The man sat by the frozen river. The ground was covered in frost, the sky was clear and the air crisp.

Covered only by a thin sheet, the cold did not seem to penetrate his skin. He did not shiver or rub heat into his limbs, he only sat in perfect stillness and solitude.

The bright orange light in the east began to rise, casting a warm embrace across the stark landscape.

The man felt his limbs warm as they were kissed by the glow of daylight. He could feel his blood begin to pulse through his legs and feet. He unwrapped the sheet and let the new warmth strike his body.

The ice on the river began to stir, water began to flow in small trickles as the thaw came, tiny cracks sounded as the icy sheen splintered slowly.

Eventually the man stood. He padded away across the soft grass, now free of it’s white, frosty cloak.

There would be a celebration in the village tonight. Another winter had passed, the sun had returned once more and for the next few months it would not set again. They were safe.

He looked forward to seeing his loved ones again after his winter alone by the river.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt – Frozen curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.


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22 responses to “THE WATCHER”

  1. joyroses13 Avatar

    “…kissed by the glow of the daylight.”
    Loved the descriptive words in this post. I felt like I was right there with the man. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar

        You are very welcome!

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  2. magickmermaid Avatar

    Excellent imagery!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  3. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Beautifully told, Iain…and I love the sense of mystery here.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sue, deliberately kept it vague, think it suited the prompt 😉

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      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        It leaves room for imagination 🙂

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  4. willowdot21 Avatar

    Glorious new day, glorious new season 💜

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, always nice to see that warm sun rising up 🙂

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        Yes it always is 💜

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  5. kzmcb Avatar

    Darn. Another story that leaves me wanting to know more. That’s good for you, though.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  6. jenanita01 Avatar

    I enjoyed reading this, but it left me with a few questions…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, I deliberately left it ambiguous and let you decide what may be going on 😉

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      1. jenanita01 Avatar

        Good stories are supposed to make you think…

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  7. Jennie Avatar

    Well done, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennie

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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