IAIN KELLY

ABOVE THE FUNKY MUNKY

Dorothy Hubbard lived above the Funky Munky cafe. She sat at the window worrying about her cat, Mr. Tubbs, who she hadn’t seen since the previous evening.

Across the corridor lived Professor Benjamin, a dour man who kept to himself. He worked at the university in the Natural Sciences department.

On the floor above lived Mr. and Mrs. Holdensmythe. He lived in apartment three, she lived in apartment four. This way their marriage could continue amicably. As they argued, a droplet fell from the ceiling and turned Mr. Holdensmythe’s glass of water a dark red colour.

Shy Marigold Tweddleberry lived on the top floor. She peered out the peephole in her door, hoping to catch a glimpse of the handsome boy who had just moved in.

Across the hallway, Timothy watched the blood pool on the floorboards as it dripped from the slit in Mr. Tubbs’ throat. He was looking forward to Professor Benjamin’s class on feline biology. He liked to impress Professor Benjamin, that’s why he had moved into the apartments above the Funky Munky cafe.

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© TJ Paris – thanks for the prompt TJ.

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34 responses to “ABOVE THE FUNKY MUNKY”

  1. angietrafford Avatar

    A very clever little snapshot into the lives of people who live there. Enjoyable take 🙂

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Thanks so much, enjoyed writing it and imagining what would be going on behind the windows.

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  2. draliman Avatar

    I love the way it all links together via the various inhabitants. Very clever!

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed!

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  3. Priceless Joy Avatar

    OH no! Poor Mr. Tubbs! Sounds like he is going to be the specimen for the biology class about cats! Great story!

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Yes, I feel sorry for Mr. Tubbs too! Thanks for kind comment.

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  4. jademwong Avatar

    Love the connections between the characters! Very clever 🙂

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Thanks Jade, glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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  5. maria Avatar

    A story very cleverly woven, Iain! Although I have to say I’d think twice living in such place. XD

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Thanks Maria, don’t think I would want to live there either!

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      1. maria Avatar

        Haha! I figured! XD

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  6. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    I am jealous off the images you have delivered. Well done. Mike

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Very kind, thank you.

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  7. Ellespeth Avatar

    Oh!
    Ellespeth

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  8. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Great flash piece. I like the structure and it definitely drew me in. I would have read more! 🙂

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Thanks for reading and kind comment.

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  9. creatingahome Avatar

    I love this story very much and now I am slightly afraid for the professor.
    What would happen if they needed a human specimen?
    Oh dear!

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Yes, I get the feeling it’s not going to end well for the professor!

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  10. gravadee Avatar

    That was unexpected and scary. Phew! Poor kitty

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  11. Lynn Love Avatar

    Well, Timothy needs some help and it’s not with his natural sciences studies. Great little snapshots and a great way of building tension – that drop of red in the water was a super touch. Nicely done

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  12. rosemawrites Avatar

    this is one creatively weaved piece. poor cat. -_- great job!

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    1. iainthekid Avatar

      Thank you, I enjoyed writing this one, and endless possibilities to continue this tale!

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      1. rosemawrites Avatar

        yeah!!! you can continue it! 😀

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  13. Singledust Avatar

    i imagined a cross section of the building as i read your lines and never expected sweet Timothy to be guilty of trying to impress with such ferocity! awesome piece of fiction but is it really then….

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  14. swritings Avatar

    This was so clever! Really loved how you made all the connections… brilliant take! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! Much appreciated and glad you liked it.

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  15. Sonny Price Avatar

    Very interesting read! Quite murdermystery-esque. Poor cat though. :/

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sonny, yes had a feel of an Agatha Christie story to it when I wrote it!

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  16. jacquelineobyikocha Avatar

    Oh dear! Someone’s dissecting Mr. Tubbs.

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  17. Carolyn Page Avatar

    Wonderful to let the imagination run! I love a drama that includes lots of side-line dramas; such as this… each one a story on its own, really!
    Have you written for TV?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Carolyn, very kind comment. I haven’t written for TV but I do work in TV as an editor and studied film and TV, so I guess it comes through in my writing.

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  18. shreyathewriter Avatar

    Nominated u for the Versatile Blogger Award. Check my blog.

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  19. spykeyone Avatar

    How incredibly random. I used to be very involved with a cafe/bar.club called the Funky Munky in Camberwell, London. I almost bought it once too. Small world. I’m enjoying your writing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, it’s a small world after all. Thanks, enjoying yours too, giving me a good laugh 🙂

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