CAST OUT THE LIGHT

They stood on the shore and watched the last lights float away on the tide.

Their glow faded and the dark night took hold, the dark night that would last forever.

It had been prophesied: cast out all light and let the dark rule. They would be rewarded when he came for them.

Only the stars twinkling far above provided solace to those that dared to turn away from the blackness.

Cressida watched those at the shore from afar. She cradled the candle in her hands.

One day she would ignite it. One day hope would burn brightly.


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Copyright Carla Bicomong

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

111 responses to “CAST OUT THE LIGHT”

  1. I like the mysterious feeling, and the juxtaposition of light and dark

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  2. This is almost like a prologue. Very mysterious and foreboding. Good one, Iain.

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    1. Thanks Varad, I agree – just have to figure out what it is a prologue too…!

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  3. Nice story on a difficult prop.

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    1. Thank you, I agree, a tricky one this week!

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  4. Good one!! Optimistic way to look into the future!!

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    1. There has to be some hope, or what’s the point?

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      1. Yes.. there should be hope.. now I am waiting for the next part of the series… 🙂

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  5. I agree that your story has a sense of optimism. Lovely writing too.

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  6. Could almost be an allegory about the descent into depression, with the therapist waiting, knowing that the patient needs to hit a low point before healing can begin.

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    1. Thanks Penny, interesting reading. I had thought allegory of the present state of the world, taken to an extreme.

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      1. I thought the same as well i.e. the state of the world now.
        Great story!

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  7. Dear Iain,

    Beautifully poetic piece full of pathos and hope.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  8. Great imagery in this. I like the style.

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  9. A tiny spark of hope in all that darkness. Intriguing idea, well written.

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  10. Very nice. Now I want the rest of the story!

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  11. You took this prompt to another dimension.

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  12. Sounds like the political situation on my side of the pond 😉

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    1. Thanks Trent, that’s the sort of allegory I was thinking of – though not just on your side of the pond!

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      1. Yeah, I know, it seems to be everywhere.

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  13. I think she could just wait for sunrise.

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    1. Bit of imagination James, assume for some reason the sun, or sunlight, have been banished from the land by the forces of darkness.

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      1. I’m sensing metaphor here.

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      2. Your senses are correct 😉

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  14. A hopeful story with a universal theme. Temptation wins over so many and darkness is worshipped–this seems a recurring theme in humankind’s history. And yet, there are always some who shine and show us what we could be. Great writing, Iain.

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    1. Thank you – if only we learned to listen to those few more openly.

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  15. Love it!!! I want to know what is going to happen!

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    1. Thank you Ashley – if I ever figure it out I’ll let you know! 🙂

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  16. Lucky for us, there has always been a Cressida holding onto a light, waiting for the right time to ignite it. I see a larger metaphor in this story. Well done.

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    1. You got it. I’m just waiting to see who will shine through over the next few months or years. I live in hope…

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  17. I don’t like the sound of that prophesy . That’s going to bring nowt but trouble. Lovely atmosphere to this, Iain. Could be in the future or the distant past and I like that

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    1. Thank you Lynn, lovely compliment.

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      1. My pleasure Iain. Reading your work is never a chore 🙂

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  18. You have very beautifully described the setting Iain

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  19. A dark time ahead… until she is ready to do what she must.

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    1. The night is darkest before the dawn, and so on.

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  20. I really like the quality of a mythic fable you create, so fitted to the elements of sky & sea, doom or hope. Very well told.

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  21. An intriguing tale. Something apocalyptic about it.

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  22. I wonder if your choice of Cressida is random, or perhaps, related to the Shakespeare play, Troilus and Cressida? According to wikipedia it has a rather bleak ending, but it involves the “investigation of numerous infidelities…”. That just made me giggle considering current circumstances. Also wondering if the “he” referenced might have a name beginning with letter “m”?

    Just toying with your idea, forgive me. It is beautiful, mythic, as was said above, and intriguing.

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    1. Cressida is a name loaded with meaning, although I confess that the infidelities was not intentional! 🙂

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  23. My twisted imagination sees that day never come as “he” turns out to be a T-rex who uses the dark to gobble everyone up.

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    1. Cool, one of the more ‘out there’ explanations 🙂

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  24. Waiting for the right moment to light it, the future to a certain extent lying, a little bit, in her hands. Good stuff

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    1. Thank you – let’s hope she gets it right…

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  25. really different take (for me at least) to face and embrace the darkness.
    Also, enjoyed the flow because it felt like I read a chapter – well done

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  26. I’ve been reading too much Lovecraft (and his spate of writer followers) because at first, I thought this was they were all waiting for Cthulu to rise. The last two lines changed that for me. Always glad to read your writing.

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    1. Thanks Stu, I’m taking that comparison as a nice compliment.

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  27. Aaah, making inroads into the fantasy genre now Iain 🙂

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  28. This leaves me with a sense of foreboding.

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    1. As it should. Thanks Liz

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  29. Good one Ian but I felt its kind of incomplete. Its like I long to know more of the story

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    1. Well, I’m stuck using 100 words! 🙂

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  30. One last candle kept safe. I can see it being passed down from one generation to the next until the time comes when it’s needed. Nice one!

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  31. Sounds like an epic battle is on the way! Beautiful imagery of the contrasting light and dark.

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  32. This leaves such a mystery at the end. Loved this piece.

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  33. Your story made me think of the things we’ll allow ourselves to believe, and so, I was grateful for the hopeful ending. Nicely done, Iain!

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  34. Evokes a very mysterious and mystical picture. Lovely poetic take on the prompt.

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  35. Interesting…hope there is part 2…I am intrigued to know if it makes sense to hold hope!!

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    1. Thank you – there always has to be some hope to hold onto! 🙂

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  36. I’m not crazy about the idea of letting darkness rule. Scary thought. Thankful for Cressida and her candle.

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    1. Everyone is so down on the Darkside, come on in, it’s lovely…

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  37. This is extremely intriguing, Iain. Powerfully written! You got the readers hooked.

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  38. Ditto what GAHLEARNER said. I see a spark of hope inside that one candle flame. Hopefully, many will join it. A spot-on take for this week’s picture.

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  39. Gorgeous… rekindling the light. What a great theme

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  40. methinks candles aren’t the future. cellphones would be used for light instead. 🙂

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    1. Imagine a future where all the cellphones are gone…!

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  41. Ancient beliefs always reverberate through time into our modern world, and I think you captured that idea in this. I liked the notion of something spiritual to come.

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  42. Light is always a good symbol for hope and you did it very well!

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    1. Thank you Fatima 🙂

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  43. I love Cressida’s determination and how she clings to hope. Good one, Iain!

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    1. Thank you Brenda 🙂

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  44. Beautiful religious undertones in this one.

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    1. Thank you Dawn, not being particularly religious myself I hadn’t intended it that way, but I’m pleased that can be read into it.

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  45. I hope there are others like Cressida who have kept candle stubs for letting in the light again. A world or darkness does not bode well.

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  46. I feel a great sense of loss; of people leaving, of people left behind.

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    1. Sacrifices made perhaps. Thanks Patrick.

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  47. Sad and scary, with a glimmer of hope at the end. Nicely done.

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  48. I feel a rumble of unease for that world. 😱

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    1. Could be our world?…

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  49. The optimism the story ends with, I love it.

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