IAIN KELLY

CAVE ART

‘Dan,’ she called urgently in a hushed whisper. Dan turned and saw Amy beckoning him.

He stepped back from the tour group. ‘What is it?’

‘Stand in front of us.’

‘Why?’

‘Just stand in front of us. Look what she did now.’

Dan peered round Amy. Their daughter, Chloe, grinned at him. ‘She didn’t.’

‘Oh, yes she did.’

Next to the six-thousand year old Native American cave drawings was a freshly etched picture of a tall stickman.

Dan squinted. ‘Is that a spaceship?’

‘Does it matter what it is?’

‘It’s very creative.’

‘Cover me.’ Amy took out a pack of baby wipes.

‘That’s not going to work,’ Dan said.

‘You have a better idea?’

‘You’re making it worse, You’re just smudging it.’

‘Forget it, let’s just go.’

‘We have to follow the tour group.’

‘Dan, I am telling you. Let’s go.’

Amy dragged their daughter away. ‘Next year, can we please just take her to Disneyland.’

Dan backed away after them.

Chloe smiled as they broke into a run. Next year’s holiday was looking better.


 

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Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story in around 150 – 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

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34 responses to “CAVE ART”

  1. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Disneyland might be a safer bet. Great story!

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  2. TM Avatar

    Grear read today! 😀

    And ah all those times I regretted being overly obedient as a kid, and missing out on so many opportunities to leave a mark of my presence on ancient artefacts :”)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, probably best that you didn’t leave your mark! Thank you.

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      1. TM Avatar

        True, but a kid can dream! 😀

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  3. Sue Ranscht Avatar

    Makes me wonder what percentage historically significant artifacts exists due to a lack of parental supervision. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There must be a few. Thanks Sue 🙂

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  4. Fandango Avatar

    You can’t hold back the creativity of today’s youth.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Best to let them express themselves 🙂

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  5. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Hahahahaha! What an adorable story! Sounds like she is one smart little girl! LOL!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      She knows how to get what she wants. Thanks PJ.

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  6. tharsheblogs Avatar
    tharsheblogs

    i thought mine was the only child who…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, my experience is they are all like that, You are not alone.

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  7. Jennie Avatar

    Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You are welcome.

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  8. James Avatar

    Clever child, though defacing ancient artifacts is kind of frowned upon.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ach, where’s the fun in that 🙂

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  9. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Maybe she wanted to sign it, and you dragged her away 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, true – could be the start of her artist career.

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  10. LucciaGray Avatar

    Oh dear! I’m sure many an artwork have a child’s contribution. Loved it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think it adds to the value 😉

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  11. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    Children will be children🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And all the better for it. Thanks Michael

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  12. any1mark Avatar

    That explains why the figures overlap! 🙂 Nice story and Disneyland isn’t any safer they have cameras everywhere

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, thanks Mark.

      Like

  13. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Kids will be kids! Brilliant Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And rightly so.

      Like

  14. Akshata Ram Avatar

    A creative kid, I am sure she wont stop and do more

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I do hope so!

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  15. Anagha Yatin (@anagha_yatin) Avatar

    I can so very well relate to this one Ian! This reminded me of our trip to Istanbul with a baby in pram and a five year old tied to the apron strings!
    How I wish we should have thought of Disney at that point of time!!!

    Anagha recently posted Miles To Go…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, I can just imagine you trying to take in all that culture with them 🙂

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  16. Ellespeth Avatar

    Her’s could be its own artifact in a few centuries. Walls are so tempting for kids.
    Ellespeth

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Especially clean, freshly painted ones!

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