TO THE BEACH

The arrow pointed down the narrow alley, under the words To The Beach. Encumbered by bag and flip-flops, she pushed past holiday-makers and locals.

The crowd thinned until she found she was on her own. She heard the silence.

Another sign said To The Beach. She shrugged and pressed on.

And on.

Eventually the alley came to an end and she stepped out onto hot sand. She had the beach to herself. Exhausted, she did not notice that there was no sea on the horizon.

A hand grabbed her shoulder. She screamed.

‘We have been waiting for you,’ they said.

Copyright Rowena Curtin

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

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59 responses to “TO THE BEACH”

      1. You’re welcome

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  1. Actually made me jump! So not what I was expecting…

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  2. Full of suspense.

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  3. I think she’s had it.

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    1. It’s not a good sign, but you never know, maybe she has reached some sort of nirvana.

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  4. A lane that leads only to the sea of sand to entrap the unwary. Nicely written, Iain

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  5. Oooh the suspense! Well done!

    Wanted to let you know that unfortunately its going to take a little longer to leave a review of Barra-Barra Boy. I was enjoying the book and would have had it finished by now. We were traveling and so I brought it along and had it in my big bag of other books along with my wallet,etc. Someone broke into our car and grabbed my bag among other things. I hope they enjoy your book!!

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    1. Crikey, sorry to hear that. Hope you are okay. At least I can assure you they weren’t breaking in just to get my book! Hope you get a chance to finish it one day!

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      1. Thanks! We are okay and for that I am truly thankful! Just very aggravating and upsetting, but at least our vehicle wasn’t stolen. We had stopped at a Nature centet to sightsee and in less than 2 hours, someone busted out the passenger window and took whatever they could grab.
        I will finish your book, gotta knoe what happens! 😉 LOL about your book not being the reason they broke in. Maybe not yet, but once you become famous. 😊

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  6. That’s like some dreams I’ve had. The challenge is to sort out what the *hell* it means. Good storytelling, Iain!

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    1. Yes, not sure I had an idea in mind as I wrote – I’ll let the reader decide!

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  7. Uffda! The nightmare that lurks in the back of every independent woman’s mind.

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    1. No alleyway is safe. Thanks Liz

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      1. Thanks for understanding that and expressing so well!

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  8. Dear Iain,

    A beach with no sea. Ominous!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Ominous was the aim! Thanks Rochelle

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  9. Okay, so creepy ending, feels like scenes in a nightmare, walking, walking, walking and then think all is well only to find a trap set. I can hear the blood curdling scream she puts out!

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    1. Seems to be a nightmare many share!

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  10. Ooo. The mind boggles. No ocean is a bit rude. 😀

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    1. Ha, it’s the least you would expect from a beach!

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  11. she shouldn’t have gone there alone. too late now

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    1. A shame beaches are no longer a safe place!

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    2. A nightmare many women share. So very well written, Iain.

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  12. Okay, who is they? I jumped. Great tale!

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    1. Thank you – I’ll let you know if they get back in touch.

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  13. You gave me a fright! An intriguing tale, Iain.

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  14. Nope, no one interrupts my day at the beach. 😎
    The beach is calling today and I shall go.

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    1. Hope it works out okay for you! 😉

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  15. And into the twilight zone we go.

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    1. Could be a start of an episode!

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  16. Right, Iain. “Hearing the silence” is not necessarily isolation. I bet she screamed. Rightfully so. But, then what? 🙂

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    1. Then what indeed… Thanks Bill

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  17. Ooooooo I’m so intrigued! You hooked me here on very little. I love a mystery.

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  18. Oh! Well! That was certainly not the day at the beach she imagined.

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    1. Not what was planned at all. Thanks

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  19. I feel like they trapped her. Got her enticed with hopes of finding the beach.

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    1. Lured in for sure. Thanks

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  20. That is scary Iain, definitely room to expand on 🙂

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  21. What a nightmare. I was crossing that boundary with her. Thank you Iain.

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  22. Where’s the beach?? What is the beach? Who has been waiting? Top prose

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  23. Haha … I dread to know who ‘they’ were. She should’ve taken notice of the complete silence. It was coming … Nice one!

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  24. Intriguing! A lane that leads the unsuspecting and snares them. Nicely done! perhaps there is a sequel?

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