IAIN KELLY

MOTHER

‘Hey, sis. Who’s strangling the cat?’

‘I got her one for her birthday. Decorated it like her old one.’

‘Did she recognise it?’

‘She recognises less and less. She probably won’t recognise you.’

‘You remember how she used to play?’

‘Every night, while we were going to sleep.’

‘Bach, wasn’t it? Her favourite.’

‘The Chaconne from Sonata No. 2 in D minor.’

‘That’s the one.’

‘I put it on for her every night. Wish we’d stuck with our lessons.’

The old woman in the corner smiled at them, blankly. She picked up the violin. Her children stared as Bach’s music filled their hearts once more.

Copyright Amanda Forestwood

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

Click to go to YouTube and hear Bach’s The Chaconne from Sonata No. 2 in D minor.

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

‘The State Trilogy’ and ‘The Barra Boy’ available now. A chance this week to pop into some Waterstones bookstores around Glasgow and see The Barra Boy’ out in the world.

58 responses to “MOTHER”

  1. Sadje Avatar

    Awesome story

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sadje

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        My pleasure

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    Lovely, Iain, just lovely

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  3. authorfleurl Avatar

    I can relate to this 100%, working in aged care. Beautifully done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you , much appreciated

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  4. CGraith Avatar

    Music is truly a lifelong treasure! Nice story.

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  5. trentpmcd Avatar

    Great story. Something stay forever, and music is usually the last thing to go.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trent, much appreciated

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  6. Liz H Avatar

    Shared memories are the ones that stick with you & keep the ties going. Lovely!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Liz 🙂

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  7. elmowrites Avatar

    So lovely, if sad, and so real too. Music so often stays after other memories have gone, and you captured this beautifully. I’m glad the children could still feel that connection.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Incredible how the human mind works, and how music becomes so wound up in our memories. Thank you

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  8. msjadeli Avatar

    Nice opening line. Her family clearly loves her.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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  9. Rowena Avatar

    Beautiful story, Iain and very true to life. My grandmother was an international concert pianist and she ended up with dementia and it wasn;’t too bad at this point, but I remember her sitting down and trying to recall Moonlight Sonata which was really well below her pay grade and she played snatches of a range of very complex pieces trying to jog her memory.
    My mother was my grandmother’s pupil which is how my parents met. She now also has dementia but still plays well. She’s particularly fond of playing Happy Birthday which she plays with such a flourish. We had a singalong the other day as she played “I Still Call Australia Home” while my dad retreated to the far corner of the room in case he caught covid from the singing.
    Hope you’ve had a good week.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rowena, glad this story spoke to you and was realistic to life. Not something I have had to go through so far, but such a powerful and painful experience for those that do.

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  10. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    This is so sweet, it brought a tear to my eye.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dawn, much appreciated

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  11. Tracey at Whatsfordinnerdoc.com and TraceyDelaplainMD.com Avatar

    I’m not crying. Really beautiful story Iain.
    Well done on your publications.
    Tracey

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Tracey

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  12. Bill Avatar

    Excellent story, Iain. And relatable for so many. Memory is such an interesting thing, and too often a terrible loss.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      thanks Bill, endlessly fascinating how memory can work, and misbehave.

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      1. Bill Avatar

        The most unreliable of all narrators.

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  13. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    I recently saw a video of an elderly ballerina. When her care giver played songs she used to dance to, she would sway and gracefully move her arms as she did way back when. You captured that same feeling.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Alicia – music certainly is a kind of therapy.

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    2. GHLearner Avatar

      I saw that too and that was what came to mind immediately when I read the story.

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  14. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Such is the magic of music. A touching tale, Iain.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith

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  15. kittysverses Avatar

    Lovely story, Iain. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  16. britcanwrites Avatar

    Aw, that’s sweet! Nice one.

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  17. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh beautiful ! They say music might be one of the things you lose last. This brought a tear to the eye.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie, much appreciated

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  18. GHLearner Avatar

    You wrote this in a way that there is beauty in the sadness. How comforting to know that some of the things we love remain with us until the end.
    And the pictures and presentation of your book look great! Congrats.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much for both compliments 🙂

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  19. creatingahome Avatar

    Awww, some things the mind does not forget.
    Great story Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  20. plaridel Avatar

    i don’t know what to say, but what a touching story. well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  21. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    The music was still inside her. A very heartwarming story, Iain. I love it!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Brenda

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  22. poetisatinta Avatar

    Music is indeed magical lovely story 💞

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  23. jlennidorner Avatar

    It’s incredible that some patients with dementia can’t remember their own children, but the muscle memory of an instrument is no problem. A horrible but fascinating, but horrible and cruel, illness.

    It’s April, so I’m focused on the #AtoZChallenge.
    Proof of Existence, book two in my dark urban fantasy series, is out this month. Very exciting.

    J Lenni Dorner (he/him 👨🏽 or 🧑🏽 they/them) ~ Reference& Speculative Fiction Author, OperationAwesome6 Debut Author Interviewer, and Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It is a very cruel thing.

      Good luck with A to Z this year. I wish I could find the time – maybe back next year!

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  24. Liz Young Avatar

    Very moving – it’s incredible what gifts remain when all else vanishes.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  25. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Music is a rare real magic in our world.

    Congratulations in getting Barra Boy out in the world.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
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  27. Jennie Avatar

    Very touching!

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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