Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

THE LAMPLIGHTER

He struggled to push the cart through the thick snow and cursed winter, the short days and the long nights.

He leaned his ladder against a lamppost and climbed. The gas ignited and a shivering orange glow lit the white scene.

White and red.

The body lay under a nearby tree. He scared a fox away as he approached it.

A woman. The Ripper again?

The crunch of footsteps in the snow. A passing policeman.

‘Officer!’ He waved to get his attention.

Too late, he noticed the stain of red on the uniform, illuminated by the orange glow from the lamp.

Copyright Dale Rogerson

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Iain Kelly

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78 responses to “THE LAMPLIGHTER”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    A timely story, Iain. It made me think of the drunk cop who assaulted the woman in Bidford last week

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Neil, glad you made the connection to recent events.

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  2. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    You’ve written it so well, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Sadje 🙂

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        You’re welcome

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  3. ceayr Avatar
    ceayr

    I thought immediately of the Met officer in Kent.
    Neat story too, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks CE, the intention was deliberate.

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  4. Anita Avatar
    Anita

    Terrible moment. Poor man.
    Hope he is not falsely implicated in her murder!
    What to do & whom to trust when those who are supposed to protect the law, flout the rules?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      A very apt question for today. Thanks Anita.

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    Knowing nothing about recent events in Kent, I still thought it was an atmospheric, well-constructed piece.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Rochelle, it was written to make sense with or without the knowledge of recent events (a woman was killed while walking home late at night in London and her body found in Kent a week later, a police officer has been charged with her murder).

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  6. Sandra Avatar
    Sandra

    Timely piece. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sandra

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  7. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    I did not expect the link, to the sad event in Kent.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Michael, it can be read with or without the link in mind, but it was a reflection of it.

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  8. Tannille Avatar
    Tannille

    Ooo now that’s a twist. I guess he’s next?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s unlikely our killer is going to let him walk away unscathed!

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      1. Tannille Avatar
        Tannille

        Hope the better man wins. It would make a great novel.

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  9. Zelda Rene Avatar
    Zelda Rene

    Well done in every way–atmospheric, suspenseful, and very disturbing. In the US we’ve been overwhelmed with violence yet again–and distrust of police plays a large part.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Absolutely the same here, although I do try and temper my thoughts on the police with the caution that their actions in many cases are dictated from the lawmakers and leaders who set the tone for what follows.

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      1. Zelda Rene Avatar
        Zelda Rene

        You’re so right about that, Iain–what we’re hearing as this “trial of the century” is about to begin here, the defense will include that the officer was “following procedure”…but too bad a man had to die. There need to be changes in the system.

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  10. trentpmcd Avatar
    trentpmcd

    Ooops… I hope Mr. Lamplighter is a good sprinter! It is difficult when those who are supposed to protect become those who we need to be protected from…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      A quandary that is prevalent to this day. Thanks Trent.

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  11. magickmermaid Avatar
    magickmermaid

    Good twist at the end! I hope the lamplighter is able to escape!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Sadly, I don’t fancy his chances in the snow! Thank you.

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  12. Pradeep Avatar
    Pradeep

    Sad for a life lost.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks for stopping by.

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  13. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    It’s a sorry situation when we need protecting from those who should protect us. A timely take Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Keith – a sorry mess we’re in indeed.

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  14. Liz H Avatar
    Liz H

    Oh now this is a drabble that starts with a full-on run!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Liz, glad you liked it 🙂

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  15. Dora Avatar
    Dora

    I like this take on the Ripper which you’ve set up so brilliantly. What better camouflage than as a policeman, perhaps even a real policeman?! A better theory than Prince Albert anyway :>)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Ha, yeah, I’m not buying the Prince Albert theory at all. Thanks Dora.

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  16. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    It’s not just the snow that leaves a cold sense of foreboding. I think he’s just lit his last lamp.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      For sure, thanks Linda.

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  17. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Iain, you wrote this just right. The ending, where he saw the blood on the uniform in the orange light, was truly chilling.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you! Very kind.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You’re welcome.

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  18. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    Oh what a horrible thing to discover. And very timely, from the comments (didn’t hear about it on this side of the pond).

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Dale. The incident itself has gone on to cause a lot of protests, particularly by woman, which has led to further controversy with the police. It has not been handled at all well by those in charge – as we are becoming used to.

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      1. Dale Avatar
        Dale

        Oh man… police brutality of all sorts happening all over the world. Not a good thing.

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  19. AshleyDannie Avatar
    AshleyDannie

    Wow! What a twist! I like it!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much!

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  20. Bear Avatar
    Bear

    An idyllic scene, sudden not so idyllic after all. Good one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  21. jenne49 Avatar
    jenne49

    You really build up the atmosphere, Iain, right into the twist at the end.What a good story. And yes, the sad parallel with our day.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks, much appreciated.

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  22. Nova Avatar
    Nova

    How unfortunate that kindness is so easily disregarded under ignorance of assumption.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Ignorance and assumption are two of the biggest blights on our society today.

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      1. Nova Avatar
        Nova

        You are not kidding =(

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  23. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
    Na’ama Yehuda

    Shudder, shudder … and not from the cold …
    Well crafted, Iain! (and … I don’t like that policeman….)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      No, nobody does! Thanks so much.

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
        Na’ama Yehuda

        🙂

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  24. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar
    theministryofshrawleywalks

    Very apt, and very relevant unfortunately. Brilliant stuff Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  25. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    The very person who’s supposed to keep us safe… very topical.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  26. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar
    neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS

    I hadn’t read about the Kent incident. Still, the story made an impact. Well written, Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Neel

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  27. Liz Young Avatar
    Liz Young

    Good timely story – my world has been rocked in recent years by the realisation that we cannot automatically trust the police.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s going to take them a long time, if ever, to rebuild the sort of trust they once had with the public.

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  28. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar
    Alicia Jamtaas

    The first line took me to Wow! a story about a lamplighter, what fun! then the horrid idea of a dead body was presented. So very well don.

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  29. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    a murderer in uniform. he’ll be caught for sure but when is the question.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      But will he? He now has a lamplighter to frame!

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  30. Woman walking Max Avatar
    Woman walking Max

    A well written story with topical resonances sadly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  31. ahtdoucette Avatar
    ahtdoucette

    Uh-oh. Maybe that’s why he never got caught. Well written.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s one theory for sure. Thanks Anne

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  32. Susan St.Pierre Avatar
    Susan St.Pierre

    Yikes! Wonderful story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Susan

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  33. athling2001 Avatar
    athling2001

    Whoops! Lovely story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  34. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    Perfect pacing and excellent twist. You squeezed a lot into that. I hadn’t heard about the murder in Kent but was still able to enjoy the story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks so much

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  35. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Ooooo oh oh. The killer may have another body this week. Well done

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Laurie

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  36. jwdwrites Avatar
    jwdwrites

    Very topical, between the trial of George Floyd’s killer in America and the policeman accused of killing Sarah Everard. The shivering orange glow was particularly nice. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks so much, yes, a reflection on modern times.

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