Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

ONE LAST SHOW

Ultraviolet spotlights checked. Chairs unfolded.

The old hall was looking good.

Breathe in and get that musty scent. This was where it all started.

They had been on quite a journey since then.

Now, time for one last show.

‘Okay, open the doors.’

He watched them enter from behind the curtain. In they came, gathered from far and wide, by invite only. A couple of no-shows, but they could take care of them later.

‘Lock the doors.’

The band looked at each other, grim smiles all round. Battle-worn and scarred. Crossbows, axes and stakes raised in salute.

‘Let’s rock.’

Copyright Dale Rogerson

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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59 responses to “ONE LAST SHOW”

  1. Mister Bump UK Avatar
    Mister Bump UK

    Those famous farewell gigs… until the next one 🤣

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It seems bands find it hard to resist a reunion tour!

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      1. Mister Bump UK Avatar
        Mister Bump UK

        Having no other way of earning any dosh?

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar
        Iain Kelly

        Cynical! 😉

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    Menacing stuff, Iain. No doubt they had their reasons

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      The clues are there.

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  3. justjoyfulness Avatar
    justjoyfulness

    What? Was it a massacre concert?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Ultraviolet light, wooden stakes and crossbows… it was a massacre of a certain species 😉

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  4. Tannille Avatar
    Tannille

    I feel like I want more… I’m terrible lol.
    PS. It ain’t over til the fat lady sings!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It gets messy 🙂

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    I think they’ve taken “hard rock” to a new level. This has an ominous feel to it. You’ve set the stage well.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Rochelle

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  6. ceayr Avatar
    ceayr

    Bang! Bang! Maxwell’s silver hammer…
    The day more than the music died!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Laughing 🙂

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  7. notestowomen Avatar
    notestowomen

    Sounds like it’s going to be a night of mayhem. This is taking “let’s rock” to a whole new level. And the no-shows will not escape by the sounds of it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      They will get to them later! Thank you.

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      1. notestowomen Avatar
        notestowomen

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  8. Rowena Avatar
    Rowena

    And I’ve been concerned about Covid…
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It has masked the old familiar threats that we used to worry about, including vampires.

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  9. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    Oy. Glad I wrote mine before reading yours!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Both explosive in our own ways!

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      1. granonine Avatar
        granonine

        And now there are three, with “Beyond the Flow.”

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  10. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    Why is The Final Countdown playing in my mind?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      The perfect soundtrack!

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  11. Liz H Avatar
    Liz H

    Hard rock and heavy metal, indeed! There are easier ways to retire, undisturbed by fans….
    😱😱😱🙉🙈🙊

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Got to go out with a bang!

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      1. Liz H Avatar
        Liz H

        …and a rattle of artillery…

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  12. Dora Avatar
    Dora

    Fascinating prelude to anything but a concert. Someone’s out for blood! Whose side is “he” on, I wonder, or is he just the impresario?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Maybe there’s more than one side! Thanks Dora

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  13. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    “we’ll take care of them later” for the no-shows and the raised weapons, I have to suspect something more sinister is afoot than some geezers putting on a last concert. Nicely done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Oh yeah, definitely sinister.

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  14. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    I’d love to see them smoking under the spotlights as the band gets to work…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      That’s the spirit! 🙂

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  15. Sandra Avatar
    Sandra

    Menacing, until you remember just who and what the victims are. Great take, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sandra 🙂

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  16. liz young Avatar
    liz young

    I wonder why so many of their enemies chose to accept their invitation – didn’t anyone have an inkling of danger?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I wonder what they had been promised – it sure wasn’t what they got!

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  17. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    I’ll pass on the invite to their next concert, thank you very much!!
    Good one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      You sure? It’s a hell of a show!

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      1. Dale Avatar
        Dale

        Hah! No, I’m good. I’d like to keep breathing for a little longer…

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  18. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
    Na’ama Yehuda

    I hope some of those “no shows” will skedaddle where no one of these sees them. … 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Maybe they’ll come seeking revenge!

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
        Na’ama Yehuda

        Perhaps, eh?

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  19. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    like they say, all things have to end one way or another.

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  20. Danny James Avatar
    Danny James

    Scary stuff.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Danny

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  21. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar
    Brenda’s Thoughts

    I sure hope they get the no-shows. Just keepin’ the streets safe. Rock on!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s their duty. Thanks Brenda.

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  22. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Oh Oh… that’s gonna be a gig to remember… Well not the audience… they won’t remember… oh dear

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      They will be remembered, but for all the wrong reasons!

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  23. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar
    Inside the Mind of Isadora

    Rockers just can’t resist rockin’ one more time.
    It’s the roar of the crowd … addictive to artists.
    As a former dancer, I can’ tell you it never gets old.
    Nicely done, Iain, as always. Have a wonderful weekend … Be Safe 😷
    Isadora 😎

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  24. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    Slash Rock, huh? Would the vampires be a metaphor for the way an adoring public eventually sucks the life from the band?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Could be! Thanks Penny.

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  25. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    It’s hard to get repeat customers that way.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s a career-ending performance, one way or the other!

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  26. Woman walking Max Avatar
    Woman walking Max

    You transform what looks like a wistful concert scene about to start into the massacre twist at the end. Quite creepy. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  27. Michele Jones Avatar
    Michele Jones

    Sounds like the population needed to be thinned. Loved this.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Michele, hope you are well.

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