Jonny stuffed his cold hands into his coat pockets as he watched his father make the final preparations. He had been helping stack the wood in the back garden for the last week.

Every year he had asked for a bonfire, every year his mother and father told him no.

But not this year. This year his father had been surprisingly enthusiastic. He had even taken a load of old papers from his study and put them at the bottom of the pyre. ‘Perfect for kindling,’ his father had smiled at him.

Now Jonny stood with his mother’s arm around his shoulder as his father added lighter fluid to the base of the bonfire. He then stepped back and took out a box of matches.

‘Ready?’ he asked, though Jonny felt he was directing his question at his mother rather than at him.

His father struck the match just as the blue flashing lights appeared. They were coming from the front of the house, reflecting through windows and against the garden fence. They were accompanied by the sound of two or three cars pulling up out in the street.

His father tossed the match into the fire. With a ‘whoosh’ flames leapt up into the night sky. The boxes of papers at the base instantly burned. Jonny could see them curling up and turning black before disintegrating. Behind him he felt his mother and father squeeze each other in a close embrace.

The urgent shout came from the front of the house. ‘Police! Fraud Squad! Open up this door immediately!’

‘This is great,’ Jonny said, caught up in the excitement and watching the flames dance. ‘Best bonfire night ever.’

His parents brought him into their hug. ‘Sure is,’ his father said.

Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt: Balefire  – curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

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31 responses to “BALEFIRE”

  1. Even the fire will not save him. Nicely told.

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    1. Without evidence, he might just think he can get away with it! 🙂

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      1. They usually do. I just shake my head. They never learn.

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  2. Now what exactly were they using as kindling, I wonder? I guess we’ll never know now… 😉

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    1. That’s the idea – no evidence, no crime… 😉


    1. I’m afraid all the evidence has gone up in flames! 😉

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  3. I bet there will be a few pieces of paper that retain just enough incriminating evidence…

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    1. Depends if they get that fire out in time! 🙂

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  4. brought me in, I was there at the fire! Ignited 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much 😉


  5. Oh My! Just what kind of papers were they burning???? Cheers to them for getting it done just in time….I think! I am going to assume that they are good people, for Jonny needs good parents, and that the papers were just false evidence to frame them over something. 🙂

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    1. Maybe – good people caught up in situation not of their making. Thanks Joy 🙂


  6. This is a great response, Iain.

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    1. Thank you so much Robbie

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  7. Means to an end and some fun too!

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    1. Everyone’s a winner 🙂


  8. This brilliant Ian, sadly there will be incriminating evidence somewhere…… No such thing as a victim less crime and no such thing as getting away Scot free for real people.
    Mind you we can hope for them can’t we.💜

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    1. I’m sure the money trail will lead back to them eventually! Thank you.


  9. It not a criticism, just they always seem to get caught , good twist 💜🦇

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  10. i liked the positive uplifting finish.

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    1. Thank you Jennie 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome, Iain. 🙂

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