IAIN KELLY

TABLOID INTRUSION

Well, it didn’t look much – a cuddly toy, a small chocolate each, a few sweets. It would have to do. He hoped they would understand.

He collected them all and put them in the Santa sack.

He left the newspaper lying open on the bed. His own face stared up at him from the page, caught in the glare of the flashbulb. They always managed to find him, to hound him. This time he thought he’d shaken them for good.

He left the sack under the tree for them to find in the morning.

He looked upstairs one last time as he opened the front door and then he was gone.

Before dawn, two excited children hurtled down the stairs.

They found their Mum sitting by the tree, a crunched up newspaper in her hands, her eyes wet with tears.

She hugged them and wished them a Merry Christmas.

‘Where’s Dad?’ they asked.

‘Gone,’ was all she said.

They saw his picture, crumpled up in the newspaper, below the headline:

IS THIS THE REAL SANTA CLAUS?


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Copyright Akshata Ram

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story or poem in around 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge hosts Priceless Joy and Joe. For more information visit HERE.

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Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and a Great New Year to all, especially those who have read, liked and commented on my blog throughout the year, and have provided me with endless stories to enjoy in return. And a special mention to all those who have taken the time to buy and read my novel – thank you so much, it means so much to me. Here’s to the next year of blogging fun! Iain.


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27 responses to “TABLOID INTRUSION”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Nice one. Just posted mine.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di 🙂

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  2. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    Of course it is, Seasonal greetings to you Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like to think so 🙂

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  3. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Yes, he is the real Santa! That is what I want to believe anyway. I am partially back. Still have lots of problems with my stomach and digestive tract. Hopefully, soon, I will be back 100%. I’m tired of being sick. Great story, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Lovely to hear from you PJ, and to hear you are recovering. Hope you are able to have a good holiday season, Best wishes 🙂

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        Thank you so much Iain, I really appreciate that!

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  4. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Awww, of course he is. I took a similar, yet different route 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s nice to believe 🙂

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  5. may hem Avatar
    may hem

    sweet

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  6. the dark netizen Avatar

    Very interesting! 😀

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  7. James Pyles Avatar

    Another mystery. Ho, ho, ho.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      But do you believe?

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  8. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Oh I had a much more sinister idea of why they were hunting him…. Nice write Iain..

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, I’m sure you did 😉

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  9. Jennie Avatar

    Well done, Iain!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennie 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain. 🙂

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  10. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Nice story. Despite being hunted, dad did his part in Christmas.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Santa can’t let the kids down 😉

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  11. ttay213 Avatar

    Your story speaks the truth- Santa Claus is actually your parents in disguise!

    Nice read!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Or your parent is actually Santa Claus in disguise…

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  12. Ellespeth Avatar

    Left with a sad feeling.

    Nonetheless, Happy Holidays!
    Ellespeth

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Ellespeth, important to remember those not having such a great time over the holidays as well. Hope yours is a happy one 🙂

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