IAIN KELLY

SPIN CYCLE

She tapped her fingers on the worktop. If she could just figure out this ending. She picked up the cup. Empty. Time for a refill. The background noise abated as the spin cycle ended. The words were all there, it just wasn’t singing to her. This was the one, the one that would win her an agent, a publishing deal, an escape from the laundrette.

A fresh brew. Another load in the machine. Finger tapping. Another spin cycle beginning. Her mind whirred and spun and it came to her. There it was. Fingers tapping on the keyboard.

‘The End.’

Copyright Miles Rost

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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45 responses to “SPIN CYCLE”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    It’s our dreams that keep us facing into the wind. Nice one, Iain

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  2. Mason Bushell Avatar

    I loved the chaotic energy of the machines mirroring those in her brain, Well done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Perfect, glad you saw that parallel, cheers Mason

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  3. trentpmcd Avatar

    My mind is often like the spin cycle, but it never settles… 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like the calm that comes when a book draft is finally completed! Thanks Trent

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  4. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    What a wonderful moment that must have been.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It always is when you get to the end! Thanks Keith

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  5. granonine Avatar

    I’m sure the keyboard you mention is a computer keyboard, but I–being me :)–immediately pictured a piano keyboard, and her fingers tapping out a tune in rhythm with the washer. I can hear it in my head. I’m going to have to go play it!

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  6. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Sometimes finding the end of a story is just as hard as writing the last line.

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  7. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    I like a beat behind me when I write, wordless music providing a metronomic aid to my words. Still haven’t finished a book mind! Must be amazing

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I write to music too, definitely helps.

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  8. GHLearner Avatar

    A great scene, let’s hope her dreams are fulfilled. Maybe I should move my computer to the laundry room… 😯

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Anything is worth a try!

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  9. liz young Avatar
    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Keep dreaming!

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  10. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh that ongoing cycle… fingers crossed on this time! Nicely told. The circular story of life.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie

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  11. creatingahome Avatar

    The end indeed.
    Lovely story.

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  12. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    That breakthrough, ah-ha moment is always a great feeling.

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  13. msjadeli Avatar

    Good comparison of a writer’s mind with the noise and spinning cycles of the laundromat. Glad he pushed through the static.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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  14. David Stewart Avatar

    nice one. I wrote my first novel in a laundry room over a period of several months while waiting for the clothes. That’s a good feeling, writing “the end”
    -David

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Maybe laundry rooms are the place to go. It is a great feeling. Thanks.

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  15. plaridel Avatar

    this is a story i can truly relate. well done. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  16. poetisatinta Avatar

    Great Iain – our minds can be like machines just spinning constantly trying to achieve something 🙂

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  17. athling2001 Avatar

    Well done. Always nice when it comes like that.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It doesn’t happen often!

      Like

  18. Kimber Templin Avatar

    Good story! All of us writers can relate, huh? Hopefully, she will get published with this one. Maybe I should try writing in the laundry room?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’ll try anything at this stage!

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      1. Kimber Templin Avatar

        Right?? There are days where I do well to write my name!

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  19. Bill Avatar

    I had dismissed and almost forgot about the computer screen and coffee cup in the pic. As I read your story, Iain, I kept thinking “music and songs”. We need to write those too. And what kind of keyboard….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Casio! Thanks Bill.

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  20. britcanwrites Avatar

    I’m guessing the noise of the machines was a big help in getting that important ending. Nice one.

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  21. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    The writing is the easy part, isn’t it? And publishing is only the beginning of the real work. 😉 I hope her dreams are realized.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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