IAIN KELLY

THE HOUND ON THE MOOR

‘What do you think, a cow?’

Arthur poked the skull with his stick. ‘Possibly, or a large hound.’

‘Strange, sitting here in the middle of an empty moor. A deer I could understand. I wonder how it got here.’ James puffed on his pipe.

‘Well, let’s have a closer look. The evidence is all there, we just have to deduce what it means.’

A stiff breeze caused Arthur to place his hand on his deerstalker hat to stop it blowing away as he bent down to inspect the skull.

‘I do wonder why you insist on wearing that thing. We’re not hunting any deer.’

‘One is always on the hunt, James, even if it is just for a good topic to write about.’

Arthur picked up the skull, next to it lay one or two bones from the unfortunate beast.

‘Well?’ James asked.

Arthur shrugged, ‘Beats me. Probably died of old age and skin and meat have been picked away by scavengers.’ He kicked the bones aside and stood up. ‘No doubt you would want some fantastical story about other worlds and fairies and boyhood adventures.’

‘Can we get a move on?’ James pleaded. ‘It wouldn’t do to be stuck out on Kirriemuir Moor in the middle of the night.’

‘Certainly, after you.’

As they walked away across the lonely moor, wind sweeping across the moss and heather and the sky darkening in a gloomy, threatening manner, Arthur stopped and looked back at the skull lying in the desolate surroundings.

‘I wonder,’ he muttered, and turned away to catch up with his friend.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt – Bone curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

Arthur Conan Doyle (author of Sherlock Holmes) and J.M. Barrie (author of Peter Pan) were lifelong friends after meeting in the early years of their writing careers. Although Doyle did visit Barrie at his childhood home in Kirriemuir, it was after his most famous creation had been published, but I couldn’t resist a little fictional scenario.

33 responses to “THE HOUND ON THE MOOR”

  1. James Pyles Avatar

    You should have taken it one step more by having them hear a ghostly howl in the distance.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’ll let Arthur’s (and the reader’s) imagination add in the other details 🙂

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  2. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Love Sherlock! It could have happened!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Well, he must have got his inspiration from somewhere, who knows!? Thanks Janet 🙂

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  3. Hélène Vaillant Avatar
    Hélène Vaillant

    suspense at the end, great for the readers’ imagination. A wonderful story for this prompt. well done Ian.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  4. Liz H Avatar

    The game is a afoot!
    Or maybe, that bone is a foot!
    Or…his hat is not cute!
    (Sucks on her Meerschaum) Subtle. The clues are all there–well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Liz, your comments always give me a smile 🙂

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      1. Liz H Avatar

        Mission accomplished.

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  5. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Nice one, Iain. Though there is a genuine mystery attached to this skull 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m intrigued, look forward to discovering the truth!

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      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        I’m not sure I can answer all the questions 😉

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  6. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    I liked the ending, Iain. Lots of scope for thought!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta

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  7. notestowomen Avatar

    Sounds like a case for Sherlock Holmes 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The game is afoot 🙂

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  8. BarbCT Avatar

    You certainly piqued my interest! Oh, the things one can imabine.👽👻💀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  9. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Did they solve the mystery? Why so much interest for a dead animal?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Aha, perhaps you may like to discover reading the Sherlock Holmes novels, particularly The Hound of the Baskervilles – all the clues are there 😉

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      1. Abhijit Ray Avatar
        Abhijit Ray

        OK. It is a hound’s skull.

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  10. deborahsdeliberations Avatar
    deborahsdeliberations

    Nice one, Iain. I like the mystery surrounding their curious find. Great title! 🙂

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  11. rivrvlogr Avatar

    Well played.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  12. anotetohuguette Avatar

    Perfect reading for autumn’s moody days…I found myself falling into this story and wishing for more!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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      1. anotetohuguette Avatar

        My pleasure!

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  13. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Aah, so that is how it happened? I should have guessed it, was quite elementary 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Probably not, but you never know!

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