IAIN KELLY

THE HANGING ROOM

Somewhere in the rural midwestern USA, after the war has ended.

‘Why bomb a barn way out here? They’ve blown the roof right off.

‘Never had a roof. Was meant to be like this.’

‘Why have a barn with no roof. What was it for?’

‘Hangings.’

‘Really?’

‘Yeah. Could get about ten on each bar. Fill ’em all, about two hundred in one go.’

‘That’s appalling.’

‘It was beautiful, seeing them all hanging together, swaying in the breeze, all those colours.’

‘How can you say that? It’s so evil, so inhumane. The horror…’

‘Wait. What?’

‘The bodies… Hanging there…’

‘Flowers. Hanging baskets… Of flowers.’

‘Right, yes… I knew that’s what you meant.’

Copyright Bill Reynolds

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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59 responses to “THE HANGING ROOM”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    The apocalypse may not be so bad after all. Good one, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Better with flowers. Thanks Neil

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  2. Sadje Avatar

    Haha! Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Nice little, if not grisly, misdirect. 😉 Hanging flowers are so much nicer than hanging bodies.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I agree, definitely know what I ould prefer in my garden!! Thanks Rochelle 🙂

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  4. Anita Avatar

    Flowers are lovely!
    No bodies or war, please.
    We have a similar theme for our story this week- garden 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita 🙂

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  5. Liz H Avatar

    Chilling alternative to a “Greenhouse Effect,” though not completely out of the question. Margaret Atwood nailed it, so did you in this micro fiction on the psychological tenor of the times.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, nice company to be mentioned with! 😉

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  6. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I was hoping there’d be a pleasant twist at the end and you did it in style!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, I’m glad there was too!

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  7. Vartika Avatar

    Thank God flowers were hanging. Good one Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  8. msjadeli Avatar

    Ha Ha! You got me. Horrific, then hilarious, the best of both worlds.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – glad it managed a surprise! 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome, Iain 🙂

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  9. Alana Mautone (@RamblinGarden) Avatar

    Imagining someone who would hang flower baskets in the middle of a war. That would be quite a person. Alana ramblinwitham

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Alana

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  10. CGraith Avatar

    We were both thinking ‘funny’ today! That brought a smile.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  11. creatingahome Avatar

    Loved it.
    Made me laugh.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much 🙂

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  12. Danny James Avatar

    Glad it was flowers. Our history of hangings is a sad part of our nation.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s not a good look for anyone. Thanks Danny

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  13. R.M. Carlson Avatar

    Great writing! Loved the twist at the end.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rosemary 🙂

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  14. Forestwood Avatar

    So well written I was tricked for a while. So relieved it was clarified that some hangings are nice.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked, and that it turned out well this time!

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  15. Dale Avatar

    Haha! That twist left my neck competing with Linda Blair’s in the Exorsist!
    Wonderfully done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dale, glad you liked it 🙂

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      1. Dale Avatar

        It was great fun. I love redirects.

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  16. Bill Avatar

    Well done, Iain. Even though I suspected the outcome, when I reached the end of your story, I had to laugh. I’m still smiling. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Always good to hear I’ve raised a smile, thanks Bill 🙂

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  17. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    What a wonderful twist! Now the song Forbidden Fruit is running through my mind

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Alicia 🙂

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  18. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    I was hoping it wasn’t what I was thinking as I read your story, Iain.
    Yes, hanging baskets of beautiful flowers is a nicer thought.
    I hope your book is doing well. Good Luck on more sales.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Isadora! Sales seem steady at the moment! Hope you get a achance to check it out too 🙂

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      1. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

        I will be doing that. 👍🏻

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  19. David Stewart Avatar

    Yeah, that’s a pretty important detail. 🙂 The image you drew reminded me of the strings of dried persimmons in Korea that they’d hang up to dry.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks David – I’m glad that’s the image it brought to mind, and not something else! 🙂

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  20. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Bahahahaha hilarious !
    Nice twist Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 Thanks Laurie

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  21. GHLearner Avatar

    You had me fooled completely, I gagged. Now I don’t know if I should laugh or cry. Flowers make everything better. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, I like that sort of reaction to my writing! 🙂

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  22. Russell Gayer Avatar

    Better than walking the plank, I suppose.
    That would be tough for a flower.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Russell

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  23. granonine Avatar

    Outstanding, Iain. You had me visualizing bodies for just a moment there 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Linda!

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  24. Sandra Avatar

    That’s a coincidence. Looking for a new greenhouse right now and wondering whether to have a rail for hanging… baskets of course. Nice one, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra 🙂

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  25. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    All right. You got me. I was thinking, “The weight of all those bodies would bring down the whole barn.” Well played, sir.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m worried you were thinking about the physics of it! 😉

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  26. authorfleurl Avatar

    ‘Say it with the flowers’ used to be a popular jingle for Interflora back in the 80s. I love the twist at the end, well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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