MY HUSBAND AND HIS LOVER

‘That’s the trouble with these old stone houses. They’re built like forts, to keep the enemy out. But once the enemy is within, it means it’s difficult to escape. Little slits instead of windows, only one door. You know, they used to tax homeowners based on the number of windows in their house, so everyone started bricking them up.’

She smiled, the flame from the lighter flickering on her face. ‘And you thought it would be romantic.’

She dropped the lighter into the pool of petrol and closed the door.

‘Don’t worry, the smoke will kill you before you burn.’


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Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

114 responses to “MY HUSBAND AND HIS LOVER”

  1. Wow!!! Loved this, so twisted.

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    1. Thank you so much Lisa 🙂

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  2. Hell hath no fury …..

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    1. Someone should have told him that.

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  3. Interesting to learn about the “taxes”.
    Chilling twist.
    Revenge for sure. Romantic plan burnt away…

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    1. Thanks Anita. On older buildings even in the city here you can still see where newer bricks have been used to block up windows. I do like that people decided to get round paying tax in such a cynical way! 🙂

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  4. Revenge, like your tale, is sweet.
    My sort of woman!

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  5. Coldhearted revenge. I like it!

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    1. Thanks Jilly – remind me never to get on the wrong side of you!

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  6. Well, she is having none of that… Poor bugger…

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    1. It’s not a good way to go.

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      1. No, definitely not.

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  7. Oh my, these old buildings are just not faring well this week. Wonderful twist at the end.

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  8. Whew! Did not see that coming. Loved it.

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  9. No chance that he’s going to mess anyone else around! He seriously underestimated her ability to get even! A great tale, Iain!

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    1. Thank you Edith, I think his underestimating her is what led him into the affair in the first place.

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    As I said to Neil, this prompt may indeed give us horrors, and you did not let me down. Well done

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    1. Thanks Michael, happy to oblige.

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  11. But the joke is on her – the height of romanticism is to die together 😉 Nice, if somewhat twisted, take on the prompt.

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    1. That’s a hell of a silver lining you’ve managed to find there! 🙂

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      1. Yeah, not much of a silver lining in this one… even the wife is most likely going to jail

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  12. I like the bit about windows being a basis of taxation 🙂

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    1. Thanks Reena, true here in the UK, but along time ago now.

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  13. Well played!!

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    1. But a determined one, and assertive! 😉

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  14. Or then perhaps their fate was well deserved!

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  15. She doesn’t, as the saying goes, ‘take any prisoners’, does she? Chilling.

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    1. No, no messing about!

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  16. Everyone needs to pay his or or her taxes. A very taxing story and very masterfully written. Loved the twist, every bit of it, Kelly.

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  17. Dear Iain,

    That last line is a cracker. In this story, revenge is a dish best served flambe, Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  18. so is that really true about the number of windows? I see a lo of old homes in a certain area in our town and many windows are bricked up…

    and the way you wrote this looped the title into the flow – and the title was lingering int he back as you seemed to just relax us into the chat about the old structure – and then led us into the serious revenge –
    well built (pun intended)

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    1. Thank you so much. Certainly true here in Scotland, not sure about elsewhere in the world.

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      1. I heard that in some of our buildings the windows were merely covered to make the larger house into smaller apartments

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      2. What county in Scotland? Just curious.

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      3. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Window_tax The whole country, and England and Wales too.

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      4. Thanks for the link, but I meant what county do you live in. 😼

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  19. Oy. She’s one cool customer. Good one, Lain.

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    Chilling, Iain. Poor man. What a way to go.

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  21. She couldn’t just try marriage counselling?

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    1. Well, some might, but she choose to be more definitive.

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  22. A proper chiller that one, Iain (if indeed a barbecue can ever be a chiller!) His wife certainly had things well planned.

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    1. Perhaps she’s been planning it for a while.

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  23. Well, you could say that he almost deserved it… ashes to ashes…

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  24. Oh my, his indiscretions have caught up with him.

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      1. …and for the last time!

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  25. He didn’t see that coming, did he? She had it well planned out.

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    1. I think he was completely unsuspecting.

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  26. This story really packed a punch Iain. Good one.
    I remember the days when a cheated wife felt better after slashing a few designer suits to shreds (I’m not speaking from experience, by the way).

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    1. Times change, we all have to move with them 😉

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  27. Romantic gestures gone wrong. If there had been a next time, he should have let her choose.

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    1. Maybe he shouted that just as the door closed…

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  28. deborahsdeliberations Avatar
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    That’s one extreme way of dealing with a cheating husband. I guess this her way of making sure that he doesn’t do it anymore.

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    1. It would certainly put a stop to it! Thanks Deborah

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  29. Ah, yes. Sweet – or maybe acrid – revenge.

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  30. I’ve always heard that you’ve got to pay to play. Such a high price though!

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    1. You have to live – or die – with the consequences.

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  31. yes, i thought it would be romantic along the line of johnny cash’s burning ring of fire. i was mistaken.

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  32. She is cruel and devius. What happened to his lover? Was she killing both of them in one fire?

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    1. The title suggests the lover may have been a victim of the fire too, yes.

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  33. Yikes, I like the rather cold and dispassionate explanation before the deed!

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    1. Thank you – never too late to be learning!

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  34. Sending him off with a tidbit from history is a nice touch. You surprised us, switching from laid back touristy romance to last rites!

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    1. It may be that she is not entirely in control of her senses at this point.

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      1. I did not mean to cast blame on her but only to congratulate you on portraying how the situation and his manipulation forces her to make decisions which make her situation even worse.

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  35. I liked the trivia so cleverly used here.
    what a revenge story!

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  36. Urp! Now that takes roasting someone to a whole new level. Wicked!

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    1. A literal roasting 🙂

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  37. Ha. I am sure whatever he did he deserved it. At least in her mind. Nice story.

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    1. I’m not sure anyone deserves this, even for a bit of infidelity!

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  38. What a chilling tale – she is so cold blooded ! Really like the opener – stone buildings keep the enemy out and hard to escape from within. Ramps up the horror for the victim. Nicely done.

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  39. Ooooo brutal. Great piece. Revenge for what, she certainly seems to think he deserves it.

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    1. She does seem to be very sure of herself 🙂

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  40. Christ that was hard core! Brilliant stuff Iain

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    1. Thank you. She is taking no prisoners for sure.

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  41. Well wow. Watch out for the woman scorned or betrayed, especially if she’s the vengeful type!
    Very well done, Iain!

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  42. Ha ha ha, love her ghoulish glee!

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  43. Ooh! That’s revenge indeed!

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  44. Wow…Lady Macbeth!! I liked it!

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    1. Maybe that was her inspiration!

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  45. A very sinister story, I can imagine the jilted wife’s face in the light of the flame as she drops it and closes the door. Enjoyed it so much! =)

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  46. History can be so viciously twisted int o a good tale. Well done! Love it!

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  47. So chilling! Great job.

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