IAIN KELLY

SURVIVAL

I tried not to vomit as I peeled the fetid sock away from my foot. It came off in tattered patches, stuck to the putrid flesh underneath. The pain was excruciating. I had to look. It wasn’t my foot any longer. I didn’t recognise it. It was just a lump of red-purple meat. There were no toenails anymore and nothing that resembled skin. There was blood and tendons and muscles and nerve endings and bone and oozing pus and rotting epidermis. I cursed that careless moment when I had slipped on the boulder and fallen.

I cleaned away what I could. The cold fresh water bringing fresh agony with every dab and wipe. I ripped another section of my vest off and rebandaged the stump. I cried out as I slipped the remains of my foot back inside the crumbling boot.

How much longer could I survive? How far had I come? They were still behind me, searching for me, hunting for me. I needed help. There was no hope of making it through this on my own.

The threatening rumble came from the valley below. They were here. Their sentinels would scour the hillside and latch on to any movement or sound. I had to get away. I stood and winced and bit my tongue as I put weight on my foot.

If there were any other humans left out here, now would be a good time for them to come to my aid.


Written for #FOWC, hosted by Fandango on his blogย This, That and the Other. Todayโ€™s prompt word was:ย Putrid.ย Click on the link to read contributions from other writers.


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19 responses to “SURVIVAL”

  1. Mister Bump UK Avatar

    All I can say is I’m glad I finished my porridge before I looked at WP ๐Ÿคฃ

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I suspect with a word of the day like putrid, there may some posts that make us a little queasy!

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  2. Ramya Vivek Avatar

    Oh my! That’s too scary!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Then my work is done! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thank you

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  3. Tina Stewart Brakebill Avatar

    This is so disgusting! Nice job ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  4. Fandango Avatar

    I felt the pain, I visualized what was left of his foot. My brain could almost conjure up the putrid smell. Well written, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much. Good word today!

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  5. magickmermaid Avatar

    Excellent imagery! I hope he makes it out alive!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He may be our last hope! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Mason Bushell Avatar

    Thats beautifully vivid and very well described, Iain. What poor fellow suffering like that!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Mason, always appreciated.

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      1. Mason Bushell Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  7. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Very graphic Iain. Glad I don’t want any dinner.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Nice rare steak? ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        Ha! if you were closer, I’d thump you!! Besides, I like my steak well done. Have a good day Iain.

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  8. revivedwriter Avatar

    Well, that was excruciatingly vivid. But I’ll look on the bright side: At least I’m not the guy in the story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Girl in Niagara Avatar

    What a visual story. Unsettling, but intriguing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much.

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