IAIN KELLY

DUSK

The evening sun pours in through the west-facing window, painting your silhouette onto the wall. I recognise the familiar pose – the bowed head, chin resting on your hand, eyes turned to the side, pondering, thinking, battling with the words that will eventually pour themselves onto the screen in front of you.

They always come eventually, the words. In the meantime, we sit and wait. That’s the process. Your process. I have the patience to wait until they arrive, more so than you at times. It will be worth it, in the setting sun, to see your smile once more.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

‘The Barra Boy’ is available now, and is the perfect Christmas gift for the readers in your life! You can find all the information for getting a copy HERE.

Yesterday, I went to the largest bookstore in Scotland, Waterstones on Sauchiehall Street in Glasgow – a shop I have spent far too much time and money in over the years, where I have sat in the cafe with my laptop typing out first drafts and failed attempts, where I bought most of the English Lit. course books in my university days – and got to see my own book sitting on the table along side some of the best writers in Scotland. It was a happy day.

49 responses to “DUSK”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Wonderfully atmospheric, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  2. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Yes waiting is hard, but rewarding. Congratulations on Barra Boy

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Micheal

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Waiting for the words to come can be painful. Wonderfully expressed. So exciting to find your book in Waterstones. 😀 Congratulations!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks Rochelle. It is a pain, but worth it when it all comes together. It’s definitely something ticked off the bucket list for me, to see my book in that store in particular.

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  4. Dale Avatar

    Beautifully done, Iain. and how fantabulous to see your books on a shelf in a large bookstore! So happy for you. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Dale 🙂

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      1. Dale Avatar

        I’ll have to add it to my collection. Mind you, I am still behind on the “State” books!

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        They’re not going anywhere, so they’ll be around when you get to them 😉

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      3. Dale Avatar

        This is true! 😀

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  5. granonine Avatar

    I loved the quiet, caring support extended toward the writer. It’s what we all need, isn’t it?

    Many congratulations on your happy experience in the bookstore!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Linda, requiring that bit of space and understanding is under-rated in the writing experience. We just need to be left alone 🙂

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  6. Danny James Avatar

    Extremely well written. I felt I was right there.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Danny

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  7. Liz Young Avatar

    I have sat like that many a time. Congratulations on your book!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Liz, I hope the words have always come in the end for you!

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  8. floweroutoflife Avatar

    A wonderful and evocative description of the writing process.

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  9. msjadeli Avatar

    I’m happy they are together. Feels like a very loving relationship.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re most welcome 🙂

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  10. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I’m still waiting for my comment to come!

    Great that you were featured so prominently in Waterstones, my favourite shops!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, makes the whole ordeal worthwhile, if nothing else!

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  11. Bill Avatar

    A wonderful share, Iain. The contemplation of the story is probably something we all experience. I cannot imagine the pleasure of seeing your book like that. The wonderfulness continues. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Bill 🙂

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  12. plaridel Avatar

    when all’s said and done the waiting is well-worth it. congrats on new book. 🙂

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  13. creatingahome Avatar

    Lovely… is it the muse that is observing the writer.

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  14. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh this is lovely Iain. A great introspective piece. A moment of silence.

    Congratulations on Barra Boy!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! Hope your new book is going well too.

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      1. Laurie Bell Avatar

        It is! Fingers crossed it continues

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  15. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    It would be great if we all had someone so patient and understanding.

    Congratulations on seeing your book in Waterstones! That must be how a musician feels to hear their song on the radio for the first time.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It certainly feels like some sort of achievement – thanks!

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  16. subroto Avatar

    A touching story. Congratulations on Barra Boy and seeing it in your favourite bookstore.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  17. poetisatinta Avatar

    Beautifully written and congratulations 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  18. Dahlia Avatar

    Such a beautiful piece. Loved it. Congratulations on your book and all the very best

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  19. britcanwrites Avatar

    When all we can do is wait ….
    Congratulations on your book! It’s nice to get keepsake pics. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – yes, will be nice in years to come and look back at the pics!

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  20. starsinclayjars Avatar

    Patience is a virtue! How lovely.

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  21. Bernadette Braganza Avatar

    How lovely and picturesque 😍

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  22. DIYwriting Avatar
    DIYwriting

    I love that last line!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much 🙂

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