IAIN KELLY

NO ENTRY

An endless wall.

In the middle a black door.

In front of it signs reading: ‘No Entry.’

‘If no-one is allowed to enter, why have a door at all?’ย Qiรกng asked.

‘So that those on the other side can expel people out.’ย Mวn replied.

‘So it is an exit only?’

Mวn shook her head and smiled. ‘It is an opportunity.’

‘How so? To get to the other side of the wall?’

‘Why would we want to get to the other side of the wall? Mวn had heard stories from the kingdom beyond the wall.

‘Then what is the opportunity you see?’

‘Every person that comes through the door is an opportunity, who can offer something to our land, who can share our values and be valued in return.’

Qiรกng looked at the wall. He no longer feared it, but was thankful for it. Those on the other side had built it to protect their kingdom. Now it sheltered this land from the evils of the kingdom beyond.


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Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story or poem in aroundย 150 โ€“ 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visitย HERE.

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22 responses to “NO ENTRY”

  1. Emily in Ecuador Avatar

    Sometimes we need a friend to remind us that perspective matters. Well done, Iain.

    Emily In Ecuador

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Emily

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  2. Michael Avatar

    That was a fascinating response Iain….well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael, glad you liked it.

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  3. Akshata Ram Avatar

    that was a very optimistic way of looking at things we consider barriers but in fact the y can be opportunities

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Aks, that what I was aiming for ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    A positive perspective. Reminds me of Game of thrones.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – never actually watched it, although I get the general gist of it!

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  5. Lavanya Avatar
    Lavanya

    What a beautiful perspective to something as blunt as no entry. Good post! I had a completely different take on this one ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Great story, Iain! It really makes one think!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you PJ ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    What a great take on the prompt, unfortunately building walls with one way doors is a rather popular and ancient past time,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Seems to be in vogue at the moment.

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  8. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    What a great way of looking at things, I wish everyone could see things the same way.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, it’s all perspective.

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  9. Sonia Chatterjee Avatar

    Isn’t it all about perspective? What is a barrier to some is an opportunity for others! You are a brilliant writer Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sonia, too kind ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    This feels like the opposite of ‘the grass is always greener.’ Good character descriptions through dialogue – Min being the optimist and Qiรกng less so.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sarah Ann, definitely a situation where optimism is needed

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  11. syncwithdeep Avatar
    syncwithdeep

    a different outlook with optimism Ian. loved your take

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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