IAIN KELLY

THE ROAD WELL TRAVELLED

The affair had been stupid, a typical middle-aged spasm to prove there was still life in the old dog.

The grey tarmac rolled on in front of him, miles of it already lay behind. On the horizon ahead, blue sky met blue sea.

‘Why the hire car?’ she had asked when she had picked him up for their secret weekend away.

‘My own car is too distinctive,’ he smiled at her. Her twenty-year old conspiratorial smile beamed as she slipped into the passenger seat.

He rounded a curve and pulled in to the familiar lay-by. It hadn’t changed in the intervening years since his last visit.

The early morning silence assured him no other cars were approaching.

Moving the dead weight from the passenger seat to the driver’s side was unpleasant. He thanked her silently for the last chance to relive his youth, wiping her brunette hair away from her placid face.

Then he closed the door and pushed.

He watched until the surface of the water settled before lifting his backpack and setting off back along the road.

He was expected home for family dinner at six. Whistling along with the morning birds, he set off along the road.


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Copyright Anurag Bakhshi

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Susan Spaulding. For more details visit HERE.

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52 responses to “THE ROAD WELL TRAVELLED”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Another good tale Iain.

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  2. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    This has scope for growth, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta

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  3. Joe Owens Avatar

    20 years is a life abbreviated. I wonder if she had any thought he had it in for her? Iain, your skill is very strong here.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joe, I fear she was completely unsuspecting.

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  4. Darnell Cureton Avatar

    Putting your story into an image comes naturally to you. I enjoy what you come up with in the writing prompts. Keep up the excellent writing. (no pressure! lol)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much for the encouragement Darnell.

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  5. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    First have an affair and then kill her. Dangerous liaison!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      For her it certainly was!

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    2. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Dangerous for her certainly!

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  6. ceayr Avatar

    Nice guy!
    But tidy, at least.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Leaves things as he finds them.

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  7. Liz H Avatar

    Oh my God.
    Dude! Sometimes you scare me…
    Well-played, Sir Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Disclaimer: this is not based on anyone real, including myself 😉

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  8. mjothi Avatar
    mjothi

    Nice one. Hope he makes it right on time for the dinner! hahaha.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It would round off a perfect Sunday! Thank you.

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  9. aheartforafrica641064503 Avatar
    aheartforafrica641064503

    Great writing, as usual, Iain. What a way to end an affair. Poor girl.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I don’t think he gave much thought to her feelings in this matter. Thank you.

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  10. James Avatar

    A very cheerful murderer.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Someone who enjoys what he does.

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  11. scr4pl80 Avatar

    What a selfish pig. Hate to be his wife.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I suspect he hides this side of himself from her. Do you think she suspects anything?

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  12. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Seems that having served her purpose she was duly disposed of. He sounds very contented!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s nice to be content with ones work.

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  13. athling2001 Avatar

    Well done, but very creepy. His matter-of-factness makes it all the more scary.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He seems very at ease with it all. Thank you.

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  14. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Superb flash. The story had a staccato cold bloodedness that served to bring in the sheer horror of it all. Excellent writing,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you very much Neel, much appreciated.

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  15. deborahsdeliberations Avatar
    deborahsdeliberations

    That poor unsuspecting girl. It’s scary how he could be so cheerful after what he did. I feel sorry for his family, especially his wife who has no clue–as yet, the true nature of the man she’s been married to all this time.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      These things have a habit of coming back to catch them – let’s hope so!

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  16. ddeepa Avatar
    ddeepa

    Whoa. So very matter of fact, the guy!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Like he’s used to doing it…

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  17. BarbCT Avatar

    I hope her ghost haunts him until he confessed to both his wife and the cops.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      If she has a ghost, it’s definitely going to be after him!

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  18. debscarey Avatar
    debscarey

    Well, that was unexpected – nice one Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Debs! Hope you are well 🙂

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  19. syncwithdeep Avatar
    syncwithdeep

    omg.. that was a cold-blooded murder. i think u should develop this story with their past or future

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  20. Jade M. Wong Avatar

    Oh wow, that took a turn. A very interesting excerpt to a potentially fantastic murder mystery novel. Nice job as always Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jade

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  21. Jacob C. Edwards Avatar

    I think the most chilling part is how nonchalant he is in disposing of the body. He even still has an appetite. It’s as if it doesn’t affect him at all. He could do this every weekend! Great story man!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Every weekend might be a bit stressful. Once a month perhaps?! 🙂 Thank you Jacob.

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  22. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    I wonder what he was proving to himself by killing her. You’ve pointed a selfish character who’e not at all easy to like. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Proving that he can still get away with it, I think. No he is not easy to like at all.

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  23. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    This is one dangerous fellow Iain. I have a feeling that he will come to a sticky end

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      So far, he’s in the clear!

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  24. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    A true family man 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Always puts them first 🙂

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  25. Dahlia Avatar

    Something about the photo inspires bloodthirsty instincts! I am sure he had a good dinner – nicely crafted as usual Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dahlia

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