IAIN KELLY

THE BRIDE’S PARENTS

Agnes was getting all the sympathy.

Each friend that popped round to see her with flowers and fruit and chocolates gave Archie the same look – a shake of the head, a sigh and raised eyebrows.

True, Agnes had her ankle strapped up and needed crutches to get around (although Archie was sure she was milking that).

No one cared about his bruised toes and ankles, or the pain in his back every time he stood up, or the scratches on his back and neck. He was convinced he’d slipped a disc.

It was a miracle no one else on the dance floor had been injured.


Copyright Susan Eames

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Read more Agnes and Archie stories HERE.


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64 responses to “THE BRIDE’S PARENTS”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Sounds like he’s due more sympathy than he’s getting. This could turn nasty with Agnes afterwards

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Just a little bit of sympathy is all he’s looking for. Deep down Agnes knows she was just as much at fault as he was! Thanks Neil

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  2. ceayr Avatar

    Laughing.
    It’s murder on the dance floor.
    Apart from that, how did Archie enjoy the wedding?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He was having a rare old time up until that fatal moment on the dance floor! Thanks CE

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  3. justjoyfulness Avatar

    Maybe Archie should get himself a back brace, that will get him more sympathy 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, good thinking! I will suggest it to him! 😉

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    The visible injuries get more sympathy.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very true Sadje

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        👍😉

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  5. Sandra Avatar

    I think that might have been a dance to remember, by the sound of it. I expect watching it was equally memorable.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The wedding video is a treat! Thanks Sandra 🙂

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  6. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Fiction mirrors true life here. My best friend broke her ankle a couple of months ago dancing at her daughter’s wedding. So I had a good laugh at your story. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle! I hope your friend is recovering and her daughter is still talking to her! 😉

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      1. rochellewisoff Avatar

        Yes she is and yes shg is. 😉

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  7. Susan A Eames Avatar

    Excellent punch line, Iain! Made me laugh.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Susan, glad it gave you a chuckle 🙂

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  8. Tannille Avatar

    Nothing worse than a faker. Poor Archie.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He’s plotting a way to get back at her 😉

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  9. Anita Avatar

    Bad accident on a big day.
    Hope they get well and ready to dance soon 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita!

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  10. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar

    Once again you caught me with a devastating last line. 😄

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Eugenia, glad you liked it 🙂

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  11. granonine Avatar

    So with all the pain, why am I laughing?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Sometimes it’s best to laugh at it all! Thanks Linda

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  12. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Most remember their first dance for the song that played – not in their case though!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s certainly memorable! Thanks Keith 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  13. Liz H Avatar

    Talkin’ ’bout my ge-neration! Yes, we DO dance like a frog in a blender (assuming the bride’s parents were the perps 😂)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh yeah, best to let the inhibitions go – but not too far that injury follows! 😉

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  14. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Faking it to making it, what say? Things turn around on the dance floor. Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Sometimes more than they should! Thanks Neel

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  15. James Dunford Avatar

    Poor Archie, he’ll just have to suffer in silence, it looks like everyone has made their minds up who was at fault.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Perhaps he’s learned that suffering in silence is the best way to deal with Agnes! Thanks James.

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  16. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    LOL! The dance-floor version of the weekend warrior, eh? 🙂 Well done fun!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A good name for the dance they were trying at the time! Thanks 🙂

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

        🙂 Yeah … ouch, though …

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  17. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Excellent! You got me with that last line.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad it got you! Cheers 🙂

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  18. plaridel Avatar

    sounds like somebody who lost in the last u.s. presidential election. at least, he kept his sufferings it to himself unlike the latter. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      No whining in public!

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  19. pennygadd51 Avatar

    Teehee! Loved the humour of your story, Iain! That’s a super last line!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Penny! 🙂

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  20. msjadeli Avatar

    A twist — literal and figurative — that has me laughing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, indeed! 🙂

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  21. draliman Avatar

    With the looks he’s getting, I can’t help thinking he tried something quite advanced he’d seen on Strictly 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh yes, we all think ‘I could do that’, don’t we!!

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  22. michaelwynnauthor Avatar

    The last line made me chuckle. It sounds like there was an almighty collision on the dance floor.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It might not be only these two that left with injuries! Thanks Michael

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  23. Girl in Niagara Avatar

    Poor Archie missing out on the sympathetic attention. I’m curious however about the raised eyebrows. Was this in fact a dance floor collision or something else? Good story Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You think it might have been deliberate?! That’s an interesting twist! 🙂

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      1. Girl in Niagara Avatar

        Made me wonder.

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  24. michael1148humphris Avatar

    Dancing can be a dangerous pastime, I can well remember the times that I called in at my local dance venues,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Best to steer clear of the dancefloors as we get older Mike! 🙂

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  25. Dale Avatar

    Haha! A night to remember, for sure. Now Archie needs to add some “props” so he can get some sympathy, too!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Good idea, he might borrow a crutch from Agnes!!

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  26. writelindy Avatar

    There’s always at least one at any party. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – funny how everyone seems to know someone like this! 😉

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  27. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    I suppose two left feet could be the answer to those falls.
    Dance lessons, perhaps??? LOL
    This was a cute tale, Iain. Have a great weekend … Be Safe
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, I think they’re beyond lessons! Thanks Isadora, hope you are safe and well 🙂

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  28. ahtdoucette Avatar

    Oh my… There is definitely more to this story, but I think we get the gist of it. Fun story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  29. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Hahahaha oh dear. They sound a bit like a klutzy couple! Love the humor here

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie

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