Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

EXPECTO PATRONUM

She watched him, sitting quietly in the corner, a book in front of him, lost in his imagination. She willed him to look up, to notice her. They were kindred spirits, him and she. Every day she saw him in the library. They were both lonely lovers of books, seeking the fulfilment of magical stories, the wholeness of the perfect tale to fall in love with, the perfect character to obsess over.

She approached. ‘We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided..’

‘Harry Potter sucks.’ He got up and left.

Copyright Ted Strutz

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

I never got Harry Potter, or the obsession with it, but many continue to love it! The girl’s greeting is a quote from the books. Expecto Patronum is a spell that uses a happy memory to conjure something positive. Or something.

Iain Kelly

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85 responses to “EXPECTO PATRONUM”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    Nice one, Iain. The character she had created in her mind was not quite the one that existed in his body

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      A similar delusion I suffer from in life often too.

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  2. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Not a fan of HP!?😱

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I know, there are some who don’t enjoy it out there! 😉

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        Bad taste. It means that they weren’t suited at all.

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    Things aren’t always what they seem, are they? Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. quiall Avatar
    quiall

    HaHaHa! Unexpected and hilarious!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you 😊

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  5. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    What? How can you not? I tease. To each his own. She needs to find another kindred spirit…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Maybe the library isnt the best place to look for love in real life! Thanks Dale.

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      1. Dale Avatar
        Dale

        Hey… ya never know… 😉

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  6. Yamini Ali MacLean Avatar
    Yamini Ali MacLean

    Hari OM
    LOL – nice one! I did, eventually, get around to reading them all, but as a devotee of both Tolkein and Pratchett, I found so much that was ’emulative’ (that is being gentle) about the first book I nearly didn’t persevere. YAM xx

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I confess to not reading the books beyond trying the first one. The films I saw I didn’t enjoy. Just not for me, and I too am a massive Pratchett fan 🙂

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  7. Liz H Avatar
    Liz H

    Potterheads are not always recognizable at first glance. Time for her to wander out of the Chidren’s library….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      They should have a special symbol to easily identify each other 🙂

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      1. Liz H Avatar
        Liz H

        😆😆🤓

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  8. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    I read the first book and was not lured to the second. I love the way you ended your story 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Linda

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  9. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    A classic case of imagination writing checks that reality can’t cash. Wonderful storytelling in just a few words.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks so much 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  10. trentpmcd Avatar
    trentpmcd

    All I can say is that at least she wasn’t reading Twilight!! lol. She’ll find the right book nerd some day.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Ha, another series that was lost on me!

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  11. pensitivity101 Avatar
    pensitivity101

    I’m not a fan either!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It certainly seems to divide.

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  12. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    Libraries are such interesting places. So much can be found, so much decided. Well done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Bill

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  13. TheDreamGirlWrites Avatar
    TheDreamGirlWrites

    Oh how could he!!!
    He could have just said bye or not interested…
    Tragic
    (I think HP deserves that hype. Especially the books. And especially if you are on of those (like me) who grew up reading these books!)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Lol, it certainly seems to be a childhood memory for many, perhaps I was just too old when they first appeared.

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      1. TheDreamGirlWrites Avatar
        TheDreamGirlWrites

        But have you actually read the books anytime or were you not able to get through the books?
        It is very in the fantasy genre!

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar
        Iain Kelly

        I tried the first one once. Just not interested, never made it to the end. Not a patch on Terry Pratchett’s Discworld.

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      3. TheDreamGirlWrites Avatar
        TheDreamGirlWrites

        Oh no :/
        Oh, what’s that about?

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      4. Iain Kelly Avatar
        Iain Kelly

        Oh, you need to read Pratchett if you like fantasy. I will leave it for you to investigate and discover.

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      5. TheDreamGirlWrites Avatar
        TheDreamGirlWrites

        I’ll add it to my to read list! Thank you!

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      6. TheDreamGirlWrites Avatar
        TheDreamGirlWrites

        Okay, so I just searched for his books.. and all of them seem like a big part of the series Discworld!
        Do I have to read them in order or can I jump in anywhere?

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      7. Iain Kelly Avatar
        Iain Kelly

        Either works. I would read in order, and they get better as they go along.

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      8. TheDreamGirlWrites Avatar
        TheDreamGirlWrites

        Okay! I’ll do that 🙂
        Thanks!

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  14. magickmermaid Avatar
    magickmermaid

    Thank goodness she found out before wasting any time with someone so unsuitable!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Better to know sooner! 🙂

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  15. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    You built the anticipation nicely, and then punctured my lovely romantic balloon, making me grin. Nice story, Iain
    PS I don’t ‘get’ Harry Potter either, although it’s done a massive amount to bring kids to be avid readers.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It certainly has done good in that way. Glad you enjoyed Penny.

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  16. CGraith Avatar
    CGraith

    A memorable little tale! Thank you!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks so much!

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  17. CGraith Avatar
    CGraith

    A memorable, little tale. Thanks!

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  18. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    Oh dear, perhaps she should have quoted something from 50 Shades of Grey!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Now that’s a different story, as they say!

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  19. Pooja Mahimkar Avatar
    Pooja Mahimkar

    Love Love Love Haryy Potter!!!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      He was definitely not for you then!

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  20. Vartika Avatar
    Vartika

    I am a big fan of HP.. so I can feel girl’s disappointment. I like the the story. Nicely done

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you!

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  21. liz young Avatar
    liz young

    I was too old really to appreciate Harry Potter, though I read all but the last two books. My era was Enid Blyton!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Now there is a good children’s author 😀

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  22. oldentimes Avatar
    oldentimes

    I can relate to that.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      😉

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  23. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar
    Inside the Mind of Isadora

    We don’t always get what we want. A most enjoyable read, Iain. I liked it very much.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you 😊

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  24. Margaret Avatar
    Margaret

    And she learned never to judge a book by its cover. Love the ending. (Also the beginning.)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you! 😊

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  25. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar
    Brenda’s Thoughts

    Poor thing! Her bubble was burst. He wasn’t what she imagined him to be. Has happened to me a time or two. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      People rarely live up to imagined expectations! Thanks Brenda

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  26. jillyfunnell Avatar
    jillyfunnell

    Ah, things not jelling one bit with this pair then. Perhaps like your MC – and definitely like some others here – I can’t compare JK’s work with the glorious other-worldly imagination of Pratchett.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Jilly

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  27. i b arora Avatar
    i b arora

    i could never read more than ten pages of any HP. for me Alice in wonderland is the wonder book

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      An excellent choice 😀

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  28. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    Looks like that was exactly the wrong quote with which to woo him 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Or exactly the right quote to rule him out as an acceptable friend! Thanks

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  29. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    what a turn down. i didn’t expect it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      No happy ending this week.

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  30. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar
    Eugenia Parrish Author

    So she’ll be more careful about judging people by what she’s longing to find. I’ve had my life nearly ruined so many times by someone imposing their expectations on me that I’m afraid I have no sympathy for her. On the other hand, he really didn’t need to be so rude about it, so she’s better off. Very thought-provoking, especially judging by some of the reactions you got.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It was intended as humorous rather than a thought-provoker, but yes, it has provoked some interesting replies, depending on which side of the Potter debate you sit on!

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      1. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar
        Eugenia Parrish Author

        It’s interesting that rather than laughing, so many of us had memories of misguided expectations or disappointment. You struck a nerve, I think, without meaning to. But yes, a lot of the disappointments were related to friends and loved ones who just don’t get HP! 😀

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  31. mjlstories Avatar
    mjlstories

    My daughter read Harry Potter and my son didn’t but enjoyed having them read to him by his Dad doing various voices. I think they’re a good read but suffer from hype – they are only books!!! These two library loners might just have got on if they’d got past the books!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yes, I agree, I think the over hype is part of the problem, and a fanatical fan base that won’t see past some flaws or that other books exist out there that might be better!

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  32. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
    Na’ama Yehuda

    Ah, apparently shared interest does not always a good enough glue make… 🙂
    Well penned! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, sometimes a shared interest can lead to conflict!

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  33. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Ouch! Her heart broken in a single moment. Well done. So he wasn’t quite as perfect as she’d imagined

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Few people ever are!

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  34. GHLearner Avatar
    GHLearner

    That was fun. Poor kid though, and she went to so much trouble to pick out a good quote.
    I used to be a huge HP fan, but didn’t like the later books. There’s a lot of fun and imagination in there, but also bullying, prejudice and classism of an unexpected kind. And the conclusion was simply awful, IMO.

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  35. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    You can’t judge a book by its… Hmm…

    I found Harry Potter entertaining, but not obsession-worthy. Outside Tolkien and Martin, I’m not a big fan of fantasy and magic.

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  36. ahtdoucette Avatar
    ahtdoucette

    Haha. I have definitely been there with human interaction. Well, okay, then. Thanks for a fun read.

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  37. larry trasciatti Avatar
    larry trasciatti

    Harry Potter has never appealed to me either. Maybe someday very soon each will find an available bookworm with truly compatible tastes

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Wouldn’t that be nice!

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  38. joyroses13 Avatar
    joyroses13

    Poor girl! So much for the dream in her head. Stupid guys ruin it all the time! 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Stupid guys ruin everything! 😉

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar
        joyroses13

        😄😄

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