Exhausted, dehydrated and sunburnt, they let the tide sweep them in for the final nautical mile.

They slouched on their recliners and held hands.

‘We made it,’ he said, ‘I told you we could.’

‘Four months on this contraption. Next year, let’s have a walking holiday,’ she replied.

On the shore, the gathered crowd awaited – the media, family, friends and interested spectators.

The journey of the couple attempting to cross the Atlantic Ocean on their sunbathing recliners had captured the imagination of the world.

It had started by accident when the tide and wind had blown them out from Blackpool Pleasure Beach, England. Now they approached Boston Harbour, USA.

Terry Roberts, owner of ‘Pleasure Beach Recliners for Hire’ stood amongst the crowd. He had flown over the day before.

The recliners bumped onto the jetty, family and medical staff rushed forward. As the exhausted couple were helped through the media scrum, Terry saw his chance.

He waved the bill in their faces: ‘£10 for every 15 minutes,’ he explained, ‘that’s £432,000 you owe.’

The bedraggled couple stared at him dumbly, Terry pressed on.

‘Plus a £20 late return fee.’


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Copyright Susan Spaulding

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50 responses to “FOR HIRE”

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I hope they have some savings.

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      1. HesterLeyNel Avatar

        They can write a book and sell the film rights!

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  1. chris jensen Avatar

    Reblogged this on crjen1958 and commented:
    Another day at the beach?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for the reblog.

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      1. chris jensen Avatar

        No problem…

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  2. chris jensen Avatar

    Damn, just for but a moment, you really had me going…

    cheers

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It does sound so silly it could really happen!

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      1. chris jensen Avatar

        💡🐸🐸

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  3. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Like the take, but what a bastard! He would have got more from the publicity of being the owner of a recliner with such resilience! Good one Iain. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure he’ll try and cash in on that too 😉

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  4. mjothi Avatar
    mjothi

    Haha…. Hilarious take. Super cool.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad you liked it 🙂

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  5. JS Brand Avatar

    Great story Iain. If Terry received his ill-gotten gains, he must have blown them … I’m pretty sure he now works at my local council’s Foreshores office.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, yes we’ve all met someone like Terry!

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  6. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Very humorous. Loved this smart piece of writing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  7. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Pity they didn’t just make do with a donkey ride on Blackpool Pleasure Beach!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      In hindsight yes, although getting a donkey to swim the Atlantic would be tricky 😉

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  8. ceayr Avatar

    You stretched credulity to trans-Atlantic limits here, Iain!
    Nice one

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure Terry would just point at the sign on his hut clearly showing the price of hiring a floating recliner and shrug.

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  9. Fandango Avatar

    It’s just business.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely. They agreed to the hire price.

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  10. Liz H Avatar

    Life is a beach…indeed!
    (I almost spit my morning coffee out my nose, reading this!)
    😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Liz, glad you enjoyed 🙂

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  11. scr4pl80 Avatar

    LOL I almost thought it was an Archie and Agnes adventure. Can you imagine the two of them on that little thing for four months? Nicely done again, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It could well have been them, but perhaps in their youth, a couple of decades ago! Thanks Janet!

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  12. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    Can someone please push Terry in the drink? I don’t care if he can’t swim. Hell be demanding the cost of his flight and accommodation next.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, he may put that in as a recovery charge for getting the floating recliner back!

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  13. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Terry should have followed them with a camera. He would have made more money selling the video.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He might write the film screenplay!

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  14. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Nice fiction. Great twist at the end. I think they should sue the owner / renter of raft for being blown away. Why did he not go searching and what right he has to charge them for late payment.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – I get the feeling Terry doesn’t care too much about his work, until there’s money to be made!

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  15. Akshata Ram Avatar

    that must have hurt them terribly!

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  16. BarbCT Avatar

    Cool tale, but the logic part of my brain immediately asked what they ate and drank for four months. 😸 But that rental guy, Terry, is a right idiot. He could have made so much money if he had congratulated them and emphasized to the press the quality of the beach recliners he carried..He had to be an arse, instead.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You are right Barb, as this was a lighter piece I deliberately ignored the real world logistics involved – perhaps they had a support boat with them once they decided to keep going across the ocean!

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  17. Kalpana Solsi Avatar
    Kalpana Solsi

    Not a happy ending to their adventure when the bill was shoved onto their face. they can extricate themselves by writing a book of their journey.

    https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2018/09/holiday.html

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely – I get the feeling it will end up in the courts!

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  18. the dark netizen Avatar

    Oh man! XD
    Brilliantly funny! 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  19. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    I do wonder if will they be allowed to set foot in the USA under new immigration rules. 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A very valid point Michael – they didn’t bring passports or visas for a start!

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  20. syncwithdeep Avatar
    syncwithdeep

    four months is a way long.. and their next expedition is by walk.. wonder how adventurous it would be. gosh! the bill! plus the mean late fee..

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There are some who do crazy things like this!

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  21. Susan Avatar

    I felt that one coming. The late fee was the icing on the cake. Nicely done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Susan 🙂

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  22. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Ha ha ha, not to forget that they’ll now be classified as illegal immigrants and jailed in America for traveling without their passports 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m surprised they were allowed to land!

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