She wanted to be faithful.

But she couldn’t ignore the feelings rising inside her. Her senses heightening. That familiar yearning.

She felt the moistness on her lips, her tongue gently lingering around her mouth. The anticipation of that new rush of excitement, the new smell, the sweet new taste, the forbidden textures.

He had forgiven past betrayals. How much could one man take? They had sworn joint commitment this time.

It was no use. Agnes could not resist that primal urge.

‘And one of those, please.’ She pointed at the jam and cream-filled pastry.

The nagging guilt fluttered by, unacknowledged.


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Copyright Anshu Bhojnagarwala

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Read more of Agnes and Archie’s stories HERE.

142 responses to “FLAMES OF DESIRE”

  1. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    MMMmmm … Valentine sweets in the air. Tempting descriptions of almost anything decadent
    including love. Nicely done, Iain. Have a great weekend.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  2. lisarey1990 Avatar

    The descriptiveness here is wonderful.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Lisa 🙂

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  3. Jo- Creative PTSD Gal Avatar

    This was a great read and being on a diet I feel the same way about certain pastries. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The easiest answer is not to diet unless absolutely necessary! 🙂

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      1. Jo- Creative PTSD Gal Avatar

        I like this answer. I was completely naughty with my diet this weekend. But, it’s Monday and I can just start again 🙂

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  4. Margaret Avatar

    Oh yes. I was totally misled until the twist at the end. Lovely.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Margaret 🙂

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  5. i b arora Avatar

    a great built up to the story.

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  6. Lynn Love Avatar

    Some urges are too strong to ignore … Love build and pay off, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Lynn, I know I have trouble resisting!

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        My pleasure, Iain

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  7. magarisa Avatar

    Ha! You had me fooled to the end. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  8. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Ha. You got me. All of that sensuous language culminating in a pastry. Well done, Iain! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad I drew you in 🙂

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  9. amiewrites74 Avatar

    Ah, loved the build up and then that twist. Those sweets are irresistible!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Amie 🙂

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  10. michaelwynnauthor Avatar

    She’s cheating on her diet, but if there’s no one to see does it matter? Of course, whilst her lips are shut, her hips will tell on her

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The hips don’t lie! 🙂

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  11. Dawn M. Miller Avatar
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      1. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

        Y/W…btw, I am reading your book. It’s very good, so far.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Thank you Dawn, glad to hear you are enjoying it. Hope you like ti by the end as well!

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      3. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

        If I do, I will be sure to let you know 😉

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  12. Still Loved...Still Missed Avatar

    Loved the twist, Iain. Well done.

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  13. Fatima Fakier Avatar

    It sounds as if they were both committing to a diet, and Agnes keeps giving in! Making it harder for him. LOL.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Exactly 🙂

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  14. subroto Avatar

    There is something to be said for a moist cream filled pastry (now I feel dirty writing that). Slick switch of perspectives at the end. Nice one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 😉

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  15. Mrs Marian Green Avatar

    Flames of Desire. I was with you from the start . Must be that my desire for some foods outweighs other desires. Lovely language . Very well written.
    gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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