Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

THE SECRETS OF A LADY

The detective looked at the cluttered space. Perhaps the motive for killing a harmless elderly woman, known for her successful fiction novels, was hidden among the mess on this desk.

He pulled open a drawer, careful to avoid the stains of red blood. Nothing there, but when he tried to close it, the drawer hit something.

He pulled the drawer out and reached into the gap behind it. His fingers closed round an object stuck to the wall.

Three old 3.5 inch floppy disks. A handwritten sticky label – ‘The Real Story.’

Somehow he knew. The answer was on these disks.

Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Iain Kelly

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74 responses to “THE SECRETS OF A LADY”

  1. OIKOS™- Art, Books & more Avatar
    OIKOS™- Art, Books & more

    Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.

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  2. OIKOS™- Art, Books & more Avatar
    OIKOS™- Art, Books & more

    Great! Thanks for sharing, and have a nice day! xx Michael

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Michael, you too 🙂

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  3. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    She may have become a character of her own imagining!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It could all be a dream! Thanks Neil

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  4. Linda Curry Avatar
    Linda Curry

    Now to find a computer still operating that takes floppy disks.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Someone will have one in a loft somewhere! 🙂

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  5. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Very intriguing story Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Sadje 🙂

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  6. Yamini Ali MacLean Avatar
    Yamini Ali MacLean

    Hari OM
    A tale that requires expanding!!! (Like the bloggy makeover too…) YAM xx

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you (gearing up for the new book launch with a new look!)

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  7. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    Good luck reading those floppy discs. LOL. I’m sure there’s a computer geek out there who can solve the mystery. Well constructed story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Someone will still have a disk drive for them 🙂 Thanks Rochelle

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  8. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    Well, good grief! Now I’m left imagining all sorts of explanations. . . .

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      She obviously has the truth about someone who doesn’t want it coming out…! Thanks Linda 🙂

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  9. trishsplace Avatar
    trishsplace

    How great that you’ve a book coming!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Trish, looking forward to people reading it 🙂

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  10. elmowrites Avatar
    elmowrites

    Oooh! The beginnings of a bigger mystery for sure. I wonder how Rochelle feels about being murdered this week… hopefully it won’t happen too many times!!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      🙂 I thought she might have mentioned it, but maybe she thought it best not to! Thank you 🙂

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  11. Anita Avatar
    Anita

    The killer left the answer – the motive for killing? No killer will leave such clue.

    The lady had secrets that she had documented in the disks ages ago, right?
    The Missing Girl – Anita Sabat

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      That’s right, I guess the killer didn’t know about the hidden back up disks behind the drawer 😉

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  12. Anita Avatar
    Anita

    I too have a detective in my story this time!

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  13. scr4pl80 Avatar
    scr4pl80

    Great intro. Immediately thought of Jessica Fletcher. Nice new blog space 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Janet! Preparing for the new book launch with a blog refresh, glad you like it 🙂

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  14. magickmermaid Avatar
    magickmermaid

    Very interested to know what’s on those discs!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Have you got a floppy disk reader?! 😉

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  15. creatingahome Avatar
    creatingahome

    Great story! The killer sounds either volatile or they underestimated the old lady.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Old ladies are often underestimated – do so at your peril! 🙂

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  16. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    A lucky break for the detective! Lovely fluent writing, as always, Neil.

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    1. pennygadd51 Avatar
      pennygadd51

      I must be going doolally! I meant Iain, of course. Sorry!

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    2. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Penny 🙂

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  17. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar
    Inside the Mind of Isadora

    He sure got lucky when the drawer wouldn’t close.
    A bit of an old style disc for him to work with. I’m
    sure it will be worth it to solve the mystery. Nice one, Neil.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Isadora

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  18. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar
    Inside the Mind of Isadora

    HA HA HA … I read the comment by Penny above and had Neil still on my mind.
    Mmmm … Neil must be leaving his mark behind, and Penny and I found it. I suppose
    we’re detectives too, Iain. HA HA HA

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      🙂 I was starting to get a little paranoid! 🙂

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      1. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar
        Inside the Mind of Isadora

        No need … just my distracted mind. HA HA

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  19. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    I like how you split that last bit into two sentences. Too bad the old broad had to die first 😦 Good story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      But she will have the last laugh it seems 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        🙂

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  20. trentpmcd Avatar
    trentpmcd

    Wait, where am I? I don’t recognize the place… Anyway. I am sure there are many secrets still on old disks. Hopefully we can still find a drive that still works. At least they weren’t 5″ floppies, or, worse yet, 8 inch! (I don’t know if I have seen an 8″ since I was in college.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yes, I remember those big floppies that were actually floppy! Thanks Trent, hope the blog revamp wasn’t too confusing! 🙂

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      1. trentpmcd Avatar
        trentpmcd

        After the first 1/10 second not too confusing. It’s a nice, very clean look.

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  21. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    it looks like she wrote about her murder without even realizing it. anyway, congrats on the new look of your blog. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks, all set for book launch 🙂

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  22. GHLearner Avatar
    GHLearner

    Hah, I have an external USB Floppy drive. Let me write you a quotation, then I’ll provide the data for you. 🙂 Great take, Iain, and I like the new layout.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks, my detective may be in touch! 🙂 Thanks, all set for book launch next month!

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  23. Reena Saxena Avatar
    Reena Saxena

    You remind me of the TV Show “Murder, She Wrote…”

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yes, the photo has that vibe too 🙂

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  24. Sandra Avatar
    Sandra

    Floppy disks hey? That’s a trip down memory lane. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I do find comfort in the old tech, it’s nice that vinyl and cassettes are making a comeback! Thanks Sandra

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  25. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    Sounds like the start of your next novel.Nice one Neil – sorry, Iain! Like the new look by the way.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Haha! Neil/Iain, I don’t mind! Thanks Keith, it seems to have gone done well with the FriFic readers.

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  26. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    Those disks must be read. Indeed, they contain the questions for which we now have he answer. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Bill, a perfect way to look at it 🙂

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  27. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Murder on the Floppy Disks, yes it’s a title not used by Agatha Christie 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Hmm, not sure it’ll be a best seller with that title! 🙂

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  28. Margaret Avatar
    Margaret

    Entertaining story, with a tantalising mystery. I’d like to know the answer too, – ‘the real story’. I hope your MC shares it when he finds out. I really like this one. And I just had to laugh at your word of warning about old ladies in a previous comment. So true.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Margaret, glad you liked this one! 🙂

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  29. Vartika Avatar
    Vartika

    Reading floppy disk, difficult task. Intriguing story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Vartika

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  30. poetisatinta Avatar
    poetisatinta

    Great a greater mystery to unfold!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  31. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    Ah-ha! Now the hard part, finding something that can read 3.5 inch floppy disks. I bet everybody said the same thing. Oh well.

    Your blog looks different. I thought I was in the wrong place for a 3.5 inch second.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks, someone will have an old PC out there that can read the disks.

      New look for new book launch, hope you like it!

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  32. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar
    Eugenia Parrish Author

    Oh, this is great! What a lead-in to a mystery short story? Even a novel?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Eugenia. We shall see…

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  33. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Oh, an intriguing mystery! I’d read more of this.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Laurie

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  34. oneta hayes Avatar
    oneta hayes

    Please tell me what was on them. Pretty please. A whiney please. 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Haha! I will have to think of a sequel! 🙂

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      1. MythRider Avatar
        MythRider

        I agree. There must be a story to those floppy disks worth knowing.
        But I want to know what the not so real story is that must be retold by those floppy disks. I see more than one squeal on the horizon. ;0) Or maybe the novel someone earlier suggested.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar
        Iain Kelly

        I’ll need to find the time to write it! Thanks 🙂

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      3. MythRider Avatar
        MythRider

        Time! Yes. I understand.

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  35. Rowena Avatar
    Rowena

    I’m sure my husband has at least one old computer which could read that either in the garage or our office.
    They made it quite easy leaving that disk in the desk. Bit of a gift.
    Great story and casts more light on this week’s effort.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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