IAIN KELLY

LAY ME DOWN HERE IN THE SHADE IN THIS SMALL HOLLOW IN THE GROUND

Lay me down here in the shade in this small hollow in the ground,
Let the rush of the world pass me by,
Lay me down and let me rest awhile,
Take the weight off my shoulders for I can carry it no longer,
Release my burden for I am too old to carry on,
My weary head is bowed, my back is broken.

Lay me down here in the shade in this small hollow in the ground,
For life has finally worn me away,
Lay me down and leave me to my peaceful sleep,
The weight must pass to those that can shoulder it,
For I have done all I can and can suffer no more,
My life has been lived, my spirit is free.


shadowed
Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to theΒ #writephoto Prompt – ShadeΒ Β curated over atΒ Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

30 responses to “LAY ME DOWN HERE IN THE SHADE IN THIS SMALL HOLLOW IN THE GROUND”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Seems like several others have mentioned, I am experiencing the dropping of blogs I follow Iain.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I seem to be as well Di, at least it is a common problem, hopefully something WordPress can look at.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        I’ve noticed a few changes in formats and layouts but as far as I know I’m still on the old platform/reader/editor.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Yep, exactly the same here

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      3. pensitivity101 Avatar

        Glad I’m not the only one! I’ve been having a few craft moments lately and beginning to doubt myself!

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Bear Avatar
    Bear

    what a sadly beautiful write here. The phrase “lay me down”… reminds me of many poems read and written over the years. Especially the poem “Do not stand at my grave and weep” by Mary Elizabeth Frye. I’ve read it many a time at Memorial Day.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, I wasn’t planning a poem but that phrase seemed to inspire it.

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Penny Wilson Writes Avatar

    Quite lovely! ❀

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Penny πŸ™‚

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  4. Vernon Avatar

    [ my life has been lived…]

    Are the words my mother told me when her cancer came back.

    It encouraged me to live my life and not just exist.

    And when she passed the first thing I noticed was her spirit being freed.

    I’m grateful.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m so pleased my little piece spoke to you in such a way Vernon.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Janette

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  5. Sue Vincent Avatar

    This reads as if it should be sung, Iain.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not with my voice, but I agree! πŸ™‚

      Like

      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        Not mine either πŸ˜‰

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  6. Joy Lennick Avatar

    So sad and poignant, Iain.

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  7. Alli Templeton Avatar
    Alli Templeton

    Such a beautiful poem, Iain. I can see it as a touching epitaph on a great person’s tomb, or as a poignant but fitting reading at a service of remembrance. You’ve created something quite special here.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

      Like

  8. House of Heart Avatar
    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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  9. jenanita01 Avatar

    Beautifully written and soulful, Iain…

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Widdershins Avatar

    Recognizing when one’s time is done is a bold and beautiful thing. πŸ™‚ … a truly evocative piece.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much for visiting and your kind comment πŸ™‚

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  11. Jennie Avatar

    Lovely, Iain. Really.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennie

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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