RAMBLIN’ MAN

It would be nice to stay, sitting in his chair under the trees, letting the sunlight warm his face.

But his instinct said it was time to move on. He’d done all he could here: broke a few hearts, sowed some seeds of dissent, encouraged a few minor indiscretions.

In time, the place would fall, they always did, and he would call back to see the fruits of his labour. Until the then, it was time to go.

Soon all that was left was the settling dust of the fresh tyre tracks, and the echo of his voice singing along to the car stereo.

‘Please allow me to introduce myself…’

Copyright Bill Reynolds

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

For no particular reason, The Rolling Stones song ‘Sympathy for the Devil’ inspired this little tale.

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

‘The Barra Boy’ is available now. You can find all the information for getting a copy HERE.

49 responses to “RAMBLIN’ MAN”

  1. Now that’s who we need for Prime Minister

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    1. He’d get voted in in a heartbeat – not that you need to be voted in these days.

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  2. No sympathy for THAT guy. 👹

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    1. Good song though 😉

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  3. Iain, such a good story as I read along, but that last killer line, took it to the next level. Excellent!

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    1. Ah, thank you so much 🙂

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      1. You’re very welcome.

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  4. Somehow I don’t like this fellow very much. I hope he gets his come uppins’. Well done/

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  5. Dear Iain,

    He sounds like a self absorbed fellow.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. Someone’s got a high opinion of himself. I wonder if it’s merited.

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    1. I’m pretty sure he has a track record of ‘success’!

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  7. I hope he doesn’t sit down next to me!

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  8. I am cheering you on with this story, Iain.
    Of course I knew it was the Stones’ song when I read the last line, thus my smile and one raised eyebrow. On second reading “Goodbye Stranger” by Supertramp also started playing in my mind. 🙂

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    1. Thanks Bill, glad you appreciated it 🙂

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  9. I do not like him at all.

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    1. To be fair, he’s not looking to be liked 😉

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  10. No moss on that ‘Devil’ – great story Iain 🙂

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  11. We really make it too easy for him, don’t we? Great writing as usual, Iain.

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    1. Thanks so much, and yes we do!

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  12. good for him, he knows when time is up.:)

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  13. Good one. Leaves you wondering who/what he is exactly. But it’s a good wondering. 🙂

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  14. Oh, this one was GOOD. Definitely saw The Devil himself sitting there.

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  15. I can thank my dad and his loud stereo for my understanding of that reference. Great song and story.

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    1. Thank you, my dad left his mark with his music choices too!

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  16. Karma… wait for karma…

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    1. It hasn’t caught up with him yet…

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  17. A different sort of Pied Piper? Sounds like a good one to stay away from 🙂

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    1. Oh definitely steer clear!

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  18. Loved the Stones! I can guess his name (haha). Thanks for the song, had to listen to it again. I could just imagine your character’s smug grin as he moved on to create more chaos. Entertaining tale as usual, Iain! 🙂

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    1. Thanks Brenda, those that know the song definitely get more out of this story!

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  19. I don’t like him much, though you described him well.

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  20. Rolling Stones always work, though in this story the first thing that came to my mind was smooth operator.
    Nicely done.

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    1. Could apply equally 🙂

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  21. Oy vey and too true. I don’t think I like sneaky people much at all.

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  22. This fellow sounds dodgy. I hope karma gives him a kick somewhere. Great story.

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