REAP WHAT YOU SOW

The massive missile defence cannon lit up red and orange in the night sky.

‘Citizens, once again we are safe. Russia, Iran, Korea – no one can threaten our great city!’ The crowd cheered.

Klaus slipped away as the mayor continued his rabble-rousing speech. Politicians and their half-truths, he thought.

The defence system he had developed worked if the incoming missile was intercontinental. It could do nothing against a short-range, low-flying projectile.

He got into his car and drove out of the city.

He crossed the Hudson and dialled the number in Baltimore. It was answered on the first ring.

‘Launch.’


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Copyright Jill Wisoff

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

107 responses to “REAP WHAT YOU SOW”

  1. Devious chap, your Mr Klaus.
    But have to kinda empathise with his view of politicians.

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    1. Inspired by the devious traitor of the original Manhattan Project.

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      1. I didn’t know there was one. I will have to look that up. Very interesting!

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  2. Dear Iain,

    Terrifying and tense story. Well told. .

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. There’s always a back door

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    1. The best plans always find one.

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  4. Suspense is intact till the end! At first I thought, there’d be an alien attack!
    Then realized that Klaus is a traitor. He has developed defence system and still is anti-defence…
    Nice story.

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    1. Thank you Anita, indeed he is a very human traitor.

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  5. Oh, I liked that! Totally unexpected – thanks for surprising me. 🙂

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Good to know it had an effect, thanks Susan.

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  6. you have managed to once again send chills up my spine… and I’ll use this occasion to say thank you for all the great stories, though I rarely hit that like button, (if I did it as often as you deserve, it would start to be creepy) your imagination and productivity amazes me and is quite humbling. Again, thanks for the great reads. I look forward to reading many more.

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    1. Thank you so much, so nice to hear. Please do ‘like’ the stories, it’s nice to know they are appreciated 🙂

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  7. This is too real and possible!

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    1. It only takes one person to decide to do something drastic…

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  8. Another good tale Iain. 🙂

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  9. It seems that protecting one city against intercontinental missiles is a narrow vision. At least Reagan’s “Star Wars” defense was intended to shield the whole country.

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    1. Who says the cities are talking to each other by this stage?

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  10. I think he is a right evil dude! Wonder how much of that could truly happen today? Hmmmm .. well done!

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    1. I’m not sure about the exact science behind it, but I’m sure if someone wanted to, they could…

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  11. Hi Iain,
    You still standing after the A-Z? It feels a little strange now to have the pressure off, although I am trying to catch up on the reading side.
    This story was exceptionally creepy, and terrorist attacks have shown that this is exactly the type of person we have to watch out for.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Creepy is good, and if the US decides to destabilise the Middle East as Trump is threatening to, then who knows where we will end up in the future. Still getting used to the free time after finishing the A – Z 🙂

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  12. Good take on the prompt, Iain.
    For those of a nervous disposition, missile technology is complex and difficult. Effective destructive capacity is well beyond the resources of a terrorist group. The Palestinian militants, Hamas, use large numbers of rockets supplied by Hizbollah, a semi-state organisation, and they’ve been pretty ineffective – I think they’ve managed one death in the last five years.

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    1. Thanks Penny. All the more reason to keep the bigger, more powerful weapons out of their hands, and more importantly, out of the reach of any countries and governments.

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  13. Now, the man developing the tech would be the perfect one to exploit the weaknesses, it’s true. I’m hoping Penny’s right and your view of rocket precision is optimistic! Great read iain

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    1. The trouble is it only takes one or two to hit the right spot and it could be a catastrophe, especially in our crowded cities with skyscrapers… The inside job is definitely the one I would worry about, what could be done to prevent it if someone so decided. Thanks Lynn.

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      1. Scary thoughts Iain! My pleasure

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  14. When idiots are in charge of our safety: a timely tale about clueless politicians and nukes.
    Thanks for the scare.
    Tracey

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    1. My thoughts exactly. Scary indeed.

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  15. Nukes will happen

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    1. At some point someone is going to hit a button somewhere…

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  16. Scary. As if ripped from the (future) headlines themselves. 😦

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    1. A little too close to reality,I agree.

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  17. Like shooting fish in a barrel

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    1. It would be that easy if they have the weapons..

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  18. Too close to reality, you’ve got there.

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  19. Yeah, that’s really scary. Classic technique of a con artist is to get the victim’s attention on something else.

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    1. Exactly, concentrating on the wrong enemy.

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  20. Oh my this was diabolically done! 😉

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  21. I am always in awe of your twists and turns since atoz.. a very good take on the photo prompt.

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    1. Thank you, too kind 🙂

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  22. A good take on the prompt! Really enjoyed it!

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  23. Politicians are the modern day Neros. The only difference is, they’ll help burn down Rome, even light the first match, as long as they see some profit in it.

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    1. At least you knew where you stood with Nero, he didn’t try to hide what he was behind a sheen of respectability!

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  24. Bet he didn’t tell them the complete truth. This makes me think of the twin towers. They never needed a missile afterall. Excellent read, Iain.

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  25. Tense and tight writing. Loved this, Iain.

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  26. A chilling tale indeed. Nice one Iain

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  27. That was terrifying! 😱

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    1. Thank you, that was my aim.

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  28. There was a story I read not that long ago about the aftermath of an accidental nuclear strike on New York City. Made this story that much more creepy (and plausable).

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    1. The more weapons that exist, the more likely an accident will happen one day, nevermind a deliberate attack.

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  29. Ah. The one who develops not only knows the loophole but uses it effectively for evil. True in general too, I think. Sadly. Loved the tale, and the suspense. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  30. It helps to have inside knowledge. Quite chilling.

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  31. I was on tenterhooks! Who can you trust…

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  32. That’s the city gone, then, along with millions of people. War is horrible.

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  33. Oooooo evil. I love it. Great build of tension.

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    1. Thanks Dawn, that’s the intended reaction!

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  34. This story made the hairs stand up on the back of my neck, well done.

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  35. Very scary and uncomfortably close to reality We dance on a volcano.

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  36. These days, “half-truths” is being generous. Great story with a lesson on the consequences of believing whatever we’re told–just because it’s what we want to hear.

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  37. This is really good.

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    1. Thank you Jazmin 🙂

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  38. A terrifying notion given the state of the world these days.

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    1. That was my thought Susan.

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  39. A loophole they overlooked. Tense and terrifying.

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  40. The citizens were lulled into a false sense of security by smooth-talking politicians. They never saw it coming. Definitely some real-world truth here. Well written as always! =)

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    1. Yet we still listen to them and believe them! Thanks Brenda

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  41. Dang!!! Nicely written!

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  42. Having only tried writing these 100 word stories a couple of times, it’s great to see such a good example of one. Dialogue and action really well combined. Feel like I’m taking notes from an expert!

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  43. Great twist and so concise with so much going on and so many characters. I’m left wondering who Klaus is working for and what he’s up to.

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    1. In my mind a foreign power, but then he could be freelancing on his own.

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      1. Foreign power works, so now I have to think which one.

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  44. Nice one Iain, I didn’t see the ending coming. Sinister deeds afoot.

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  45. The gigantic defence system offers the people a false sense of security. A scary story that is so close to reality.

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  46. Another timely and well written piece. My hat’s off to you, sir.

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  47. Oh my – nasty!! Well done…

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