small Easter egg at the end of the text. Sand looked round the office. Gabi Henriksen, his young partner, saw him looking round.

‘What’s up?’ she asked.

‘Nothing. Just a strange message.’ Sand pointed at his screen. Gabi wheeled her chair over to his desk and scanned the email.

‘Bjarne? The dead cat?’

‘The same.’

‘What does the message mean?’ Sand shrugged. Gabi pointed at the small graphic. ‘Look, it’s got an actual Easter egg. You know what an Easter egg is in an email or programme?’

‘Of course I do. I’m not that old,’ Sand said. Gabi was fifteen years younger than him and tech-savvy. His stone age attitude to new technology was a running joke between them. The difference in their approaches was what made them a good partnership.

‘Click on it then,’ Gabi said.

‘Yes, boss,’ said Sand, clicking on the Easter egg. The sound of the loud drumming crashed through the office. Heads popped up from behind partitions. Sand scrambled to reduce the volume on his computer. Then he stopped. He listened to the drumming.

Pedersen emerged from his room and shouted above the ongoing din. ‘Sand, turn that racket off.’

Sand stood still. The drumming was him. It was his drumming from last night. Someone had recorded it in his house. The noise stopped. On Sand’s computer screen a graphic appeared. It showed a cat being sliced open and decapitated. The words ‘Remember Bjarne’ flashed up in blood red, accompanied by a loud, evil cackle.

‘Is this some sick joke?’ Gabi said.

‘I thought it was, until now,’ Sand answered her.

A disguised voice, a male one, but run through some electronic synthesiser spoke from the computer. ‘Welcome to the game, Anders Sand. See you at the park. Midday. Don’t be late, we wouldn’t want you to miss the fun.’

The computer screen went black.

‘What’s this about a park, Anders?’ Gabi asked.

Sand looked at the time. It was just after ten. ‘Come on. We need to talk to Pedersen.’


A2Z-BADGE-100 [2017]

This is part five of my A to Z Challenge 2017. More information on the challenge, and other stories and blogs taking part in it, can be found HERE.

Throughout April I  hope to publish a section a day, relating to a letter of the alphabet, which in the end will make up a continuous story, all based round the objects found in this children’s jigsaw:

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Other entries in the challenge, and a version of the final complete, joined up story can be found here: A TO Z CHALLENGE 2017.

61 responses to “E IS FOR EGG”

  1. joyroses13 Avatar

    Getting intense! Good job!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy 🙂

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  2. The Indecisive Eejit Avatar

    Oooo I’m excited, even though I’ve jumped in at E. I’m going to go back to catch up on the ones I’ve missed and I’m looking forward to the rest 🙂
    I love the way you write 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, hope you enjoy the previous entries and keep coming back 🙂

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  3. NJ Avatar
    NJ

    Is this eventually going to be a book? Please say that it is. Coz I’d definitely buy it. This is totally my kinda book😉 I just need lots of inner peace to stay calm and patient. Let’s see what happens at midday.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks. I hadn’t thought of it as a book to start but if it goes well for the rest of the month then I think I could definitely adapt it. Glad your enjoying it 🙂

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  4. artman413 Avatar

    Looks like you’ve added another intriguing piece to this puzzle. Can’t wait to see the fun begin…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, it should be a non-stop thriller from now on… At least that’s what I’m hoping for!

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  5. radhikasreflection Avatar

    Excitement is growing……

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, hoping to maintain it for 21 more entries will be the challenge!

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      1. radhikasreflection Avatar

        I am sure it will only grow 🙂

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  6. kim blades, writer Avatar

    Very entertaining.

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  7. nairama Avatar

    gah! Don’t go to the park! Or at least take someone with to cover you! Sand! 😀 (I like to yell at characters while reading :3 )

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, you might have to tell someone tomorrow! He’s got to go to the park right? Especially as tomorrow my prompt is For for Flower! 🙂

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  8. reeyah Avatar

    Visitng from the A to Z challenge and jumping in on your story here. Whoa. Gonna backread; some intense reading here! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, hope you stick with it 🙂

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  9. Annie Avatar

    Oh my. Shenanigans from an egg! I wonder what Sand will find at the park. A flute?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Fortunately F is an easier one than that to fit in! 🙂

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  10. ridhiik Avatar

    These posts have the beginning of a book…gripping

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very kind, thank you.

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  11. Eva Blaskovic Avatar

    Very good! Suspense is building.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  12. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    It’s getting more intriguing by the day! Great stuff Iain.
    Last Easter day in Amble Bay

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith

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  13. James Avatar

    Either the ghost of Jules Eckberg or the demons that possessed him are after Sand now. I’d send a dozen cops to the park and have my house swept for listening devices and cameras. Are you really going to sustain this mystery through the rest of the alphabet?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That is the challenge, W is for Whale looking particularly tricky towards the end…! Thanks for sticking with it so far.

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  14. Addison Albright Avatar

    The plot thickens. I wonder what he’ll find at the park?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Tune in tomorrow!

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  15. John Davis Frain Avatar

    Confession: I got so caught up in the story, I forgot what letter you were on. I had to scroll back up after the end to check. Great stuff.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s a good sign I think!

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      1. John Davis Frain Avatar

        Oh yes, a very good sign indeed. The sign reads: Keep Going!

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  16. kiwinana Avatar

    Really enjoying your story, looking forward to tomorrows.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, hope you keep enjoying it 🙂

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  17. raven avery Avatar

    I’m gripped, can’t wait for tomorrows 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  18. TanGental Avatar

    Getting v creepy…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  19. pamelascanepa Avatar

    I agree with many others here, you should publish this as a book!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Pamela, very kind. We’ll see where it ends up at the end of the month!

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  20. ladieswholunchreviews Avatar

    Geez, Iain, I’m actually getting nervous reading this! Scary

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad I’m keeping you on edge!

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      1. ladieswholunchreviews Avatar

        Very much so 🙂

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  21. Vanessence Avatar

    OH! That was wonderfully well done!! What a hook!

    My “theme” – A Thirty-Word Story, revealing one word of the story each day of the challenge.
    #AtoZChallenge The Letter E

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  22. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Oh! Excellent entry. Definitely revved it up.

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  23. serenasinclair Avatar

    Ooo it got a little creepy there! I love that it was his own drumming. Great suspense!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  24. jazzfeathers Avatar

    Oh. My. Goodness O_O

    @JazzFeathers
    The Old Shelter – 1940s Film Noir

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  25. Megha Sreeram Avatar

    This is turning murkier. And the recording bit was creepy 😂

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  26. Sreedeep Chennamangalam Avatar

    This is getting spooky and interesting! Bjarne, the strange email, the recorded drumming…….. this is a nice one so far, Iain!

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  27. Sue Ranscht Avatar

    Ooo… my heart is beginning to beat faster!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I hope to get it racing before the end of the month! Thanks for reading 🙂

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      1. Sue Ranscht Avatar

        Having gotten through all you’ve posted so far, I have no doubt it will happen just as you say.

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  28. lynneinpborough Avatar

    I don’t usually do thrillers. Scare myself too easily, very suggestible and will get nightmares. Just warning, things could get tricky. I’ll make sure I read with the light on and in the mornings. Heading to the flowers now..

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  29. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Whoa! You could definitely adapt this into a book series!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A few people have said that already – we’ll see if I can make it to the end of the month first!

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        I’m sure you can! Good luck with the challenge. 🙂

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  30. Anna Tan (@natzers) Avatar

    Okay.. this is getting creepy!
    Anna

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  31. Joe Owens Avatar

    Here we go, game on! I love it Iain!

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