IAIN KELLY

THE WOLF’S LAIR

Kaufmann swept the final bundle of wood shavings into the wheelbarrow and stretched his aching back.

‘Hör nicht auf,’ the supervisor yelled at him. ‘Schnell, schnell.’

Exhausted, Kaufmann put the broom and spade into the barrow and took up the handles. He waddled as quickly as his skinny frame could manage, clearing the road just as faint car engines approached through the forest. He tipped the wood shavings into the ditch behind the trees.

‘Bewege es!’ The guards nudged them with their rifles. The workers were corralled into a group, hidden from the roadside.

Through the trees they could see the cleared road they had helped to construct over the last month. It led to the clearing in the forest where they had spent the last six months constructing the large military complex. The guards, today in their smart uniforms, lined the road.

As the caravan of vehicles passed, the guards saluted. Kaufmann peered through the trees. There, in the first car, he was sure he had glimpsed him, standing up, returning the salute, the familiar parted black hair and moustache.

The Wolf had entered his lair for the first time.


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Copyright Dawn Miller

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Al Forbes. For more details visit HERE.

To read more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

The Wolf’s Lair was a compound built in the Masurian Woods in 1940-1941 to serve as Hitler’s Eastern headquarters. It was constructed by Fritz Todt and his Todt Organization, which notoriously used forced labour.

51 responses to “THE WOLF’S LAIR”

  1. Reena Saxena Avatar

    This was brushing up on history. Good take on the prompt!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Reena

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    2. prior.. Avatar

      I agree with Reena – good historical piece….

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  2. Michael Avatar

    Great take iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  3. quiall Avatar

    Chilling . . .

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  4. ceayr Avatar

    Excellent.
    Your usual deftly constructed tale.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE, much obliged.

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  5. Jennie Avatar

    Great take on this!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennie

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you for the reblog 🙂

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  6. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    A moment from history. Simply brilliant Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, much appreciated.

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  7. joyroses13 Avatar

    I can hear the suspenseful music in the background as I read your ending. 🙂
    Good job!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  8. Anna Rymer Avatar

    Skilfully told – you’re writing is so effortless.

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    1. Anna Rymer Avatar

      Damn it! Wrong your again! I blame predictive text and me reading on the sly on a ‘family day’ 🙂 Already amuck off for an hour to write mine! 😃

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      1. Iain Kelly Avatar

        I do the exact same, and typing on a smartphone always throws up some interesting typos 🙂

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    2. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anna 🙂

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  9. EagleAye Avatar

    I suppose it would’ve been a death sentence if Kaufmann spat on the ground. The Nazis did use a lot of forced and slave labor. It’s one of the reasons so many V-2 rockets failed, either through sabotage or apathy. Nice work, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s good to know that some of those who suffered forced labour were still able to resist and defy in their own way. Thanks Eric.

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  10. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Well written story as usual and interesting history for sure! =)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Brenda

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  11. Susan Avatar

    An interesting story, more so because it is based on history. Good job.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Susan

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  12. JS Brand Avatar

    Subject matter that makes the flesh crawl, but excellent writing Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you JS

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  13. James Avatar

    Nice bit of historical fiction, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks James

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  14. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    This was a fine piece of writing. We do need to read about the past, if only to remind us of the evil that can surface.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  15. prior.. Avatar

    well done – felt like i was really there with the caravan and salutes

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  16. Norma Avatar

    That was brilliantly written Iain. 🙂
    Forced labor can reap a lot. Sigh!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Norma – it certainly can.

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  17. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    You have turned into a very fine writer. I have sen your progress and today your stories are so effortlessly brilliant, Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neel, such an uplifting compliment to receive 🙂

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  18. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Some good history behind this story. I guess the Nazis like the armies of any dictator used forced labor. It’s very sad that it was both Jewish people, but also there own German people. Great write. Also, I think since I’ve visited you’ve updated your blog theme. I like it a lot 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Mandi, yes a new look for the New Year! Without forced labour there would be no pyramids in Egypt, no Roman colosseum…

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      1. mandibelle16 Avatar
        mandibelle16

        Hehe that’s very true. The Egyptian pyramids I think in particular are always difficult to comprehend, how did men lift so many huge blocks of stone. Then again, thee projects were not finished in a year or two. Some of them took decades or I remembered certain Cathedral taking a few hundred, especially when you require labor to be skilled.

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  19. Nis Avatar
    Nis

    My grandfather was a POW in Germany during ww1.
    Didn’t say much, except that they were the most organised lot.
    Your story was great.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Nis. A shame that those that suffered, many never want to tell their story. I for one would love to hear what your grandfather went through and what he did to survive. Thanks for reading.

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  20. raymopashow Avatar
    raymopashow

    Eerie… great reminder of while genocide was taking place in dank dark death camps…undeserved trophies were “taken “ by the depraved … nice historic take

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you. A dark time all round.

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  21. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Brilliantly built up historical fiction Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much.

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  22. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    Nice piece of historical fiction.

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