INFORMANT

Chavy watched the dusty streets of Phnom Penh gradually fade away behind him. The  brown water of the Mekong river disappeared to the east while the bus headed north.

The roads changed from tarmac to dust. The buildings from stone to wood. The beggars remained regardless.

The bus stopped.

‘Checkpoint,’ the young white man next to him said. ‘Just present your papers and stay calm. You’re on a pilgrimage to the Sambor Prei Kuk temple. You don’t know me.’

With that the man stood and pulled his own papers out. He walked forward waving them. ‘British diplomat. You see?’ The bewildered Khmer Rouge soldier shoved the man roughly off the bus.

As the bus pulled away, Chavy saw the man called Phillips arguing with four heavily armed men. Someone tapped his shoulder.

‘Don’t worry. He was the diversion. He’ll be okay. The main thing is we get you out.’


cambodia

Written for ‘What Pegman Saw’, a weekly prompt based on a view from Google Maps. The idea is to write a piece of fiction of around 150 words based on the prompt. Full details can be found HERE. This week we’re off to Cambodia, the World Heritage site of the Sambor Prei Kuk temple and a glimpse of the past that still haunts the history of this country.

For more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Read more stories featuring the British spy Phillips: THE PHILLIPS SPY STORIES.

32 responses to “INFORMANT”

  1. Great tension in this story. It’s like the first few paragraphs of a Graham Greene thriller.

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    1. Fantastic that’s where I was aiming this, glad you picked up on the Greene style. 🙂

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  2. Wow, lots of suspense. I love the idea of these Google Maps prompts, it’s so interesting to write based on a setting.
    Kathrin — http://mycupofenglishtea.wordpress.com

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    1. Thank you for reading and commenting Kathrin. They can be really challenging, especially when dropped in a country you know little about!

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  3. Great spy thriller. Are you writing a novel?

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    1. Gearing up to start one and the character of Phillips will feature, though perhaps not the central role. Thanks James.

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    1. Thanks Shehanne, hope you’re good 🙂

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  4. You really took me there–immersive and tense, with a smart twist.

    So happy to see you Iain!

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  5. Very clever. Diversions are an old technique in war and in the spy game. I’m sure this worked for real many times. Very nicely written!

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    1. Thank you, I can imagine it would be used a lot, simple and effective.

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  6. Oh! the mystery and diversion of it all. Love this take. Such a lovely surprise at the end.

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  7. Yaaaassssss … I love a good twist that shows up in the final line. Well done, Iain.

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    1. Thanks John, glad you liked this one.

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  8. Nice story, Iain. I’m starting to like this Phillips guy!

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  9. Dear Iain,

    Tense and suspenseful. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  10. Liked the believeability on your spin here. Good read! Oh, and I almost chose the same pic.

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  11. Atmosphere with smoke and a style from yesteryear that never grows old. Nice one, Iain.

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  12. A great snapshot from a thriller, Iain – of course now I want to know who your man was and why he was important enough to risk two other lives … Great tale

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    1. Thanks Lynn. In true realistic spy writing (Le Carre, Deighton) I reckon he’s just some government official who’s been leaking intelligence to the west and was about to be discovered – or something like that 🙂

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  13. Tense. I’m not entirely sure Phillips will be okay…

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    1. He’s survived situations like this before – in my head at least 🙂

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  14. Woah! I could so picture this in my head. This is the best read in the series. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  15. The old world spy style of writing came alive in this. Well written, Kelly. You have whetted my curiosity with this one.

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