IAIN KELLY

COME HOME FOR CHRISTMAS

Bells rang out across the city, calling worshippers to service. She stumbled against the wire fence and rested herself there. Broken windows, graffiti, crumbling brickwork – all that was left of the home where she had grown up. She remembered again the nuns, the Father, the other children. She remembered the discipline, the beatings, the punishments. She picked up a stone from the ground and threw it with the last of her strength. It smashed through a pane. ‘Merry Christmas,’ she whispered and turned her back on the past. The shelter on St Benedict’s Street was serving a Christmas Day lunch. She shuffled away.

Copyright Rowena Curtin

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to all, wishing you good health and the company of loved ones over the festive period, and here’s to 2024!

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All We Cannot Leave Behind coming February 2024.

36 responses to “COME HOME FOR CHRISTMAS”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Warm and fed, at least for Christmas

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A temporary band aid, like so much of what is offered to those less fortunate.

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  2. Dale Avatar

    A sad reality for far too many. Nicely done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dale

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      1. Dale Avatar

        My pleasure!

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  3. James Pyles Avatar

    An all too common Christmas theme.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks James

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  4. granonine Avatar

    Dickensian theme. So many sad stories.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Linda

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  5. athling2001 Avatar

    At least she will be safe for Christmas. Well done.

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    Devastating in many ways. There are too many kids that have been institutionalized and barely scraping by as adults. Hoping they all find a warm place to stay and food over the holidays and beyond.

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  7. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Heartbreaking take Iain. Makes us all count our blessings.
    Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and all the best for 2024.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di, and Merry Christmas to you and yours too!

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        Thanks Iain.

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  8. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    I don’t blame her for breaking windows. Wonderfully written. Hope yours is a merry and warm Christmas.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle 🙂

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  9. CGraith Avatar
    CGraith

    A compelling scene…wish it had a happier ending, but I guess there’s that hot meal waiting!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s a start! Thank you.

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  10. Anita Avatar

    Sadness together with celebration.
    Contrast is sadly true for many. Well narrated.

    Heartiest wishes for Christmas.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita, and to you.

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    A sorrowful story with just a tinge of happiness as it ends.

    Wishing you the happiest Christmas ever, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, and same to you!

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  12. Liz Young Avatar

    Sad but true, unfortunately. Happy Christmas, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  13. Alana Mautone Avatar
    Alana Mautone

    A terrible childhood that she’s never been able to escape fully. There are too many who know that story too well. Alana ramblinwitham

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Alana

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  14. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    We were on the same track, Iain. A great story with a powerful message.

    Wishing you a very Merry Christmas and all the best in the new year.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks and the same to you and yours 🙂

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  15. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Wow… lot of emotion here. Beautiful yet sad piece. Hopefully she finds a place warm and safe soon

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie 🙂

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  16. GHLearner Avatar

    Leaving her past behind with that deed will do her good, maybe she’ll even get back on her feet. Powerful story. And happy holidays and all the best for you and your familiy too.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, and Merry Christmas to you 🙂

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  17. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Is there anything more mercurial than religion? It has been an excuse for far too many horrors. At the same time, it brings comfort and joy to so many. You’ve captured that dichotomy well here in only 100 words.

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  18. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    Oh wow, excellent Iain.

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