IAIN KELLY

INNER SELF

The strange patterns of a new world revealed.

The swirls and loops and whirls inside the red cabbage hypnotised him, the juicy segments of the tangerine promised cool succulence and the circular layers of the onion, bursting with that strong, sharp taste as they peeled away.

What else? He stared at his fingers and thumb. The promise of pulsing blood, bone, ligament, cartilage and tendon, all wrapped up so neatly.

Yes, he would like to see what that looked like if he set it free. He placed his hand flat on the chopping board.

Copyright Liz Young

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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51 responses to “INNER SELF”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Cleverly and chillingly written, Iain

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    I hope someone stops him! Horrifying ending. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

      Like

  3. joyroses13 Avatar

    Oooh gosh! No. I DON’T want to see that! LOL!😄

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Me neither, I got out before anything more happened! 🙂

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar

        😂😂 Smart idea!

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  4. Liz H Avatar

    I always suspected we were kin to beets. I’ll take his word for it, tho’.
    And yay for you on riding the Amazon wave. Hang ten & stay cool, Ian!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Liz, I’m not going to find out either!

      Liked by 1 person

  5. MrBinks Avatar
    MrBinks

    Woah, THAT took a turn. Brilliant! Loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much!

      Like

  6. Tracey at Whatsfordinnerdoc.com and TraceyDelaplainMD.com Avatar

    Wait, what!?! You whet my appetite and then left me waiting for the first cut.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I had to end it before it got too violent 😉

      Like

  7. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I felt odd ‘liking’ this! Please tell me he didn’t do it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I ran out of words to find out. A sequel perhaps?

      Liked by 1 person

  8. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Oh the strange places your mind goes!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And not in a good way sometimes! Thanks Janet, hope you are well 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    I almost went in this direction. That knife draws you in that way. My story probably wouldn’t have brought chills the way yours does.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Alicia – yeah, give me a picture of a knife and things don’t seem to end well!

      Like

  10. msjadeli Avatar

    Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please somebody stop him and get him some help. Scary story!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Curiosity can lead to some bad decisions…

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        Just as Ay and Bee in my story may be learning at this very moment 😉

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Very true! 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  11. granonine Avatar

    Gah! I guess the good thing is that he’s not going to disect someone else!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very true – a small silver lining!

      Liked by 1 person

  12. magickmermaid Avatar

    EEK! He might regret that later.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure he will! 😉

      Liked by 1 person

  13. athling2001 Avatar

    Chilling ending. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. plaridel Avatar

    he needs professional help for sure. hope it comes before it’s too late.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I wouldn’t get your hopes up!

      Liked by 1 person

  15. Tannille Avatar

    My fingers are still cringing!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It does make them itch a little…!

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  16. Liz Young Avatar

    He won’t last long if he simply gazes at the result!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m not sure he will last long no matter what he does! Thanks Liz

      Like

  17. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh dear
    This voice is soooo creepy. I think if his own hand doesn’t satiate his curiosity he’ll pick someone else… 👀

    Liked by 1 person

  18. britcanwrites Avatar

    Oh, dear … I hope he didn’t go through with ‘not’ setting it free… nice one.

    Liked by 1 person

  19. poetisatinta Avatar

    Ha – chilling, I want to know what happens! 😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  20. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    That shocked me. I said, out loud, “What happened?” Revenge of the fruits and vegetables.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad it had an affect!

      Liked by 1 person

  21. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Ewww, thats potentially pretty grim. Nicely done

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  22. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Hopefully, that was all in his mind (though our mind can take us to some pretty scary places) and it doesn’t go any further. Chilling ending, Iain!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Brenda 🙂

      Like

  23. authorfleurl Avatar

    This takes ‘finger food’ to the next level! Well done 😉

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, it certainly does 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. authorfleurl Avatar

        Sorry for the late reply…life has been full.

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