IAIN KELLY

THE ACTIVIST

Her little hands scrawl circles. She places an assortment of toys inside them – Lego, a pencil. a toy truck. She babbles in words that make sense to only her.

She looks up seeking recognition for a job well done. I nod and smile and say that’s lovely. She accepts it and begins the process again.

‘Okay, time’s nearly up, if you want to say your goodbyes.’

I don’t move.

She smiles and gives a tiny wave as she is led out the door. I’ll see her in another month. Was it worth it? To give her a future? To save the planet?

‘Okay. let’s go. Back to your cell.’


Copyright Jennifer Pendergast

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

The UN Climate Convention – COP26 – is taking place 100 metres away from my workplace at this very moment. Quite bizarrely, President Biden, Prime Minister Boris, Greta Thunberg and Leonardo DiCaprio (along with 120 World Leaders and thousands of activists and demonstrators) are occupying the same little piece of land as I have grown up around, and hopefully making some vital changes to the way we live our lives and treat our planet. We’ll see.

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

62 responses to “THE ACTIVIST”

  1. Ain Avatar
    Ain

    So well done…what a conundrum…….a real question causing much thought.

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    Great twist at the end, and the unanswered question of what he did

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  3. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar

    A masterful misdirection. Thought-provoking point. Well done, Dad or Mom

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Eugenia 🙂

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  4. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Brilliant piece of misdirection. Which left questions open as to the protagonist

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain

    Questions. So many questions. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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  6. Mason Bushell Avatar

    What an interesting piece. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Mason

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  7. Liz H Avatar

    Poignant. A scenario shared by many parents…
    And on the side, look at you, on stage left from what we hope will slow the descent! Cool…and fingers crossed.

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  8. Bear Avatar
    Bear

    Really feel for the parent in this one. Great write.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  9. Dale Avatar

    Heartbreaking – we don’t need to know what he did or didn’t do. I like to think that he is being the best parent he can be in his situation. Beautifully done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dale, much appreciated 🙂

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  10. trentpmcd Avatar

    Nicely done. Interesting that you are so close to where today’s headlines are coming from…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      So close, but of course all fenced off so can’t really see anything behind the closed doors!

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  11. elmowrites Avatar

    Ah, the question for so much of what we do. But is nobody prioritises long-term good, we’ll get to see the alternative all too soon

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There certainly have to be sacrifices. Thank you.

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  12. Anita Avatar

    That’s pretty close to your workplace, Iain.
    Wonderfully incorporated the COP26 theme in your story.
    Very relevant.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita

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  13. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    A very powerful story, Iain! No wonder your muse took you there. I’m sure it’s been a difficult time getting any work done, and exciting at the same time. Fingers and toes crossed but don’t feel hopeful.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Brenda. A lot of talk and announcements so far, but we won’t know if it’s a success for years to come.

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  14. Bill Avatar

    A wonderful story that invites your readers to engage in the story. Nicely done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Bill

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      1. Bill Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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  15. pennygadd51 Avatar

    How brave of you to write your story from the mum’s perspective. She’s presumably been imprisoned for her activities as an activist. What sacrifices some people are making to convince the rest of us of the urgency of our climate predicament! To lose so much of your baby’s early months would be a brutally heavy punishment for a mum.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Penny, I’m glad you saw the full meaning of the story, I wasn’t sure everyone would make the connection. Much appreciated.

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  16. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    I don’t know what he’d done, to get himself in the cell, in the pursuit of maybe giving her a future (or thinking that he would), but the realities of costs we cannot perceive, and the price our children will have to pay for our folly, excess, stubbroness, and selfishness are … yeah … insanity.

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  17. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    A great little tale with a timely nod to events happening on your doorstep.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith

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  18. GHLearner Avatar

    Great story Iain. Was it worth it? That depends on what s/he did and where s/he lives. You don’t go to jail in most European countries unless you are really violent. And that’s definitely not worth it. Because it doesn’t accomplish anything. In autocratic countries on the other hand their mere existance has impact…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very true, much like the UN conference, we won’t know if it’s worth it until we see how the next few decades go!

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  19. Elizabeth Young Avatar

    Well written. I agree that we should sort out our priorities, but there are others way – breaking the law willy-nilly leads to anarchy.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      True Liz, but at what point do we reach that last resort?

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  20. Patricia Clair Avatar
    Patricia Clair

    Now, I really want to know what he or she did! Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Patricia 🙂

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  21. plaridel Avatar

    win or lose, i think it’s all worth the sacrifice.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Let’s hope so.

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  22. dhak Avatar

    Iain,
    I imagine it must add an extra poignancy that it’s happening in your neck of the woods.
    pax,
    dora

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  23. Lorraine Avatar

    Let’s hope the parent’s sacrifice was enough to balance out the folly of her/his generation.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      True! Thank you

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  24. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oooo fascinating last line. I think, given her sweet innocent play it might have been worth it. Clever tale.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie 🙂

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  25. susanrouchard Avatar

    Eerie Iain. Hopefully, improvements to come.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Fingers crossed.

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  26. draliman Avatar

    Sounds like he/she maybe went a bit too far, but I really hope it was worth it.

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  27. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Questions, questions, amd then some more! Brilliant misdirection.

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  28. granonine Avatar

    I wonder how much change there will be when they all board their jets, or their gas-guzzling cars, and go back home to houses that are worth millions (well, maybe not Greta), to chauffeur-driven luxury limos, and all the other trappings of modern politics. It’s hard to believe a word they say when one investigates how they live.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Setting a better example would certainly help convince the rest of the world to clean up their act! Thanks Linda

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  29. Woman walking Max Avatar

    Such a gentle and poignant story Iain, you convey such a sense of intimacy and loss.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much

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  30. ahtdoucette Avatar

    Powerful story and also what an honor it must be to be so close. Here’s hoping for real, timely change.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Fingers crossed. Thanks Anne.

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