IAIN KELLY

PROVIDENCE

He was taken aback, seeing it suspended from the ceiling among the other examples of World War II fighters.

The aeroplane had been dredged up from the English Channel, where it had sat undisturbed on the sea bed for forty years. The bullet holes that had ripped open the fuselage and destroyed the engine had been repaired, the bodywork had been restored and gleaming yellow and blue livery had been freshly applied.

He remembered watching this aeroplane ditching into the water as he had floated down. It had not disintegrated on impact, but skipped across the surface before gradually sinking.

He had seen the burning Messerschmidt hit the water too. The pilot had not been so lucky. His machine somersaulted, capitulating in a ball of flame. There had been no ejection or tell-tale parachute.

He had survived, his enemy had not. Such were the vagaries of war.

As their daughter and grandchildren walked away, he silently thanked the aluminium and steel that had held together just long enough all those years ago.


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Copyright Yinglan

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story or poem in around 150 – 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

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38 responses to “PROVIDENCE”

  1. Liz A. Avatar
    Liz A.

    Oh wow. I wonder if he held back tears. Did he tell his family the story? Or did they have no idea?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I wonder, I suspect they knew something but often those that returned from the war didn’t go into details about what had happened over there, so maybe they didn’t know the full story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Similar ideas, thanks Neel.

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  2. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Brilliant tale of fate, victory and optimism….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Reena

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  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    He survived, the other pilot died. I wonder if in retrospect he felt any guilt.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure he like many others, must have felt some level of guilt, even if they believed in the cause they were fighting for.

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  4. James Avatar

    Aren’t many World War Two vets left to have such memories.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The machines have outlived them, fortunately their stories will live on.

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  5. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Wonderful story, Iain! Very touching. The war memory he has is horrific. Thankfully, he survived.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you PJ, so many must have horrific memories of war.

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        Yes, I agree with you. Many have PTSD from it. So very sad.

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  6. Varad Avatar

    Very nostalgic piece, Iain. The last few words sums it up perfectly. Very thin margins between life and death.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And the winners and losers. Thanks Varad

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  7. EagleAye Avatar

    He wasn’t the first to thank a plane in suh a manner. Once a P-47 got shot up bad, but still flew. The controls were out and he could only fly level. An FW190 discovered him and began blasting away. He fired and fired but the P-47 still flew. Eventually the German ran out of ammo. The pilot survived to thank his plane, just like your MC. Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, sounds like a dramatic and lucky real life escape!

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      1. EagleAye Avatar

        It is real life. It actually happened. The plane landed safely but had hundreds of holes in it. It had to be scrapped after that. The P-47 Thunderbolt enjoyed a great reputation for being tough.

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  8. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Iain, this was a fine and touching story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  9. Donna B. McNicol Avatar

    Great tale…thanks for sharing!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Donna 🙂

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  10. JEN Garrett Avatar

    Good bit of writing! I love how the tale circles back to the exhibit, with a hopeful ending.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Jen 🙂

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  11. Liz H Avatar

    Nice, light touch on the final reveal!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  12. Ellespeth Avatar

    Great war story. A family friend was a pilot in the Army Air Force during WWII. A hero – your character and our friend Spud.
    Ellespeth

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Ellespeth

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  13. shivamt25 Avatar

    Amazing read! I’ve heard that pilots usually have a strong connection with their planes. During World War, they always used to try to land it somehow. The plane crashing in sea was very painful for them to watch. Glad he got to see his plane again.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked it.

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  14. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar

    Coming across a part of his past particularly a traumatic part must have thrown him. Good story Iain. You can’t help but think of the war with this photograph. Yours is a good story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Irene.

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  15. Shilpa Nairy Avatar

    Lovely tale around the pic.!!

    Iain, You are nominated for the mystery blogger award – https://shilpanairy.wordpress.com/2018/05/17/the-mystery-blogger-award/

    Congratulation… 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Shilpa

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  16. athling2001 Avatar

    I love the connections in the story. Well done.

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  17. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    I like the history behind this one. It would be very shocking to see your sunken plane, restored from the water’s you almost drowned it; where your enemy, another young man, died. The realities of war are so far reaching.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That was the idea, thank you.

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