Battered by the elements he soldiered on.

The years had taken their toll on him, more so than the landscape around him. The erosion of the rocks and gnarling of the trees happened incrementally, while his own physical degradation had hit him in the blink of an eye.

He tramped over the fields and through the woods he knew so well from his youth. The years spent away from his childhood home had failed to erase the memories of playing here with his brother and sister. It felt empty without their laughter to accompany the swaying branches. and trampled damp ground.

He arrived at the upstanding rock in the clearing. With his fingers he traced the cracks and fissures in the surface. He scraped away green, fresh moss and uncovered the writing scratched into the surface.

‘Harry + Arrabelle’

Still here, long after that dream had faded. Those timeless days when they had been school sweethearts. How would his life had turned out of she had only said ‘yes.’

But she hadn’t, and her parents had insisted on involving the police. Statutory rape was the charge. He was 17, she was 15. He had never recovered from that first visit to prison. A life of petty crime, drug addiction and frequent visits at Her Majesty’s Pleasure had followed.

He’d never touched another woman, never known that feeling of love or carnal lust. Never would now. He coughed. Red-tinged mucus spattered across the damp rock. He wiped his face. His breathing was shallow, he could hear the wheeze of his chest as it struggled to gather air.

This seemed as good a place as any. He sat down beneath the rock, sheltered from the breeze, underneath the scratched words that marked the day his life took a different course.

That final timeless moment before darkness descended.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt – Timeless curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

38 responses to “TIMELESS REGRET”

  1. Create Space Avatar

    So much life captured in such a small space. Very poignant!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  2. Sue Vincent Avatar

    That’s a real tragedy, Iain… and one to which many must have fallen victim. We need law, but is not always just.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Unfortunately sometimes the law can be an ass!

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      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        It does its best…

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  3. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    A life wasted so terribly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Abhijit

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  4. Kate @ everywhere and nowhere Avatar

    You’ve managed to create such strong emotion in such a short tale, great take on the prompt 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Kate, always appreciated 🙂

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  5. notestowomen Avatar

    What a tragic story, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Unfortunately so.

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  6. Michele Jones Avatar

    So sad. Young love, lost. Lives ruined. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Michele, much appreciated.

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  7. pensitivity101 Avatar

    A sad tale well told Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di

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  8. Jordy Avatar

    Excellent piece, Iain. Moving, compelling and poignant!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Jordy, always good to hear from you 🙂

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  9. willowdot21 Avatar

    You touch my heart

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Such a compliment, thank you

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        I meant it 💜

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  10. Robert Matthew Goldstein Avatar

    So sad and beautifully written.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Robert

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  11. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    A tragic tale that shows how the law might need a human touch at times.

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  12. Jennie Avatar

    Emotion packed, and very poignant.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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  13. joyroses13 Avatar

    Wow! This just tears at the heart, filled with such emotion, and sadly not so fictional!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      We have all made mistakes in our youth, some worse than others, some punished more than others. Thank you!

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar

        Very true! You are welcome.

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  14. antoniazen Avatar
    antoniazen

    I like the way you’ve taken the timelessness of the stone to narrate the timeline of one life in so few words. Tragic, dark and, as Sue says, there are true fates within the fiction.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Antonia

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  15. Violet Lentz Avatar

    it is always so tragic when one event scars a person so deeply they cannot overcome it.. Very well penned Iain.

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