IAIN KELLY

THE DARKNESS

This wasn’t where he belonged. He was comfortable in town, in the narrow, dirty streets and rundown boarding houses. He liked to be among people, even though he despised them. He felt comfort in the crowd.

But he had to escape. He could feel the darkness descending again. The need. He wanted to resist it. He wanted to stop. He fled to the countryside, a change of scenery.

He needed money, but it wasn’t about the money. He knew that. The money was a byproduct, a reward. It was about power. Getting these women to do what he wanted them to. Preying on them, making them fall in love with him, marrying them, bedding them, making them sign over all their possessions to him.

And when that wasn’t enough, he killed them. It was inevitable it had come to this. Margaret would be the third. He would do with her as he had done with Bessie and Alice. The bath in the room he had let was adequate. The coroners had determined death by drowning in the first two cases – it would work again. So simple, yet so satisfying.

Then it would be back to Edith again. He could stand her for a few weeks, before the yearning would descend once more.

The clouds over the town were growing voluminous and heavy, an auspicious day for a murder. He started the pleasant stroll back along the country path. Now that he had determined to give in to his darkness, a weight lifted from his shoulders.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt: Darkness curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

I’ve recently been reading about George Joseph Smith, a polygamist and serial killer, who seduced a series of women, married them and then stole their money and possessions. Eventually he turned to murder, and when caught and sentenced to death, became famous as the ‘Brides in the Bath’ killer. So when this prompt popped up, it seemed like a good fit!


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40 responses to “THE DARKNESS”

  1. joyroses13 Avatar

    Oh dear! So ominous, yet I was wanting to read more. Yoi had drawn me in. We actually watched a special about serial killers last night. Talk about timing! Kind of like you having read about George. It is eerie how fascinated serial killers are about death.
    Good story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And how we are so fascinated by them – both interested and horrified at the same time. Thank you.

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  2. Beck Avatar

    Ooh, Dark… great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – fascinating and scary that it was a real person too.

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      1. Beck Avatar

        Oh my word?! That’s horrible.

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  3. Shilpa Nairy Avatar

    So much darkness in his mind and attitude. Some Sick people.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Indeed there are. Thanks Shilpa

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  4. Sue Vincent Avatar

    A great story, Iain. You have to wonder at the minds of such people. Where is the line that is crossed and what causes that rift between light and darkness in the soul.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sue, it is indeed hard to fathom what they are thinking – in his case, it was the callousness and coldness with which he committed his crimes. Scary!

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      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        Other human beings as ‘disposable assets’… scary indeed.

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  5. tidalscribe Avatar

    Yes I guessed the brides in the bath, but great writing. I don’t know why we women fall so easily for the bad man!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He did seem to find it awfully easy to convince women to marry him despite not having much going for him at all!

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  6. willowdot21 Avatar

    That gave me the chills , a real lady-killer 😜

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He was indeed, and not a nice man at all it seems!

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        No indeed!

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  7. Sadje Avatar

    Very dark story.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sadje, there are some very dark people out there!

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome Iain. I know!

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  8. kittysverses Avatar

    Chilly tale. 🙂

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  9. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Ohh. Looks like someone Dexter Morgan should pay a visit to! A thrilling story, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, a bit before his time, but definitely would have been on Dexter’s list!

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  10. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Great story Iain

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Liz H Avatar

    A Bluebird for modern times, with a damp, rather than bloody chamber. ..!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Liz, a fascinating and horrifying story – his lack of emotion about it in the telling I read was particularly cold, so I thought I’d add a bit of personality!

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  12. kimbladeswritingblog Avatar

    Hi Iain. A very ‘dark’ story. What a clever way to respond to the photo.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Kim

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  13. Laura M Bailey Avatar

    Bravo! So well written! I wanted more!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Laura 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for the reblog 🙂

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  14. Annette Kalandros Avatar
    Annette Kalandros

    Excellent fit for the prompt! Great story.

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  15. trishsplace Avatar

    Really good story.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trish

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