IAIN KELLY

DREAMING OF HEATHER

The bed sheets are damp with sweat. The muggy, warm air offers no relief. I unwrap myself and lie on top of the duvet. This weather has to break soon.

It isn’t just the close atmosphere that has made me sweat. I had been dreaming of her again. Vague images of my dream come back to me as I lie in the dark.

A summer’s day. A field of purple. She’s wearing a white dress, translucent in the sunlight. She dances with a flower in her hair: ethereal, light and shimmering. Her smile beckons and delights.

I close my eyes and see her again. Reaching out for her, feeling her soft skin as she takes my hand.

Lying together in the long grass, feeling the warmth of the sun and her touch, our bodies side-by-side.

Birdsong. Daylight pours in through the curtains. Another night has drifted away, and so, once again, has she.

In the distance, there is a rumble of thunder and the first spots of rain hit the window. The weather has finally broken.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt: Dream curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.


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33 responses to “DREAMING OF HEATHER”

  1. Kylie Joy Terundu Avatar

    Lovely, as always.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Kylie

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      1. Kylie Joy Terundu Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  2. Beck Avatar

    It’s a great day when Iain Kelly posts! Beautiful… always

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s the nicest comment ever! Thank you so much Beck 🙂

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  3. Sue Vincent Avatar

    A lovely dream… though thee is an implied sadness there too, perhaps, as the sky weeps.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, a hint of something lost perhaps.

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    A beautiful dream.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome Iain

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  5. Bhagyashree Avatar

    Such a vivid and descriptive post! Loved reading it. 🌸

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, much appreciated

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Penny

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  6. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Wonderful Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  7. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    Extremely well written, Iain. Beware of the women of dreams though, remember what happened to Winston and Julia in 1984 by George Orwell [wink].

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I re-read that recently. Poor Winston, totally out of his depth by the end! Thanks Robbie 🙂

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  8. willowdot21 Avatar

    This is an excellent take Iain so evocative and dream like. I feel a love lost but hopeful still. Maybe she is downstairs making tea or coffee. You took the theme and flew it like a kite.💜💜

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like your positive attitude, I hope you are right 🙂

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        Me too 💜💜

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  9. TanGental Avatar

    You always cram a lot into a little, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, I try to keep the blog stories short, which can lead to some inevitable cramming in! 🙂

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  10. kimbladeswritingblog Avatar

    A beautiful dream, Iain. I hope it comes true for you.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  11. Craig Towsley Avatar

    Pretty gorgeous.
    A suggestion? I’d break the last two lines into seperate paragraphs. Let the hard stop force the loss.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for the suggestion Craig

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  12. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    A simply beautiful piece Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Keith

      Liked by 1 person

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