IAIN KELLY

THE LAND OF THE FREE

It had sat there for over a hundred years, a monument to those who had lit out on the Oregon Trail to settle the land and make their future.

This wagon hadn’t made it to the end. Had the people who came with it, or had they perished along the way from hunger, thirst, exhaustion, cholera, gunshots or rattlesnakes.

The natives were helpful to the travellers. Would they have been helpful if they knew what the future held for them?

The torch landed on the dry wood. Within minutes the wagon was only a burnt husk of what it had once been.

Like the country it represented.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

My new novel All We Cannot Leave Behind has arrived in paperback and is available to order now from all good booksellers in the UK. The eBook edition will be available from Feb 28th.

The State Trilogy and The Barra Boy also available now.

49 responses to “THE LAND OF THE FREE”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Individual heroism, collective sin

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  2. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    Well told, Iain. It must have taken a great amount of endurance and courage to travel into unknown territory. I doubt I could do it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I doubt many in the western world today could do such a thing, comfortable and coddled as we are.

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Well told piece of history.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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  4. James Pyles Avatar

    Yikes. Don’t burn down my country. I live here. 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I fear it may burn itself down over the coming months. Will any outcome in the election at the end of the year do anything to help heal it?

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      1. James Pyles Avatar

        Politics are certainly nuts, but while a lot of world focus is on the U.S., I don’t think we have exclusive rights to bad politicians and governments.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Very true, although that’s where the prompt led us this week.

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  5. Alana Mautone Avatar
    Alana Mautone

    I’m reading a book called “The Cost of Free Land” which contains harrowing accounts of what we did to the Indigenous peoples of what we now call the Dakotas. This was a story hardly ever told in the Westerns I remember from my youth. Alana ramblinwitham

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for commenting Alana

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  6. Sandra Avatar

    My childhood seems to consist of a litany of tales of wagon trains, and the perils and gory outcomes for those brave pioneers. No mention of course of the land-grab. Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra

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  7. granonine Avatar

    The pioneer flame still burns in the hearts of some, but they have to be careful or they’ll be seen as wacko extremists who need to go to re-education camps. One thing the early pioneers resisted was confinement. We’re losing the battle.

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  8. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Answer to your last question: I think the natives would have sent them packing if they knew what the “white invaders” had in store. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Alicia

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  9. Susanne Avatar
    Susanne

    Depressing but highly possible. We can only hope that common sense and decency prevail.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Fingers crossed, but I don’t see an easy way out of it for anyone.

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  10. Angela Avatar

    An apt description. -Angela

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  11. athling2001 Avatar

    Harsh and depressing but well done.

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  12. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Hundreds land on beaches near me hoping for a new future. Sadly a lot perish along the way. Is history repeating itself?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It always does. Thanks Keith

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  13. plaridel Avatar

    all’s well that ends well. but sometimes it doesn’t work that way. 😦

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  14. Liz Young Avatar

    Great write – and congratulations on the latest book.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Liz

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  15. Laurie Bell Avatar

    A lot said in only 100 words. What a hard life back then. Given all the wild weather events, we might find out if we can handle that kind of hardship.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      My guess is we won’t! Thanks Laurie

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  16. Margaret Avatar

    A sad ending for such a symbol. I like that you mentioned the help offered to the pioneers by the original inhabitants of the land. Another layer of tragedy there, as history shows. Great writing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Margaret

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  17. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    With all the dry foliage around there, you might be right.

    We do seem pretty intent on tearing ourselves apart.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Again and again.

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  18. msjadeli Avatar

    Well-written, but we’re still pioneers. Not ready to burn the wagon just yet.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      No idea where we are heading though! 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        There’s the rub 😉

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  19. msjadeli Avatar

    p.s. I think you spelled your title wrong. It’s Land of the FEE. ;)

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  20. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    The realities of history, where the desperate will do much that the comfortable will not deem reasonable, and where the consequences will be glorified, the the hardship forgotten well enough to turn the desperation of others into a sin, rather than a recognition of human kin.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

        Thank you, my friend! I do tend to wax poetic …

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  21. thisobscurelife Avatar

    Powerful ending. The legend of pioneers, Trail Blazers and rugged-individualism is a myth that still holds Americans back. A myth because it wasn’t easy, wasn’t always successful, and wasn’t usually individual. Hopefully, we may rise from the ashes once again.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – here’s hoping

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  22. R.M. Carlson Avatar

    As always, a breath of fresh air because you are a truth teller. We are certainly residing in the ashes, but can we be the phoenix that rises above them? I love your references to history.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Rosemary

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  23. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    I have a very good friend who is a librarian at a nearby University. Her ongoing assignment is to infuse more stories about Native Americans into her domain, as it were, so naturally it is a big part of our conversations, and of course I have also read harrowing tales. Everyone she read or listen to these stories, perhaps it will make them more humane.

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